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shottaboy vs CataclyzM-i-C
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6 Barz No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting ~1~ Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-07-04 at 12:03 AM Must drop verse in 265 minutes after check in. |
CataclyzM-i-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 07:39 PM.
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sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 07:42 PM.
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Man The Only Thang ''Untouchable'' On You Is Ya COCK...
Wont Nobody Touch It Cause Of The 'HEAD-ROT'... ''S.T.D'z'' Is All U BRING... Nigguh U Couldnt Throw A Decent 'Punch' Even If I Let U Have The First SWING.. Man Your Record Is One To NIL... I'ma Change That By Killin U By Ya Own MIC (Ac)CORD n Tell The Cops It Was 'FREEWILL'... He Got A Picture Of A Chick On His AVATAR... Thats Juss To Hide The Fact Hes A Regular At The 'GAYBAR'... Dick Stays On Your Lips Like Suge With A CUBAN CIGAR... Only Time U Serve 'Punch' Is When U Workin Behind A BAR.... Only Thang 'POSITIVE' Bout This Kat Is The H.I.V... I'd Think Befo' Ya Spit Cause I Can Make Ur Worst Enemy The 'M.I.C'..!!! |
ayo time to rash on dis nigga....
ayo dis coward tryin see me, i think shotta lost his mind/ U cant flow, you skateboard n das da only way u stay on da grind U got plenty of battles under ur waste, but u aint poppin off ya guns-lead/ look at ur record nigga, shotta's barely makin it over 500 When i called out this battle, you no u shudda refused/ my flow treats u like a pipe 2 a crackhead, ur fuckin abused Its ridiculous, my rhymes are 2 sick to just-ify in brail/ u cudda spit a hard bar if you crashed into a muthafuckin safety rail Got luda in ur avy pretendin rhymes come outa ya mouth/ only thing u say to Mc's is "write a verse 4 me n then i'll satisfy u down south" ive heard better shyt from youngstaz dat play wit harry potter toyz/ every1 give you last respects, cuz i just shotta-boy ~1~ |
Upppppppppppppppin 4 Votes Ya'll.....!!!
Nice Verse, Pimpin... Good Luck On The Battle n Shit Uppin !!!!! |
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This was feedback posted for CataclyzM-i-C
checkin it out
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This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
this is my crew partnah so...heres my feedback..
multis-shotta punchez-cataclyzM-I-C structure-sshotta best line-*Dick Stays On Your Lips Like Suge With A CUBAN CIGAR...Dick Stays On Your Lips Like Suge With A CUBAN CIGAR... Only Time U Serve 'Punch' Is When U Workin Behind A BAR.... Only Time U Serve 'Punch' Is When U Workin Behind A BAR....* why?-I like tha Dick Stays On Your Lips Like Suge With A CUBAN CIGAR... Only Time U Serve 'Punch' Is When U Workin Behind A BAR....line..that was cool. overall vote if I could vote-shottaboy(thats why crews cant vote...2 biast..lol) |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
I Give This One To Shotta ... Opener was Funny ... Mic Ya Punches Were Pretty Simple ... Structure Was Ok But Flow Was Off In Parts ...; look at ur record nigga, shotta's barely makin it over 500 When i called out this battle, you no u shudda refused/ my flow treats u like a pipe 2 a crackhead, ur fuckin abused Ya First Line Here Was Stretched As Fuck ... Shotta Was A Lil More Creative With His Punches ... Hiv Punch Is A lil Played Though ... Ya Structure Still Needs Work ... But Ya Got this Battle Purely On Punches ... If MIC Had Betta punches Then He Dropped Then He Would OF Won This Coz Ya Structure ... Vote: Shottaboy |
Uppppin 4 Votes
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uppinnn......
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Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C
damn........diz nigga iz got dis one.. tha punchez was fukkin doped... i couldnt get wat shottaboy was sayin.. well i knew wat Cata was sayin hiz shyt was clear n simple.. iight return tha favour http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146777 thx PEEEEEECE Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
What U Mean Couldnt Understand What I Was Sayin?
What R You Illiterate? God Damn My Nigguh..... Aint Exactly Rocket Science, But I APPRECIATE THE GOD DAMN HONESTY..... Upppin |
cheya...uppin for more votes yall !
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
man dat was tight son u got him in this one with ur flow Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
sHoTTaBoY won dis wit better structure and sum nice metta's and decent pl'z like dis one dat made me laugh Dick Stays On Your Lips Like Suge With A CUBAN CIGAR... Only Time U Serve 'Punch' Is When U Workin Behind A BAR.... oh sheit dat wuz funny CataclyzM-i-C ur flow wuz nice but unfocused like u didnt hav a topic and stick wit it u were all over da place wit da sheit u wuz talking bout but good sheit ........ both of u keep battling |
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thas fuckin garbage....that shyt shudnt count dogg ! |
Yea I Agree..
That Pac Kid Is A Fuckin Idiot.. Upppin 4 More Votes..!!!!!!!!! |
Upppiiinn 4 REAL VOTES
None A This Half Ass Bullshit That Platinum Is Sayin... |
Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C
M-I-C got diss one his verse was more personal his punches hit n he had ok wordplay wit a nice flow Shotta u wordplay was kinda wierd in sum place it made no sense ''S.T.D'z'' Is All U BRING... Nigguh U Couldnt Throw A Decent 'Punch' Even If I Let U Have The First SWING.. ^^^coulda been better but ur structure messed up da flow but nice verse overall give a honest vote 2 da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle |
Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C
cata got dis 1.....it was close but in the end i think cata def had the better verse....much respect to both though it was some hott shyt but cata came harder wit the punches plus his flow and structure was much better....shotta ur shyt was a lil sloppy and u could use some work on ya vocab but still it was good shyt from both....no hate....return the favor iight.... |
Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C
give it 2 Cataclyz his struture was better so was da flow liked da wordplay he used in da 2nd line dat was tight he had a overall good verse Shotta ur structure fucked ya flow an in sum of ya line da wordplay was off but ya verse was ok believe u coulda did better give a honest vote on da battle in my sig i voted on ya battle Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. IP matches to Drag~on's. Vote DQ'ed |
cheya....uppinn 4 some votes !
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
sHoTTaBoY Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent...shit was kinda stretchy tho... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... sHoTTa stop wit tha fuckin caps dawg..jesus... CataclyzM-I-C Punches were good too not as hard as sHoTTaBoY's tho... Structure was good..yo shit was too strechy tho... Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
opener: both meta's: both multi's: cataclyzm-i-c structure: shottaboy punches: shottaboy personals: both closer: shottaboy vote: shottaboy no hate to any of ya, u got my vote shottaboy but i've seen u spit better then that Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
return the favor, livin legend vs snook, livin legend vs alphabetix, livin legend vs mc *maze*
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
hum alright battle puches-shotta stuture-catac mutis-shotta overall-shotta Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppiinn Ya;ll
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Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C
shottaboy ya flow was ok but u had alot of streched lines ya punches wasnt hard hitting some was ok but noting more no personal no multis no vocab creativeness was average and u probley could of did better what happen? cat ya flow was easy to follow punches was decent, last bar was a good ending, but u had some played punches as-well creativeness was average, multis none, personal i guess the last bar was a flip on u'r hes name... cat verse just edge it out in my eyes.... |
Upppiinnn Yall.................
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just to let yall know that homeboy changed his avy from ludacris to g unit...
Uppin ~1~ |
Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C
dis was coo' but easy... tho cataclyzmic is on my muthafukin nerves i always vote honest... shotta boy... whats going on kid...dat was bad...no hate...but it was structure was shot to shit as well as da flow... punches were not hittin to say the least...and i didnt like da personels...i know u could do better... cataclyzmic... good shit...u kept da focus on shotta wit an ok flow n ok punches...not dat seriouse but coo'...nice metas tho they should have been worded better...u streched some shit too.. but shottaboys verse made urs look a hole lot better overall better verse goes to cataclyzmic........ vot on my shit verses drastric measurez fuck cataclyzmic...fuck shottaboy...im out! peace |
ayo cat
12-14 lines default settings was really good? |
Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C
k cata took it only because he had much better punches, umm both of you need alot of elevation, better word choice, as well as better structure, shotta what the hellll is up wit ya structure? it was a lame battle, both of your punches were weak but cata i guess hit him harder if you wanna call it that, i didnt try in my last one and i think it was better than this, but what eva , both of you need more organized punches, only reason cata is gettin this one is cuz his structure is actually readable... o yea did i mention you need a mucccch better vocab , my suggestion read the dictionary, or something you could drop alot better with it no hate jus spitt'n as i read vote//CataclyzM-i-C *not by a long shot though |
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