Black America(Peep Dis)
 

Talkin

White Man:hey, those niggers are still listin to there rap music and wat not
White Man 2:ha,ha, they will never learn, will they
White Man:ha, they have no idea wat were doing to them
White Man 2:ha,I bet they dont even vote
(BOOM)
The Politician:now whos talkin

Verse 1
yea,
Black america, they say we stupid and we stay in dey pocket
there killin us, only if we come together we can stop it/1

1924, were bein treated so pourley, they discriminate
80 years later, the Black race they still tryin to eliminate/2

if we try to make it on our own we still fail
they make the money, we payin for bail
walk down to Clinton only a couple whites in jail
they got the best lawyers, Cochran can't keep us all out of cells/3

its such a constant struggle to make in this world cause im dark
this hatred is to deep now, for so long its been manafested in ma heart
we the only ones wit aids dyin, people look at the charts/4

they gettin cures, im sorry to say we not gettin healed
they havin debates in buisness, while we gettin killied/5

but we killin our selves, it aint rite, we need to stop
think about it, we smokin "Weed" while they smokin government tested Pot/6

Hook
Black America
we gotta save our selves
Black America
If we dont do it no one else
Black America
will

Think about it
Compton, Chicago, Bronx, getto is all crew
Hamptons, San Fran, They sippin in Malibu/1

please vote and do wat it takes to make a desicion
Break out, post bail, fight, wat ever it takes to get outa prison/2

Hook(3x and end)

thats the song

VOTE YALL

that was pretty good but u shouldve expanded it a lil more. it was kinda short. i thnk if u lenghtened it more it wouldve been better but its still good

"Cocrahn can't get us all out of jail"
I know that's what u meant, that was ill.. see, i like this piece because it actually matters, i'm black so i can relate in certain ways.. I don't care how far we've came, we still have a long way to go, ya feel me? But yo peice was very heart felt, nice flow, made a whole lot of sense.. some of the quotables was a clever way to get your point across.. keep it up man.. my only suggestion is to work on the wordplay, try to rhyme with more syllables n shit, but other wise this verse was tight, 1..

this was a dope drop..but check out the thread in interaction called..."if your black check this" i gave a long explanation to my thoughts on this topic...but this was a good drop man ..keep them coming..
pz

thanx yall, it means alot comin from blacks

15 views and 3 replies, c'mon

LIKED IT BUT.. (& yo please don't be offended)
I think the intro has a fallacy in it(the whole 'white men' against blaks voting thing.) 'White men', and by white I'm sure u mean racist/bigotted ones, don't care if blaks, or any minority groups for that matter, vote. See the 'white men' u speak of created a contemptuos little invention, under the guise of preventing voting attrition by any single state, called the ELECTORAL COLLEGE. With this single institution, 'they' ensured that , no matter who 'WE THE PEOPLE' vote 4, only persons that meet their status quo (ideally a WASP) would ever get elected. (JFK did slip thru the cracks though, but we all know what happened to him.) [cont on next post]

What's my point? Only that Voting is not the answer for blacks. Instead, I believe that only thru widespread Mastery(meaning the Learning and Application) of the Principles of True Wealth (namely ownership of CAPITAL and the MEANS TO PRODUCE CAPITAL) ,by blaks as a whole-not just a few supposed exceptions, can blaks ever truly hope to ELEVATE AS A PEOPLE. This would probably have to be inacted at the family level (meaning Parent w/ their kids) for it to work, just like the pakistanis and koreans. Anywho I leave it 2 u 2 theorize on that further, and maybe that could be what the next 2 verses are about--HOW 2 FIX THIS SHIT, How blaks (or any minority group can Elevate as a Whole.) Anyway I went brittanica and shit nuff sed. 1

DAMN GOOD MESSAGE! stay strong my brotha be strong i'm tellin you if corperate (white) heard that or read that! that would send a strong message back to any white home any where in the world! Unleash what you have to say and keep it real! Dats what's up! The Black House! yeah! One day my brotha one day!

THIS ISNT 4 hundred years ago

BILL COSBY SAID IT HIMSELF that Black people need to stop coming up with excuses

This peice is dumb

Stop having unprotected sex and the aids will stop
THERE IS NO CURE FOR AIDS SO WHAT FUCKIN CURE YOU TALKIN ABOUT

OH YEAH WE SMOKIN GOVERNEMNT TESTED POT
YEAH CANCER PATIENTS SMOKE THAT

I SMOKE THE REAL SHIT


WHITE S AND BLACKS EXIST IN PEACE NOW A DAYS

IF BLACK PEOPLE WANNA STAY OUT OF JAIL
STOP SELLING CRACK AND KILLING EACHOTHER


If you want i could make an equally disgusting peice about
WHITE AMERICA and what we could think

I THINK THIS POST WAS BULLSHIT

still dwelling on the fuckin past, were you alive then ,,,, NO

PEOPLE HAVE CHANGED THEIR WAYS YOU TWIT

20 years old and you think you have a cLUE TO WHAT IS REALLY HAPPENING\

I beleive its called reverse rasism, EIETHER WAY THIS PEICE SUCKED

HAVE A BAD DAY

damn yo, if some white dood made some shit like that, everyone would be like BOOOOOO, fuckin racist, yea theres racist white people, yea there racist black people, but u make the shit sound like fuckin every white dood is racist, or every white dood is rich, thas like me sayin ALL black people are poor, i bet muhfuckas wouldent b happy wit that shit, CUZ ITS NOT TRU, and that shit bout only black doods in jail? damn really last time i checked my cuzin is in prison and hes white....o but i guess he couldent get a good lawyer either...... so all i got to say bout this is... = /

Yo ppl r fuckin wit dis brotha 4 da wrong reasons....
It isnt 400years ago we know dat he knows dat but the fact of the matta is sum of dat shit still goes on and every black man or ethnic minority race anywher knows that. He aint sayin every white person is racist or tryin to imply but u hav 2 understand dat shit black ppl go through isnt neccesarily experienced by white people. If ur a white person in tha hood den dnt lie u shud b able to c wat goes on. If u dnt understand ne of y'all ur jus bein damn nieve...watch a film like boyz n tha hood, ice cube sayz it betta than i cud explain
"eitha they dnt know
they dnt wanna know
or they jus dnt giv a fuk bout tha hood" black ppl die evry day in th hood u aint hear shit, white 17yr old dies in ur lil suburb its national tv.

I baliev dat is a sensitive subject and a gd ting 2 rhyme bout, but y'll gotsta c wen rhyming bout tingz like dat prejudices and stereotypes of all races are gonna come up

LEARN HOW TO SPEEL
I DONT TAKE ADVICE FROM RETARDS

WHAT YOU SAID WAS SO JIBBERISH ITS NOT FUNNY.......


THIS PEICE SUCKED AND WHITE PEOPLE ARE MORE THE MINORITY NOW A DAYS

SO BOO HOO TOO YU

so take DIS AND SHUV IT UP DAT AZZ

DAMN, im glad ppl are respondin but jus cause ppl are disagrrein wit me dont mean ima hate, i agree wit everyone but fo' real tho

DIS WAS ONLY TO BLACK PPL SO WHITES I AM A RACIST!!!!!!!!!!!

yo well all i got to say is FUCK U faggot ass bitch

wack... elevation needed...

tight son... sum of dat shiit still go'in on, but we culd rise thru dat... look at da progress we made, many blac men wrk'n fo buissness 'n wut not... tru there r still a lot of kidz on da streetz 'n dey need to get dey head out da sand a recognize dat dere are oppertunitiez out there...feel mea.. i'm mixed dawg, 'n i've seen bad shiit from both sidez 'n i feel u on sum issuez... i kno i might sound lyke malcom x or sum shiit but it'z tru america needz to work on changing sum of it'z old wayz... but dat shiit meant a lot and made sense, by da way dunn be a hata dawg.... but overall da way u expressed ur feel'n 'n got da point accross wuz pretty good... shiit wuz tight!!

yeah dogg u rocked shit i felt dat one fer real thats sum mad skillz boy
YoUnGe_BuCk..........mouf of da south peace yall

ok.....you know what.....i feel that song a little bit.....but you don't KNOW SHIT!!!!! i'm fuckin white and they treat my uncle like he's Americas Most Wanted.....and i lived in the hood and got out after about 10 fuckin years.....and no......i know a lot of black people richer than me.....i mean fuck you get free college....damn.....cops hate me and my family.....you fuckin ignorant and don't know shit......i aint fuckin racist but that shit was fuckin stupid......none of it is true except for that 1924 shit......it kinda sounded like you a 2 Pac wanna be.....my uncle didn't get a good lawyer and they are accusing him of shit he didn't do......swat team hidin under a van and in bushes and dudes tellin him to buy drugs and he never touched it......he said i don't want shit so i'm goin......then cops and the swat team jump out of nowhere and arrested him when he just got off probation.....i just proved your fuckin dum ass wrong.....and my cousin has been in prison for ever....m sisters b/f was accused at driving underage once but the cop was just lying.....there are a lot of racist cops but they all hate everyone......and my city has the 2nd biggest fuckin police department in the U.S......my city is a hell hole and a death trap....that was a lot of bull shit you wrote.....so you can just kiss my big white ass you dum ignorant ass motha fucka! that shit about bein poor....haha......i was poor as fuck for a long ass time.....don't tell me that shit......while we make money and you payin for bail.....real funny cuz that aint true....and a lot of you fail all the time when you tryin......you have no fuckin desire to do anything cuz you don't fuckin take ADVANTAGE of college.....so get that shit out of here....and bitch i know a lot of people in jail that are white.....just fuckin battle me cuz that was wack ass shit.....all a bunch of bull shit....fuck you you racist fuck....i give this a 5.0 just for trying.....elevate

keep it

wack.......drops like this should be deleted n its herbs like you that give rv a bad wrap.
go wipe you ass with the paper you wrote this on cause its straight shit...

ayo u shouldnt be rascist to WHITE ppl im white and i understand yah veiws but man this was a good drop but u need to work on it a lil bit aiight nice verse but work on structure for abit aiight and elevate

yo, da only niggas hatin is white, lol

yeah

well if you want me to make a peice on white people and their veiws

AND I AINT EVEN ABOUT THAT< BUT SINCE YOU ARE RASCIST TOWARDW HIT PEOPLE YOU SCUMBAG

give me the word

but then i would be A RASCIST

YOU FUCKIN SUCK POLITICIAN AND THIS WAS WACKK

WANNA BATTLE FOR SLIPS SO YOU CAN NEVE POST ON HERE AGAIN

Haha..yall Fools Is Crazi If U Aint Black And U Dont Know Wat Black Pepl Go Through Then U Cant Say Shit About It Yall Had And Still Got It Good Everi Wea, Black Pepl Still Tryna Make It Good Piece Mayn U Spoke Ta Em Wasnt Shit Wrong With It Good Lookin Out Fa Black Pepl

SHUT THE FUCK UP

I HAVE MANY BLACK FRIENDS

FUCKIN PUSSY

WANNA BATTLE



PUSSY

I'ma have to agree...this drop was wack. I can see the message you were tryin to portray though...but I'm not gonna be like others and discourage you. You just need to work on structure, vocab, ryhme scheme, line consistency...well pretty much everything but don't get down...PM me if you need any help with anythin.'

Check mine. Link's in my sig. Thanks.

STRAIT UP QUIT TALKIN SHIT BITCH ASS COWARD
ACTIN TOUGH ON THA PC AINT GONNA GET U KNOW WEA

You are hella Racist man

DOnt care

dont like what you bitch ass had to say

dont like what i have to say

be a man and answer my challenge

FUCKIN PUSSY

Haha..cowards Talk Alot With No Heart Stop Actin Like A Female Gettin All Upset