shake-spear vs NoMercy
 

Battle Rules:

10 linez
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-10-04 at 01:41 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 01:42 AM.

k heres my verse:

After im threw with you you’ll be resting in the cafeteria/
Ill be runnin all over you like im a sick disgusting germ called bacteria/.
This mothafucka “shake-spear” wanna take me down to my knees/
But ill be the first to make him drop down and put his hands up and freeze/.
He’ll recognize me as the crazy one that runs all over him like a flock of flys/
Ill drop you so fast ill be the one to be saying my good-bye’s/.
Now ill be spitin hard vocab you’ll hafe to look them up in the dictionary/
Ill make you so pist at me ill make you fly yer pussy ass outta her like a faggot canary/.
My style of rap is unknown to you its like im an affection/
To you and how I do it so you better find something for yer own protection/.

shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 01:45 AM.

iight heres a lil somtin

he go around tellin poeple hes young. wut u want pitty?/
well its pitiful i can keystyle and beat u that proves u shitty/
no wordplay needed and multi's would destroy-u-fast/
how ya record trash dumbass u think u nice well boy-u-gased/
he know he gon lose so he bets shake'll win to earn-cash/
and i would throw ya rhyme book away but fuck it i burn-trash/
ull learn-fast, cause nomercy beatin me is ridiculous/
make u lick-ya-lips ,pucker up, and give my dick-a-kiss/
if dis kid-is-sick he da common cold im syphilis/
battlin me is like suicide u might as well have slit-ya-wrist/

i know its weak but he said no pre-writes so fuck it

lol good battle man now we would be uppin now

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Voted For: shake-spear

wow this shyt was a landslide EAZY !!!!!

Punches - Shake...dis nigga rashed on no mercy...have of mercys shyt aint even make sense...punches was weak

Personals - blahh...tie...nuttin really personal...i tihnk u both had like 1 a piece

Meta4s - blah...tie...both verses were pretty simple

Wordplay - Shake... he had minor wordplay in order to make some of his barz rhyme...pretty decent ish

Creativity - blahhh...like i sed b4 they was both pretty simple but Shake did his thing on that

Enjoyment - Shake...by far smashed no mercy no question...punches were harder n more direct n dat took da cake on this battle

"no wordplay needed and multi's would destroy-u-fast/
how ya record trash dumbass u think u nice well boy-u-gased/
he know he gon lose so he bets shake'll win to earn-cash/
and i would throw ya rhyme book away but fuck it i burn-trash"

^^ITS A WRAP...lmao

Vote - Shakespear....~1~



return da favor on da battle in my sig

Voted For: NoMercy

yo shakespear was better by far no telling what he will do next.

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can we get some honest votes i had way better wordplay by far man read the songs or dont vote

lol uppin for votes and i dont know how u got a vote but i guess ima leave it there even know it made no sence

Voted For: shake-spear

Aight Then....
Okay Battle...
Few Hard Hittin Punches From Both...

Ya'll Had Some Aight Structure So I Was Feelin Both The Melodies...

I Think Shake Had Better Metas n Had Good Usage Of Multies So He Gets My Vote....

P E A C E

Return The Favor....!!!

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^you cant vote on this battle were in the same crew

This was feedback posted for shake-spear
 

Ur shit always makes me laugh.. hah keep doin yo thing..

This was feedback posted for shake-spear
 

both were good nice shit it was okjst checking score

thanks uppin

Voted For: NoMercy

k i vote fo u cuz ur punchez and rhyme is better than his

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This was feedback posted for shake-spear
 

just feed back....i cant vote no-mercy in mah crew and shake-spare my boi...peep the sig lol k.o lol mah bad shake.....

but if i were to vote it would be shake b.c of word play and multis...... both punches were about the same along with personals...... no mercy not tryin to bad mouth ya i just saw it as he came harder....but good luck to both of u nice key styles....payce

yo uppin

Voted For: shake-spear

Im Votin For shake, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But shake Came A Lil Harder With It Tho

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Voted For: NoMercy

ehh, decent battle i guess =/

punches- N.M. (shake came way too simple)
personas- none =/
werdplay- N.M. (kinda simple tho)
vote- N.M.

N.M. try to use multi's more that'll make ye verse stand out and it will add to the flow.

Voted For: shake-spear

alright...i'm grading this on a curve..........and no mercy lowers the average...

he go around tellin poeple hes young. wut u want pitty?/
well its pitiful i can keystyle and beat u that proves u shitty/

decent punch/personal 6/10

no wordplay needed and multi's would destroy-u-fast/
how ya record trash dumbass u think u nice well boy-u-gased/

this was ok...nothin special...6/10

he know he gon lose so he bets shake'll win to earn-cash/
and i would throw ya rhyme book away but fuck it i burn-trash

pretty good...7/10


ull learn-fast, cause nomercy beatin me is ridiculous/
make u lick-ya-lips ,pucker up, and give my dick-a-kiss/

this was funny....8/10

if dis kid-is-sick he da common cold im syphilis/
battlin me is like suicide u might as well have slit-ya-wrist/

nice closer...9/10

over all..36/50

After im threw with you you’ll be resting in the cafeteria/
Ill be runnin all over you like im a sick disgusting germ called bacteria/.

simple and kind of amature, 4/10

This mothafucka “shake-spear” wanna take me down to my knees/
But ill be the first to make him drop down and put his hands up and freeze/.

same as before 4/10

He’ll recognize me as the crazy one that runs all over him like a flock of flys/
Ill drop you so fast ill be the one to be saying my good-bye’s/

flock of flies? never heard of such a thing......2/10

Now ill be spitin hard vocab you’ll hafe to look them up in the dictionary/
Ill make you so pist at me ill make you fly yer pussy ass outta her like a faggot canary/.

this was funny.....but not to your advantage....4/10


My style of rap is unknown to you its like im an affection/
To you and how I do it so you better find something for yer own protection/.

this was weak.....3/10


sorry no mercy, your getting better and better, you just need to start using some complexity and wordplay.....shake's didn't use much of it...but he didn't need to...his understanding of battling won this over easy....nice verse for bein keyed shake..

alright good vote thanks for the feedback but i dont understand this shit man im only 14 wordplay i got that i geuss you didnt look lol and ya it was a blind spit

This was feedback posted for shake-spear
 

Hotter and you killed his rhyme, he had no flow, and you showed your flow was better

"if dis kid-is-sick he da common cold im syphilis/
battlin me is like suicide u might as well have slit-ya-wrist/"

Hot line

Voted For: NoMercy

i think this was a pretty close match but no mercy jus pulled out on top. he had sum good vocab n a nice flow. he need jus a lil betta punchlines n he coulda wont it in a qwik min. but besides that he had sum good rhymes so my votes goes to no mercy

^thanks uppin

lol ok the votes are tied it should be ova by now but some votes were dq'd but thx anyways uppin

This was feedback posted for NoMercy
 

well well well...nomercy, should be more like"NoMc"... if you want some play'a just get at me...

uppin we need votes and keep them honost please....

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Voted For: NoMercy

NoMercy came harder in hsi verse but shake is a lil older so i give NoMercy credit but these were some dope verses for both tight battle and i can see but No didnt have stucture lol nether did shake o well not realy any need for stucture tell yer older:
punches: shake
vocab: No
wordplay: shake
metas: No
Multi's:No
flow: no need for this is next
opener: No
Closener: shake
vote and a lil better nomercy