MotiF vs Word processor
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 is ko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 03:25 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MoTiF has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 02:41 AM.

Word processor has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 02:46 AM.

alright-
goin into this battle, two things is prewritten
your versre and death,test in my skillz you get killed like a curious kitten*
this battle bout ta give you sum divine MOTIFvation
to help you cope wit this loss everyones anticipatin'
you stupid bitch, im a head of you like fuckin pre-fix
bitch, if you amputated limbs you couldn't DE-FEET this**
i aint no smooth lyricist i muderer you non-discretely
sever ya head but like ya punches wont finish tha job completely
your a fucking nothing to me, be on the health facts
on bottles of aquafina***
u fuckin geomtry pop-Quiz, battlein' you is talkin' "SQUARE BIZ"
like Teena****
Motif gets clapped and niggaz call him tha mummy
but Motif will never learn, so ima "let him burn" and tuck his tummy
(style switch) four line ryhmez
and mabe then voters will show him alittle sympathy
i own you TOBY, get that through you head or have a ephiphany
don't ever fuckin Question me, you have no authority
like slaves you OWNED in this battle , you prolly gone runaway from me*****
~his last hours (closer)~
like that 15yr old boy from flrodia you getting an unjust sentence
you've just been BURNT, now please leave tha board room you fuckin' APPERNTICE...



explanations-
* cley-shay curiousity killed tha cat
** double meaning think about it
*** aquafina has O% of every thing on tha health fact things
**** teena marie had a song called square biz, tha radio was playing old school music wen i wrote dis
*****lika runaway slave, a little multi
The closer-
in florida this 15yr old nigga got life in prison for accidently killing his 8 yr. old neighbor when wrestling wit her
and
instead of saying your fired i said your burnt, another double meaning

Just a Small child Knock him out if i Coughed..
....You Micro Bitch evan to Bill Gates ur Soft..
Drop bars and smash u like a fat kid out Bp..
Talk big for a recess kid u cant Beat-Me..
Understand u cant Stand from a 1 Man Band..
ur Body trembles if my Keys are near my Hand..
Dont come back for a fight u cant win..
Ur chance is 0 to none Like LK gettin with Men..

I tried sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hard

Voted For: Word processor

ima have to give this one to u homeboy...some of ya punches just stood out to me...like the defeet this one..i liked that...opener was ass becuz it was hella stretched..i wasnt really feelin ya closer either...

Motif...it seemed like u really didnt put forth a effort on this...opener i wasnt feelin dat...punches werent really hittin...i wasnt really feelin ya closer either...so i guess u should try more next time...

i took the time out to vote return the favor on my battle in frontlines agsint Empire...links mess up when i copy them so i didnt use one thank u

haha motif ima KO your bitch-ass, add you to my sigg

you got yo ass sooooooo whooped trying hard or not

Voted For: Word processor

Word processor -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

MoTiF -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

Just vote for him jeez i didnt evan try i forgot bout this

Voted For: MoTiF

Ok, Motif came with better punches and better structure. Word, your lines were stretched at times, and some of your lines didn't make any sense at all. But no hate, you started off pretty good, just your verse fell apart after a lil' bit. And on your finisher "you just got BURNT, so leave the boardroom you fuckin' apprentice" would've worked better had you said FIRED instead of BURNT, as that's what Donald Trump really says. But hey, maybe you saw an episode of the Apprentice that I didn't, I don't know. Your verse just could've took a little more effort...
Vote - Motif

Return the favor at the link in my sig, honest votes only...

you took my KO, dam you.lol
uppin

uppin...

uppin for sum fuckin votes

don't sleep on this shit

votes?

uppin

ya'll muthafuckas straight sleepin' on dis shit

votes...

vote on this battle ya'll i'll return tha favor

uppin muthafuckas

Voted For: MoTiF

LMAO Motif gets the vote short and sweet... better punches.. better flow and structure... word processer u better elevate before u go up against vets... so like i said motif takes it due to punches flow and structure..

Voted For: Word processor

aight, i think word got this, or tycoon, whatever this crazy kat changed his name too, lol, but yea, better flow to the brain cells, more content in his verse, an each line was right on point, solid drop, u got my vote...

motif ya flow was aight, u prolly should have added more, tycoon bought more to the table an it showed, no hate, just tellin it how i see it
return the fave, peace

Voted For: Word processor

tycoon better punches flow and vocab had a better structure and better disses and personals the defeat line was layed though still good though 7/10
motif good opener here rest fell off nice structure vocab and flow rest weak ender wack alot of men would fuck l.k if they was drunk!!lol hahah im so fucking funny still punches were not really there verse was too short a 5/10

Voted For: MoTiF

Holy shit.. This was wack.. Ive seen Motif drop way better then this before.. whatever though.. heres my breakdown..

Motif
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is decent.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. the bill gates one, and the lk with men were ur best.. no good personals..

Tycoon
structure is decent.. sometimes i didnt follow what u were doin.. flow fell off a little due to the inconsistency in the structure.. u had a few multis.. u attempted wordplay, but either it turned out played or just wack.. none of ur punches connected.. u hardly had any punches in the first place, and out of the ones u did have, only a few, and thats being generous, connected.. no good personals..

Overall
Tycoon had more multis.. neither had good personals.. Motif had the better structure.. the more stable flow.. better wordplay.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Motif gets my vote..

VOTE - MOTIF

This was feedback posted for Word processor
 

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Voted For: Word processor

Look, this was easy as fuck. MotiF, a lot of your lines were really short.. Too short to flow even.. You were seriously lacking in good punchlines.. Disses were very... eh... And your closer was an attempt at a joke.. But it was sort of played..

Tycoon, your shit wasnt the best, but I saw you had actual punches in there, it kinda flowed better then motif's but your structure was fucked.. Also that style switch thing was pretty gay.. If your gonna do that, theres no need to announce it.. Like when a guy is on a mic in a battle you dont hear him goin "Yo, style switch, Im now gonna do 4 line bars".. Know what I mean?

Anyway, Im just voting on this because its been open for way to long.. But my vote definatly has to go to Tycoon. No doubt.

Peace.