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Paramik vs Ice Pick
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14 Lines only No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting you check in first and spit first Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 09-07-04 at 11:51 PM Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in. |
well i will SEE YOU TONIGHT P
IM OFF TO WORK RIGHT NOW |
^yea yea yea
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And no verses for fun iight only 14 and if it exceeds your DQ'ed
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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 08:06 PM.
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Paramik has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 08:12 PM.
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Already this bitch is thin on his ice, the way this faggot skater sways……
Ice picks flow still couldn’t be graceful if the judges’ marks were A’s. And Gangsta’s breath stinks “on-ice”, just like his punches and his flow… Even if he washed his mouth with “Mentadent”, he still would No-show. This fucking herb’s got gas in his ass but it’s the wackness that he supplied. Knowing that this fags mostly likely to kill himself, than commit homicide. He says he give the punches for those days, that day he felt lucky, son. Considering that, the only days he had a punching spree, was only one. This kid is hardheaded, he fucking sucks, his cranium’s harder than a brick… Ice Pricks been here for “ice” ages yet his punches and disses never stick. Still fucking the penguins? This guy is all iced out, I’ll tell this guy to chill. This bastard made Nate Dogg proud, he finally found someone he call kill. Check in, I’ll be rummaging for Ices’ home, his location, and his house key. Ice Pick is his own address, watch him obey me cause he’s a SERVER IP. Ice pick initials are IP and the IP that shows in the corner is a server IP Mentadent= “meant to dent” meaning if he could be able to dent my rhymes he’ll still run away. |
P's battle success?-he-fails-at-this, so watch as Ice-derails-this-b1tch
INTESIFY EFFECT BEAT him so i think its safe to say your skills is shyt!! sayin you'll rip ICE is like sayin' broke people can afford-hummers ßά$ïć Ţђμğãήỗmίçź ???now ur confused like 1st graders multiplyin' wit four-numbers want tha truth???...ya skills is like fat-chicks...aint no one diggin'-ya rhymin' You wouldn't be hot in a volcano in a carribean-climate livin'-inside-it!! Pick???....i'm sicc-and-canivin', while u find dicks-to-your-likin' not on my level...you'd only be close to greatness if ya ass was sittin'-near-me yo P...think ya wordplay is on a high level? only if ya dictions- airy Bottom of the 9th P and imma throw the bat at you, watch my mood ‘swing’ and you ‘catch’ my attitude…. I'll rip u and remain casual….ill make u park in ur place and the ‘Board’ walk like monopoly Avenues... Paramik get struck with injuries.. Im the storm in a distant vision , Once my lyrical Onslaught hits you your verse will be left in submission, you came to this battle like a hurricane.. and blew your chances of winning |
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nice battle..
both came pretty nice.. i felt paramiks a lil' more, coz it wasnt as simple as ice picks and had good punches throughout.. punches- paramik (ice pick had some played ones) personals- paramik..name plays werdplay- paramik- ment ta dent flow- ice pick multis- ice pick vote- paramik nice battle.. well i just founds out i cant vote, coz of the post count thing.. leave a vote in- shottaboy vs. wrecker |
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Voted For: Paramik
good battle both of u..paramik nice flow and good punches, i liked wordplay in ur verse pretty tight ice pick- ur verse was good, iight punches, had some personals but the flow wasnt as good and it was harder to read And Gangsta’s breath stinks “on-ice”, just like his punches and his flow… Even if he washed his mouth with “Mentadent”, he still would No-show. ^best bar in paramiks verse, good wordplay and play on his name not on my level...you'd only be close to greatness if ya ass was sittin'-near-me yo P...think ya wordplay is on a high level? only if ya dictions- airy ^best bar in icepicks verse..good multis and punch overall paramik had the better verse..no hate to ice pick |
Voted For: Paramik
Paramik has this one!!!.... he had better flow and harder punches... i liked your lyrics too.... Ice Pick.... you had good flow and some nice punches ..... but paramik came harder rETURN THA FAVA!!!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Ice pick won this battle with his multies as usual. They pretty much destroyed Paramik. The actual lines themselves were stretched like a mofo tho. I dont usually like to vote on multies alone but the punches in this battle werent very desireable. but paramki's flow was not very original i've heard most o f the punches before but ur gettin better holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147476 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147861 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Paramik
Aight..nice verse to both Mc's hea...but my vote goes to Paramik tho... Paramik came good in this verse..nice rhymes..decent punches...came personal liked the structure of ur verse too... Ice Pick your verse was ok...nice punches...but (to me tho)..1 bar didn't rhyme tho...i ain't gonna say but u should kno..and ya structure lack'd... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Ice Pick
hey paramik arent u the one always tellin me how whack i m? dilluted mafuka!lmao any way its all in tha break down paramik... Already this bitch is thin on his ice, the way this faggot skater sways…… Ice picks flow still couldn’t be graceful if the judges’ marks were A’s. this was ok but didnt really like the word play... ice pick... P's battle success?-he-fails-at-this, so watch as Ice-derails-this-b1tch INTESIFY EFFECT BEAT him so i think its safe to say your skills is shyt!! felt more like a set up than a opener...but damn! intensify effect? paramik... And Gangsta’s breath stinks “on-ice”, just like his punches and his flow… Even if he washed his mouth with “Mentadent”, he still would No-show. its not good when u say a niggas a no show...then he shows up n eat u ice pick... sayin you'll rip ICE is like sayin' broke people can afford-hummers ßά$ïć Ţђμğãήỗmίçź ???now ur confused like 1st graders multiplyin' wit four-numbers hot but long...but hot paramik... This fucking herb’s got gas in his ass but it’s the wackness that he supplied. Knowing that this fags mostly likely to kill himself, than commit homicide. u gotta come hardda then that...i overstood what u was tryin to say but didnt like tha content... ice pick... want tha truth???...ya skills is like fat-chicks...aint no one diggin'-ya rhymin' You wouldn't be hot in a volcano in a carribean-climate livin'-inside-it!! Pick???....i'm sicc-and-canivin', while u find dicks-to-your-likin' das was up!........................ice pick dont get gased! paramik... He says he give the punches for those days, that day he felt lucky, son. Considering that, the only days he had a punching spree, was only one. whack..... ice pick... not on my level...you'd only be close to greatness if ya ass was sittin'-near-me yo P...think ya wordplay is on a high level? only if ya dictions- airy dat shit was funny... hot word play paramik... This kid is hardheaded, he fucking sucks, his cranium’s harder than a brick… Ice Pricks been here for “ice” ages yet his punches and disses never stick. nice flow hot wordplay on his name... ice pick... Bottom of the 9th P and imma throw the bat at you, watch my mood ‘swing’ and you ‘catch’ my attitude…. I'll rip u and remain casual….ill make u park in ur place and the ‘Board’ walk like monopoly Avenues... ok flow but nice wordplay paramik... Still fucking the penguins? This guy is all iced out, I’ll tell this guy to chill. This bastard made Nate Dogg proud, he finally found someone he call kill. what?........really whack...was really good... ice pick... Paramik get struck with injuries.. Im the storm in a distant vision , Once my lyrical Onslaught hits you your verse will be left in submission, you came to this battle like a hurricane.. and blew your chances of winning set up was coo' but da last line killed it!... paramik... Check in, I’ll be rummaging for Ices’ home, his location, and his house key. Ice Pick is his own address, watch him obey me cause he’s a SERVER IP. r u fuckin seriouse...wat a matter wit u...if dats a bar? its deffinitly not a closer... this battle was easy... i thought it would be better since paramik supposed to be da man n shit??? it was very disapointing ice ate u wit word play punches n content...paramiks flow was aight but dat aint gonna win it!... paramik needs a hug...lmao i got haze if u wanna elevate!lmao |
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Lyrical Onslought Was His Last Name I Think I Roasted Him But Thats Me Good Lookin On That Vote Typical |
i guess its good i brok it down like that...theres some shady votes in here!
dis is disgusting...three niggas smokin weed wit me said ice pick won!haha if only dat count... |
Voted For: Paramik
ok this was suppper close and i'm not playing favorites at all word choice//both structure//both word play//both meta's//both punches//paramik personals//ice so the last factor was the flow and paramiks was more on so my vote goes to paramik no hate to ice though ur drop was hot as hell vote//paramik Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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no doubt ice...u know i always give honest shit so dont lose...lol
paramik stop bein a bitch any nigga who checks my break down could see its an honest vote...jus cuz i dissed u dont think for a second dat i gotta fullfill some stupid need to fuck u over when u can do that on ur own... point blank...u gassed homie...get over urself... dont question my vote again u bitch! jus like i didnt question ur bullshit vote but wit all da bullshit votes u acceptin: i'll kno better next time |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
damn... i looked at this battle, and from ice pick's past, i was swayed towards Paramik cuz i used to think he was terrible. but ice pick proved me wrong and gets tha win... Ice had better punchlines in this one and i liked his flow even tho it was kinda shakey.... because it would sound raw if you was battlin live, ya know... his personals about Intensity effect was good too, that was a good line. big ups for elevatin ice... v/ICEPICK Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Ice Pick
Aight, This Was REAL Close.. Both Dropped Nice Verses... Paramik Had The Better Open But Kinda Fell Off 2wards The Last Bar, An The Finisher Is Always Important, But Paramik.. Ya Verse Was Nice, Tight Metas n Okay Punches, Couldda Hit Harder Personals, But Nice Drop An NO Hate... Ice Ya Flow Was Right On Point Nice Mixture Of Wordplay Multies An Punches... More Complex Verse, Paramik I Know U Can Do Better, But Both Verses Were Still Tight As Hell... Keep Em Comin Ya'll P E A C E |
Voted For: Paramik
i gotta go with this verse ice pick is good this was a tight battle realy it was by alot it was one of the best ive seen here in rv but still paramik took it: punches:icepick vocab: paramik metas: paramik multi's: icepick opener: paramik closner: paramik vote and more injoyed paramik :) good battle:laugh: Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ice pick you pussy ass bitch! gets the votes dq'ed omg
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Voted For: Ice Pick
not very close- opener- IP structure- IP wordplay- IP vocab- Para punches-IP metas- none closer-IP ice pick had a better all-around verse, i think if paramik would have came wit better punches it could've been close return tha favor, in tha link in my sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Ok Yeah
His Last Line About Da Server Ip Was Gay But What Ever And I Aibt Play Off His Name I Played Off His Fraze Below His Name Peace More Explained Votes Please |
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