schema vs Empire
 

Battle Rules:

6 -10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Links
No Quotes

OK you wanted a rematch we both elevated lets get it good luck

Minimum posts to vote: 100

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schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 10:39 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 11:31 PM.

'lame' i reset my record change my 'name' and youll still get merked(1)
'Bastard' nice record like sand 'castles' its pretty but still dirt
'Bitch wanna front' i already 'whipped him once' and this is a flashback(1)
He not 'dope' it wouldnt be THE SHIT if his verse was 'wrote' in a asscrack
I 'checked' and ya wins aint got you 'respect' not even close yet(2)
Still a 'whore' at '20 and four' not one was even close to a vet(2)
Still 'greater' not a 'hater' ya elevation is like the 1st floor of a skyscraper(3)
You got a 'long' way to 'go ho' and ya crew starting to look like the Lakers(4)
Dont 'test me' you from 'S.C' home of SUCKA COWARDs
No 'flow' and ya shit 'blows' like ounces of white powder







1)i beat him already under my other name
2)he aint beat not 1 vet all his wins is from newbees nobody says hes nice with all them wins cuz he aint beat nobody
3)basically he say he elevated but like the first floor of a skyscaper he has a long way to go
4)his team the council used to be nice but they aint really crew battling nomore and they lost madd members so they was the best but not anymore just like the Lakers
5)his shit says hes from S.C=SUCKA COWARD
6)Blow is coke also white powder a little metaphore there

what the fuck made you decide that you was suddenly gutter
was it that baby bid you did for fuckin ya little brother?...
"damn im a boss...they love me down here at krispy kreme"
bitch cause you ate a "thousand" donuts it dont mean you a "g"...
it sure fucked ya little game up when you posted ya pic
if you so hard then whyd you run and change ya name like a bitch...
got back and even beat a couple vets so now ya ego's got worse
hate to break it to ya...we drop wack when we battlin herbs...
i aint even gotta drop you...ya ankles bout to collapse
i suggest you come at me with fists cause you aint got it with raps...



the shit in my verse is happenned a while back...if you dont understand whats going on then dont vote...basically hes fat and goofy looking and people clowned him real bad for it and he changed his name...

alot of whcked personals damn i merked you this is a k.o :laugh:

blah youre just talkin shit...shit/asscrack lines are played as hell and your sucka cowards line was the wackest thing ive ever seen...well see how the votes come in

Voted For: Empire

schema, no hard punches. You didn't diss 'em that hard with the fat jokes. You ha a lil bit of wordplay and it was decent, but as always Empire came crazy with wordplay. Every punch connects for Empire in this battle. Flow is on and all.

Voted For: Empire

i actuallty think schema won although your verse was tight and funny as hell , you might be slumpin' punches seem watered down now

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whats with the numbas? and ya nice shit empire you worked him honetly you elavated so good nice shit but i cant vote:(

Voted For: Empire

Vote: Empire

Empire: good structure, liked the metaphors especially the second line, good punches, good personals, not really any multi's but u still got my vote

Schema: good structure, had a few metas, not many multi's either, good punches, ok personal but i felt u could have a came a bit harder

no beef, both of ya did great

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Voted For: Empire

empire

punches- empire.
personals-empire
ohhhs empire

the second line was dope...

about sand castles being nice but still dirt... lol

goodlooks

v/ empire

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ima juss post feedback to view the polls........... but i think empire took this, he had sum decent punches and i didnt get 2 of schemas lines, so i just wont vote on it..... keep doin yall thing

Voted For: schema

what the fuck made you decide that you was suddenly gutter
was it that baby bid you did for fuckin ya little brother?...

decent opener.....kind of generic...7/10


damn im a boss...they love me down here at krispy kreme"
bitch cause you ate a "thousand" donuts it dont mean you a "g"...

funny ass line....i was laughin hard on that one...9/10

it sure fucked ya little game up when you posted ya pic
if you so hard then whyd you run and change ya name like a bitch...

good personal, nice word scheme with settin it up, 8/10

got back and even beat a couple vets so now ya ego's got worse
hate to break it to ya...we drop wack when we battlin herbs...

this was kind of filler to me.....5/10

i aint even gotta drop you...ya ankles bout to collapse
i suggest you come at me with fists cause you aint got it with raps...

decent diss, i give it a 7/10 over all = 36/50


'lame' i reset my record change my 'name' and youll still get merked(1)
'Bastard' nice record like sand 'castles' its pretty but still dirt

the first line was completely irrelevant to anything...what does your record or name have to do with beating him? absolutely nothing...but you picked up the couplet with a decent line at the end 6/10

'Bitch wanna front' i already 'whipped him once' and this is a flashback(1)
He not 'dope' it wouldnt be THE SHIT if his verse was 'wrote' in a asscrack

pretty funny, both lines were good.....9/10

I 'checked' and ya wins aint got you 'respect' not even close yet(2)
Still a 'whore' at '20 and four' not one was even close to a vet

if the dudes 20-4, you shouldn't be dissin his recordwithout showin evidence that he's just battled herbs....5/10

Still 'greater' not a 'hater' ya elevation is like the 1st floor of a skyscraper(3)
You got a 'long' way to 'go ho' and ya crew starting to look like the Lakers(4)

this was decent, wasn't feelin the lakers analogy...6/10

Dont 'test me' you from 'S.C' home of SUCKA COWARDs
No 'flow' and ya shit 'blows' like ounces of white powder

this was ok....i give it a 7/10

over all....33/50

as you can see it was a close one....but i gotta vote for schema....good battle

Voted For: Empire

schema
Yo Punches were hard and they landed (tha punches could've been a little hardr tho)..tha structure was ok...tha flow was aight..and tha wordplay was aight..

Empire
Yo punches were hard too and connected..tha flow was aight and almost fell a littler..structure was decent and didn't stretch out..and tha wordplay was aight..

Overall
My vote goes to Empire cause punches came a littler harder & landed..tha flow was good..and tha structure was good...

Voted For: Empire

I wasnt feelin either of ya flows.. its not that they were bad, they were nice, didnt fall off, all good n shit.. But im like.. multis.. so i dont judge on flow, i judge on content..

schema:
good shit... had madd personals.. lol.. nice wordplay where there was any -_-

Empire:
those 's were confusing.. i was lookin for wordplay innem, but they were just ya inners --__-- ... Nice punches though.. liked ya opener and the bar after that. verse was more enjoyable to read than schemas. n i felt it came a little harder..

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Voted For: Empire

empire okay first and second bar were fiya........them alone hit harder than schemas verse.....
punches: empire
personals:empire
multis: none really but schema hard 1
metas: empire

vote : empire

just b/c of his hard hitting punches.............in this battle he just came harder then u schema....no beef just how i saw it.....