e looch vs Empire
 

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You talking Shit ho time to be pimp slapped

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E Looch has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 07:11 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 08:34 PM.

I been 'watching' like amateur 'boxing' ya punches is weak
'Passed ya'll' yous a midget in 'basketball' im beyond ya reach
One 'thought' will cut ya 'SUNNING' 'short' like the month of December(1)
'Weak' and 'SHEEK' you dont resemble stop perpatraiting as LOXs members(2)
Fucking 'jerk' ya shit need 'work' like uncolored paintings
Cuz ya shit 'whacked' looks like a 'draft' with a few big words laced in(3)
Ya crew was getiing 'weaker' and 'weaker' till even ya 'leader' left(4)
No 'lie' you the illest 'alive'?..then my verse just beat you to death(5)







1)december has more darkness then any month he claims to be sunnung niggas im gonna stop that
2)his name is LOOCH theres already a LOOCH,SHEEK LOOCH of the L.O.X
3)he used big words but his shit dont make sense its corny as fuck
(4)L.I was his crews leader and he bounced on them
5)he says hes the illest alive guess hes dead now...lmao

u no threat like boistrous theives insult his friends make him dissapeer
if illnes is a gift than empire must have been born on leap year
ya thoughts have ceased an lost its flow like meditatin wit menopause
bubba sparx clone died on stage cuz they said stay till u get apllause
u never gonna be known u like Pac u gon die before u get Big*
he a soap opera actress his illest text was puttin my name in his sig
who else is 23 an has a curfew at 8 livin on the comput-er
to end his life all i do is pull the plug & disconnect his future
live in absence like abducted souls u got owned everyone knows
so u can take pride in ya loss like family stories of war heroes

all personals are a tru story
peep his pic if u dont believe me LMAO!
* pac died before biggie an empire is garbage so hes never gonna be heard on radio or nothin

AND THE LAST FUCKIN THING DO NOT FUCKIN VOTE IF U DONT UNDERSTAND PM ME FOR EXPLiNATIONS

OWNED

Voted For: E Looch

e looch way better punches...50/10 over the limit...
nice flow man...10/10
nice structure...10/10
nice personal...10/10

empire we aint coo you talk too much shit punches were hard but you had wack flow...
punchlines10/10
flow 0/10.;..
v/e looch...

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Voted For: E Looch

oh good shit, good shit.

empire- i gotta let you know that the punches you doin dont work as well when we gotta wait and read the explanations just to get it. they were weak this time and i think you know it. just keep elevatin and dont get pissed at me.....5/10

e looch- gawwwwwwwwwddddddd damn. this was nice cuz you fuckin owned him. personals was off the chain with the curfew and the bubba sparx, just fuckin hilarious. iono why the posts is 20 but if they have any sense its an automatic vote for you. holla........9.5/10 <----(closest score i ever gave compared to that was a 8.75)

v//e looch

empire dont get mad, he won i think u know it too. pz.

hell no i dont but whatever you think he did so i respect your vote but i dont respect ruff tuffs that was a hate vote all day

Voted For: Empire

now this was a tight tight tight battle....both had funny personals and punches....wordplay was good from both sides but empire gets this for usin better metaz...i mean he used objects which makes his shit more unusual = interessting and the "2pac biggie" stuff... mayne that ones has been played and over played....


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"ya thoughts have ceased an lost its flow like meditatin wit menopause
bubba sparx clone died on stage cuz they said stay till u get apllause"


^^^ what did that mean?..........the buba sprax line didnt make sense cos...to me it had nothing to do with empire....


well thats it all...my vote gose to empire.....


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why?
 

why does empire get owned then still talks shit it don't make sense

E-Looch easily took this shit. But if I vote he'll say shit abotu crew votes. But damn, E, you fuckin' murdered this kid. Gettin' D/r votes is the only way he'll even get votes. But damn, it was a massacre.

Empire, time to go reset yo record again. :thumbup:

also, you can't edit this post. But if you could and you do, I ain't gonna repeat myself. hoe

This was feedback posted for Empire
 

You got owned...

Voted For: E Looch

aight i got all your punches so it basically comes down to who was more original n who had better punches...
this was not a hard choice to be honest...complexity n better punches were in e looch's verse yet i thought you wee both going to come alot harder than this..looch great opener,i was like daymmm....8/10...easy...your personals were hard hitting to bout pulling the plug on his future.liked the way you worded most of your punches..empire your punches were ok nothin really hard hitting you jus did'nt get personal enough,i think it would help if you took "" that shit out cause it dont help ya flow considering how simple the wordplay was...you had a good verse but you seriously lacked in the complexity n punches area...honestly your punches did'nt come close to touching e looch personals bout his name in your sig,leap year,n the future 1...they werent touched by ya verse empire...but nice try...keep elevating ..no hate jus honest opinion here aight ...pc..goo battle

Voted For: E Looch

e looch owned him... both dropped good.. but e looch had it with better punches and personals... it seemed like empires punches were forced.. and empire ur structure was off.. bad E-looch had better flow.. and punches so thats why im voting looch

u stupid bitch i said dont vote if u dont get the punchs


and i will return all these votes when i get off work :thumbup:

FUCK YOU SLUT YOUR PUNCHES AINT ALL THAT FUNNY HOW A CREW WE HAVE BEEF WITH ALL THIER MEMBERS IS IN HERE VOTING FOR YOU :huh: :nono: :gfy:

empire stop fucking bitching.. cant u take a loss without crying.. then u when u take a win u start fucking braggin.. so just shut the fuck up for once.. e-looch merked u..

NUFF SAID

This was feedback posted for E Looch
 

jus' checkin' the score... lol... I always check out my members battles when I have the chance.

Voted For: E Looch

look no hate towards anyone but dan...looch you killed this kid......wow you got him...it was no comp....the only ill bar that empire had was his ending.......but yeah you got him becuase your personals were alot stronger....if empire would have actaully tried i thin he would have been a good challenge but.....elooch you just came alot better thsn empire

i have too many battles at once up ill get him next time :thumbup: