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Tha Phoenix vs X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 30 min Check in 60 min drop. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-11-04 at 12:50 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 12:52 PM.
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omg im battling a newb hus never battled on dis site be4//
im gonna give dis guy a lose to his record kick him out after i opend the door// there no point in him even makeing a rap up just 4 dis battle hes gonna lose will take this guy on a cruse// this guy is such a guy nigga even my grnny cud kick his ass hes like loving the guy in muse// so he trying to chalang me with his all shity ryhem n stuff// even his mum is ashamed of him when she went tho all the pain 4 dis guy all his friends call him a puff// hes thinks his so bluff but he has to show a fake pic// and hes trying to act hard but he nos he has no dick// im not even trying to hard coz theres rly no point i got this 1 hand down,down// hes nos his gonna lose hes sitting there watch his computer when i win him 5 votes down.down.down hes trying all hard not to frown,frown.frown// my 1st line just kicked his whole verses ass hes think o look im gonna kick his verse out// im gonna win this hes no it without even a little dout// i wud o tho his mam wud have put him up 4 adoption or kicked him out of da house// hes so anoying like tom and jerry and hes da gay mouse// look if he wins this i will be so suprised but i no it anit gonna happen so im gonna smile all day// i no ive won dis hes lines suck lyk hes dose to his bro dick coz there both GAY!!!!!// heres the end of my verse i wud lyk to say// i am a rapper hes is lame i rap all day he rapes all day// |
check<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>IN<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>MAN<>>>>>>>>>>>>>i anit got all day<>>>>>>>>>>>
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Checkity checkin in...............................
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You lost when you posted “I’ll battle” Lost wit one Verb
I quit doin drugs, but yo I’m still smoking this herb Two X’s but you missin one so you know you can’t get the triple I’ll be doin RV a favour when my punches leave you a cripple Ya punches are like pillows so you know you can’t get in this bout Why did Rabbit invite you to my crew, if it was my decision I’d kick you out Say your from Kellys pussy, I’ma respell it for you okay Replace the K with the y, the e with the o, the l with an r, and the s with an a Let me ask you a question, why do you drop crap when you spit Yeah you’re the most def…initly shit I’ma end this shit now cause I already whored you Let me give you a tip, get someone to write shit for you |
Tha Phoenix has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 01:52 PM.
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You lost when you posted “I’ll battle” Lost wit one Verb
I quit doin drugs, but yo I’m still smoking this herb Two X’s but you missin one so you know you can’t get the triple I’ll be doin RV a favour when my punches leave you a cripple Ya punches are like pillows so you know you can’t get in this bout Why did Rabbit invite you to my crew, if it was my decision I’d kick you out Say your from Kellys pussy, I’ma respell it for you okay Replace the K with the y, the e with the o, the l with an r, and the s with an a Let me ask you a question, why do you drop crap when you spit Yeah you’re the most def…initly shit Ya rhymes are wack played, like Banderas’s guitar Ya like like a rock, destined to neva go far Change ya name to stone cold, ya like WWF Fake acting, fake lines, wack and weak is what you rep I don’t ever want to meet you if you ever go to jail You’d probably drop the soap on purpose, and get free bail I’ma end this shit now cause I already whored you Let me give you a tip, get someone to write shit for you |
huh u posted to verses
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It was an accident, I didn't understand the new rules u see
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Uppin This Shit For Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Uppin for votes, Don't sleep on this shit people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Voted For: Tha Phoenix
Phoenix~ Shit man Phoenix come nice in this battle, flow was nice with a dope opener. Punches hit hard with decent personals also the close smashed it. Best bar~ Two X’s but you missin one so you know you can’t get the triple I’ll be doin RV a favour when my punches leave you a cripple ^^^Lol dope man Boy~ Come okay but I think you really stretched your barz you shouldn't underestimate newbs, open was ok but but predictable, some punches was ok but again the stretching killed the effectiveness. Close was bad sorry. Best Bar hes thinks his so bluff but he has to show a fake pic// and hes trying to act hard but he nos he has no dick// ^ Reason I picked this one was coz it flowed nice and hit with the desired effect... Vote ~ P |
Yo, peeps have looked at this 76 times, vote people!!
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Voted For: Tha Phoenix
umm okay...i aint even read all of boy verse verse y a fukk u spittin a album in a battle dogg lol who's gonna read all dat shit structure-phon...both of ya'll shit was fukked up but his was way betta opener-phon even tho it was type corny punchlines-phon creativity-phon multis-nun personals-nun finisher-phon..yo boy ya shit was terrible lol enjoyed-phon ofcourse...his verse was easier da read cuzz of his structure n he didn't need a 100 lines da get his point across |
Uppin for votes people!!!! Don't sleep on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yo Uppin this shit!!!!! DON'T SLEEP ON IT PEOPLE, COME ON, VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Yo Uppin This Shit, Don't Sleep On This People!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yo uppin this shit. damn you people sleep on some verses, goddamnit.
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This was feedback posted for Tha Phoenix
tha pheonix took this with good flow, punches, structure. right from the start you were good. not realy likin your endin tho, rhyming "you" with "you".
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why cant i vote ? i didnt have 20 posts when i posted my feedback. can i vote now tho ?
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Yo can you vote on this shit. Favours will be returned...
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Voted For: Tha Phoenix
yo, I feel Phoenix had a better verse. Although both were tight. Phoenix: Harder Punches, better wordplay, very creative at times. Naughty boy: you had good vocab and alright punches. Structure needs to be cleaned up, I wasnt feelin it. I also do not like self-glorifying lines which you had a few, one more thing, I dont like lines ppl write that are like "your gay" "you suck" "you rape ppl" "ill punch you" Cause its all fake, and you dont know anything about your opponent on here...use real punches and if you wanna say that stuff to them, be creative with it like in metas or somethin, ya know? Props to both tho, good verses, but this one in my opinion goes to Phoenix...peace... |
Please leave feed/vote with an honest explaination on my battle, as I have just done for you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...565909&posted=1 Thank you very much...peace...
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Uppin for votes, that would be three votes in about a month.... Great
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Yo, uppin this shit.............................................. ...................................
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This was feedback posted for Tha Phoenix
ayo This Nigga Stole His Lines Form Rapdawg Dont Vote Fo Him..
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Learn to spell ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Uppin
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Yo, there's two pages of me uppin, can u people vote on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Damn you people sleep on shit, UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Uppin............................................. ........
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Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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Uppin Yo Can U People Vote On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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You people have looked at this over 200 times, and 3 votes, vote on this shit. Fucking RV, uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Voted For: Tha Phoenix
Phoenix forever punches- Phoenix personals- neither multis- XBoy metas- Phoenix word play- Phoenix flow- Phoenix Phoenix overall better verse. Try some personals too. Also check your punches, WWF is the WWE now. Xboy ok verse but flow and rhymin wuz off. punches werent as hard as Phoenix. Phoenix: "You lost when you posted “I’ll battle” Lost wit one Verb I quit doin drugs, but yo I’m still smoking this herb" nice punch and word play. XBoy: "i wud o tho his mam wud have put him up 4 adoption or kicked him out of da house// hes so anoying like tom and jerry and hes da gay mouse//" ok punch. v/Phoenix |
Voted For: Tha Phoenix
omg im battling a newb hus never battled on dis site be4// im gonna give dis guy a lose to his record kick him out after i opend the door// there no point in him even makeing a rap up just 4 dis battle hes gonna lose will take this guy on a cruse// this guy is such a guy nigga even my grnny cud kick his ass hes like loving the guy in muse// ^^^^^^^^^ WTF DAT SHIT was weak mayne it didnt make sense homie~! punches wasnt hitting harder mayne so he trying to chalang me with his all shity ryhem n stuff// even his mum is ashamed of him when she went tho all the pain 4 dis guy all his friends call him a puff// hes thinks his so bluff but he has to show a fake pic// and hes trying to act hard but he nos he has no dick// im not even trying to hard coz theres rly no point i got this 1 hand down,down// ^^^^^^^^^^^^ Aight homie u got an flow but were da punches sho aint hittin mayne do i have to stop readin dis shit~! hes nos his gonna lose hes sitting there watch his computer when i win him 5 votes down.down.down hes trying all hard not to frown,frown.frown// my 1st line just kicked his whole verses ass hes think o look im gonna kick his verse out// im gonna win this hes no it without even a little dout// i wud o tho his mam wud have put him up 4 adoption or kicked him out of da house// hes so anoying like tom and jerry and hes da gay mouse// ^^^^^^^^^^^ Wtf u got flow homie but um.... i see u tryin to make a punch into an personal AIGHT IAM GOING TO STOP READIN DIS WACK VERSE LOL You lost when you posted “I’ll battle” Lost wit one Verb I quit doin drugs, but yo I’m still smoking this herb ^^^^^^^^^^ nice opener and punch Two X’s but you missin one so you know you can’t get the triple I’ll be doin RV a favour when my punches leave you a cripple Ya punches are like pillows so you know you can’t get in this bout Why did Rabbit invite you to my crew, if it was my decision I’d kick you out ^^^^^^^^^^^ Wat dats was an personal and a punch nice mayne (lol) Say your from Kellys pussy, I’ma respell it for you okay Replace the K with the y, the e with the o, the l with an r, and the s with an a Let me ask you a question, why do you drop crap when you spit Yeah you’re the most def…initly shit Ya rhymes are wack played, like Banderas’s guitar Ya like like a rock, destined to neva go far Change ya name to stone cold, ya like WWF Fake acting, fake lines, wack and weak is what you rep I don’t ever want to meet you if you ever go to jail You’d probably drop the soap on purpose, and get free bail I’ma end this shit now cause I already whored you Let me give you a tip, get someone to write shit for you ^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW I GOTS TO give dis to tha phoenix mayne becuz of harder punces and flow naughty mayne u thought u was going to win becuz of u wrote more (smh) naughty u need to work on yo punches dey were lacking and wack homie// but keep elevating u'll get betta but work on dem punches mayne v-tha phoenix becuz of harder punches and flow ~peace~ |
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