sHoTTaBoY vs Wrecker
 

Battle Rules:

2 Bars (6 Lines) Nice Short n Sweet Battle Cause I'm Bout To Work On A Callabo..
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-11-04 at 12:50 PM

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sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 12:51 PM.

Yo Before U Post I Fucked It Up
It Should Be 3 Bars (6 Lines) Aight?

Wrecker has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 12:56 PM.

I'm Spittin These Bars Before U Even Look Down To TYPE..
I'ma Leave You Buried 'Underground' Like Some 'Unsigned HYPE'..

Lets See How U Deal Wit The 'ART OF INVENTION'..
U Wouldnt Drop Somthin ''Cruel'' Even If U Had The 'INTENTION'

Ya Record States 0-0 So U A Battle VIRGIN...
Ask The Peoples There Was Only Ever Once Emcee EMEREGIN..!

lol, my records not 0-0..it's 4-1 (one loss from d.q. coz i didnt meet deadline..)

uppin' for votes..

My Bad, I FUUUUUCKED Up...

This Battles Gonna Be Garbage Now......

I Thought U Was Sumbody Else
Got U Confuzed Wit MC Wreck Or Watever...

THIS BATTLES POINTLESS NOW

Yo, Scratch This Battle Cause I Fucked It Up....

So Theres No Point People Votin...

DQ Me O Whatever Has Too Be Done, Juss REMOVE THE BATTLE

fuck it, let people vote, am not gonna waste a verse...

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

I'm Spittin These Bars Before U Even Look Down To TYPE..
I'ma Leave You Buried 'Underground' Like Some 'Unsigned HYPE'..
^^^^^
nice drop... punched hard, good metaphore

Lets See How U Deal Wit The 'ART OF INVENTION'..
U Wouldnt Drop Somthin ''Cruel'' Even If U Had The 'INTENTION'-nice also... best t2o lines in the whole battle

you get my vote on style alone but the last line killed it could have gott'n a better closer-no hate just feed back

lmao, please lets get some votes from people that actually win battles..

Man This Battle ShouldntEven Count
BUT FUCK IT...

If U Win U Win
Let The People Vote....

wtf??^^ wack d/r... ..

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Shit...this battle was tough to judge to. But Shottaboy came hard the whole time it seems. Wrecker kinda went away from comming hard at the middle of da rhyme. But both yaw was bringing da heat. But Shottaboy got this one. He had abit better structure to. But both yaw niggas had heat.

Return da favor and drop a honest vote!
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lol. .lol.

Uppppin.............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

man even you know you lost, this d/r is bs.. ..

Yo The PAC Vote Should Be DQ'ED, Thats Fa Sho...

That Guys A Fuckin IDIOT..!!

But Yea My Verse Was Better Than Yours, It Was Just Pointless Cause I FUCKED IT UP

Voted For: Wrecker

The punches and wordplay that Wrecker threw out there are indescribable:

DAAAAMN...


Flow ~ Wrecker
Wordplay ~ "Like bad water systems, I'mma break this dyke"... AWESOME line...
Punches ~ Hands down, not even close: Wrecker


Wrecker, you took this shit dawg...

Voted For: Wrecker

well now.... wrecker looks like a diamond in the dirt that aint been found... good spit homie!! lyke your style ..... shottaboy... i think you could have come harder, i think you underestimated wrecker

flow, multies, mettas, punches : wrecker
personals : shotta

vote...

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

clooooose
this is prolly a tie but since i need to pick one ima break it down
wrecker...
ur opener was whack
second bar was ok...third bar was coo' wit aight word play
didnt care much for da flow

shottaboy...wat up rasta
nice word play on the opener...second line was ok but might lose some people...i do the same thing...last bar was whack!
seriously, wat were u thinking?

shottaboys flow got him da win...u both did good but could do better especially in such a short battle
fuck shotta...fuck wrecker...im out
peace

whatever, flow in text, lol^

uppin'..drop your links wrecker will return the favour..

Voted For: Wrecker

PUNCHES=WRECKER
FLOW=SHOTT
STRUCTURE=SHOTT
PERSONALS=N/A
MULTIS=WRECKER

THIS WAS A OK BATTLE BUT I THINK WRECKER PULLED THIS OFF BY A LIL BIT SHOTT URS WAS KOO 2 BUT I LIKED WRECKERS....
WRECKER WORK ON YA STRUCTURE DONT HAVE IT ALL SPREAD OUT LIKE THAT

Voted For: Wrecker

I'm Spittin These Bars Before U Even Look Down To TYPE..
I'ma Leave You Buried 'Underground' Like Some 'Unsigned HYPE'..
nice opener 8/10

Lets See How U Deal Wit The 'ART OF INVENTION'..
U Wouldnt Drop Somthin ''Cruel'' Even If U Had The 'INTENTION'
lol nice nice 8/10

Ya Record States 0-0 So U A Battle VIRGIN...
Ask The Peoples There Was Only Ever Once Emcee EMEREGIN..!
nice closer mayun 8/10

total: 24/30

Battlin Me..It's Like Fucking Prostitutes, You're In To Loose |lose|
Am A Technician Coz I'll Break Ur Screws, N UR Like Payless..Coz U Can't Fill My Shoes..
nice way ta open ur verse 8/10



Like Bad Water Systems I'mma Break This Dyke, So Call Me A Slugger.Quick To Strike..
Must B Lefty Coz Yer Verses Never Right.N Like Bad Internet I'll Leave U Outta Site..
Ohh nice Punch 9/10

Always Blaze-Hits..Like A Surgeon Imma Give This Kid A Facelift..
Fuckin Up Bitches, Coz In This Battle, I'll Be Commin' On Top Like A Rapist..
lmfao nice nice 9/10

total: 26/30


Aight both was hot and it was a close battle but ima have to give it ta Wrecker cause hes got tha Punchlines down and his structure was easy to read.....


yall return an honost vote here please
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Voted For: Wrecker

I'm Spittin These Bars Before U Even Look Down To TYPE..
I'ma Leave You Buried 'Underground' Like Some 'Unsigned HYPE'..
decent..

Lets See How U Deal Wit The 'ART OF INVENTION'..
U Wouldnt Drop Somthin ''Cruel'' Even If U Had The 'INTENTION'
eeeh forced.... kinda weak....

Ya Record States 0-0 So U A Battle VIRGIN...
Ask The Peoples There Was Only Ever Once Emcee EMEREGIN..!
ending was weak as-well.....

4.0 u was lacking alot in this verse what happen i thought u was better.....

next....

Battlin Me..It's Like Fucking Prostitutes, You're In To Loose |lose|
Am A Technician Coz I'll Break Ur Screws, N UR Like Payless..Coz U Can't Fill My Shoes..
not a bad start...

Like Bad Water Systems I'mma Break This Dyke, So Call Me A Slugger.Quick To Strike..
Must B Lefty Coz Yer Verses Never Right.N Like Bad Internet I'll Leave U Outta Site..
preety good...

Always Blaze-Hits..Like A Surgeon Imma Give This Kid A Facelift..
Fuckin Up Bitches, Coz In This Battle, I'll Be Commin' On Top Like A Rapist..

nice ending......

more complex more harder punches, nice flow...

7.9 not a bad verse.... preety sick...