shottaboy vs * Word *
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Goodnight son.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-08-04 at 02:51 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

* Word * has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 02:22 PM.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 02:24 PM.

Spoke to Shotta on MSN & he's like 25.. thinks he's worthy
The fools like Tony Hawk.. he'll be on the board til' he's thirty
Kids always talking shit.. I'll punch him raw in the throat
Tho he'll just thank me after.. since his voice finally broke
& as for brain power.. he asked 'what's a link'.. he's a mess
The type of dumb shit that actually studies for a blood test
Wanted a crew battle.. he's happy to go toe to toe with me
But I'm quite worried.. 'cos Shotta's planning on playing footsie
& he still acts like a playa.. tho he'll never be really breeding
Only time he caused pert nipples is when his mom started breastfeeding

Fuck CHAV, I Got Rhymes That'll 'Dilute' Ya 'Peoples'...
No Messin Round, Gettin Str8 To The Point On Like A Churches 'STEEPLE'...

He 'Pre Writes' Lyrics n Calls Himself An EMCEE...
This British Fuck Would Be Better Off Sippin TEA...

Like London Bridge, One By One His Crew Gon 'FALL-DOWN'...
Lets Take It Too The BattleField n I Murderd Ya Boys So Who U Gon' Call-NOW...??

Nigguh You's A 'Fly Weight' n Ya Record STATES 2 Losses..
Make This The 3 In A Row Like 0's n Crosses..!!!!

Man, U Couldnt Drop A Hot Rhymes If I Gave U A Pen n Pad Too Write...
Its Over, You Got MURDERD n The Last '*WORD*' Is ''GOODNIGHT''...!!!


Fuck CHAV, I Got Rhymes That'll 'Dilute' Ya 'Peoples'...
^^ He Has A Diluted Peoples Pic As His MSN Display

Lets Take It Too The BattleField n I Murderd Ya Boys So Who U Gon' Call-NOW...??
^^^ He Said He Was Gon ''Call His Boys'' When He Talkin MAD SHIT On MSN

Its Over, You Got MURDERD n The Last '*WORD*' Is ''GOODNIGHT''...!!!
^^^ Him n His Crew Always Be Sayin ''GOODNITE''

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 

nice dro[p]s dawg... elevating nice, step it up some more that'll be coo

Upppppppppin In This Mother'Fuuuuuckerrrrrr...!!!!

Bwahahahahahahahaha!!

The Fuck U Laughin For?

Nigguh U Got MURDERD

U Know U Got Murderd Cause U Went n Blocked Me On MSN

Ya Elementary Rhymes Aint Nuthin...

Upppppppppppppin

Rofl.. murdered.

Your punches suck kiddo.

I wouldn't even call 'em punches.

Let's not discuss that tho.. hopefully some non-retards will vote.

HAHAHAH, An You'd Call What U Posted Punches?

Man BE SERIOUS.............

You Didnt Throw One Punch, An Ya Multies Were Sumthin A 10 Year Old Could Drop..

Bwahahahahaha!

Do you know what a punch is?

A 'punchline'.

Now re-read my verse idiot. And multies mean shit.. esp. when thats all your verse contains.

Leave it for votes man.

Voted For: * Word *

word merked him....beta flow, much beta punches n some clever original lines...liked...

Spoke to Shotta on MSN & he's like 25.. thinks he's worthy
The fools like Tony Hawk.. he'll be on the board til' he's thirty
Kids always talking shit.. I'll punch him raw in the throat
Tho he'll just thank me after.. since his voice finally broke
& as for brain power.. he asked 'what's a link'.. he's a mess
The type of dumb shit that actually studies for a blood test

^^^all of this...props nice verse...

v/word

Hahahahah

Lawd Jesus That Boy Actually Got A VOTE...!!
LMAOOO

Aight, Uppppin 4 More Votes

* waves *

Goodnight son.

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Vote: Shottaboy

Lyrics: tied
Multies: s
Personals:w
Wordplay:w
Flow:s
Structre:tied
Punches:s
OPening:w
Ending:s 9 breastfeedin on mums nipples been played out bredrin)

Overall: s very tite battle. Peace

Upppppin...!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

like i always say im voting fo u cuz i like tha flow

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: * Word *

aight this goes ta word lol...you actually dropped a verse this time...nice punches some connected,some ok wordplay overall much better verse than shottas...shotta ya verse was self glorifying ...not as much as your others but a couple lines were your punches did'nt connect at all......
overall better verse goes to word...

Voted For: * Word *

...

merk...

Word had it...

flow- Word
ohhs- word
punches- word..
creativity...

no hate shotta but this was mad one sided...
best line in the battle was Word first bar...


"Spoke to Shotta on MSN & he's like 25.. thinks he's worthy
The fools like Tony Hawk.. he'll be on the board til' he's thirty"

^ lmao at that... nice job...

LMAOOO
@
These bullshit votes

do u people even kow HIP HOP?

an i'm 17....
where'd 25 come from?
my flow had better structure, punches, metas an PERSONALS
stop ridin dick word....

it couldnt be more obivous your didin hard dick ro get votes
god damn

You dumb fuck.

You got one person voting for your flow.. when mine was better.

The other votes like a damn retard.

You say you got punches.. but you don't know wtf they are!!

Punches are punchlines idiot. Not 'looks like I'm gonna take your whole crew'.

The fuck is that? It's not funny. Nor creative.. nor original.

Fuck outta here with that bullshit.

You're lucky to have those two votes and you know it.

Quit swaying and just leave it be chump.

Upppppin....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

hummmm alright battle
hard to chose very close battle
my vote gose to shotta just hes had good puches rhymes
word hade good puches n turture but my vote gose to shotta just close battle guyz
peace out *+*ludacris*+*

Upppin

Voted For: * Word *

opener: word
meta's: shottaboy
multi's: shottaboy
structure: word
punches: both
personals: both
closer: word (by a fucking hair)

this was a very close battle but i was feeling words verse a bit more especially the opener and closer

no hate to any of u

vote: word

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Voted For: * Word *

* Word * -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

sHoTTaBoY -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..