Xponant vs *+*ludacris*+*
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

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*+*ludacris*+* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 03:30 PM.

check mon
 

check>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

steped up to the stage and went to this boy n slapped him silly then popped a "DISS"//
blow them shit out ya ass n holla back cause im the yung LUDACRIS//
Fuckin Fake Emcee I';ma SNIPE Him out//
Takin lyrical shots n got a scope to make sure i never miss in this 'BOUT'//
im the real mc around here hes just a gay wanker with loads tear//
coz i kicked his ass gave him bck all the disses he did even tho he had none i merked him easy//
this bitch cant get a girlhes so fucked up after i gave him dat black eye n a broken nose i won this peasy//
hes lyk a girl crying all da time he just lost all da talent he had i beat him easy with just 1 diss hes sitting there crying away//
making out to all his so called friends he cud beat me ny day//
but he rly nos i kick his nigga ass when he gose to bed he say to his mumm, mummy wud u buy me a dummy//
hes all feeling sick coz hes nos ive won i diss this git out and hes all feeling it in the tummy//
i got all my nigga bckstage just ready to kick this niggas face//

Xponant has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 03:49 PM.

I put out a challenge, hopin to get competition
but thats like a sponge, doesnt hit bak, no fun.

Ludacris u a wanna be i can tell it,
tryin to be great, but u arent gonna make it.

Takin a battle of kno one u kno is your name,
tryin to steal a man glory and a mans fame?

Do sometin original, New names a good start,
cuz wit out it all youll be beatin is shopping carts.

Heres your name: MC Shit,
catchphrase: I have no lyrics and my mom is my bitch

u act like a thug, trying to put up a show,
ludacris is a guy, u a girl, u say so?

Hes a computer nerd tryin to be kool
Since his cousin wuz his date dance at his school

This was fast just like a drive bye,
Now wave to the people, and Say Good bye.

peace

Since his cousin wuz his date at the dance at his school****


Takin a battle of kno one u kno is your name: Explanation- Ludacris means crazy, his name means crazy.

Voted For: *+*ludacris*+*

aight, aight.....

i got luv 4 luda n all (the real one) an u aint no luda! (jokes jokes)

naw for your first battle, it wasnt bad, wasnt bad at all, some nice wordplay, maybe u let ya self down with a couple of lines, but nice starter n good way to finish, u got my vote...!

return the favor ...!!!!

thanxies 4 the vote shotta stuill UPPIN >>>>>>>>>> AWAY

ya im crazy crazy in a good way im also mad but in da good way yer theres nothign wong with being crazy n mad(hyper)

man shotta u r at every battle i got. im still uppin**************

lol u got a problem with him or sum thig
ya still uppin this shit yo

Voted For: Xponant

Ight i think Xponant got this battle.. u both needa elevate but xponant got this battle no doubt.. yall got potential.. just work on it and elevate

Punches= Xponant.. he actually came with connecting punches and didnt come up wit any word that rhymes

Personals= Xponant.. he had 1 personal but thats better than none and ludacris had none..

Structure= Xponant.. just look at it urself..

Flow= Xponant..

Complexity= Ludacris.. only because i had to go huh? and wtf? all thru ur rap..


^^honest vote..

thats so fishy
y wud u put honest vote on it 4
we'd no that but its fishy now
i think there cheating on here some were

thanx for the vote. uppin************* No KO's for anybody which is koo. peace

also he wuz probably talkin bout my sig. vote honest or not at all. peace

uppin************************ come on people vote.

Voted For: Xponant

well inda weak for X on vocab but nun the less he won:
vocab:luda whitch is a wannabe
punches:X
metas:luda
multi's: X
opener: X
closener:X
v/Xponant
return the favour in anyone of my battles in my sig thanks peace

Voted For: *+*ludacris*+*

*+*ludacris*+* -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

Xponant -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

This was feedback posted for Xponant
 

jus a lil feed back both of ya need some work , xponant ur rhymes were cheesy, you coulda done a lot better... luda, well u just sorta rambled on ha but no hat , jus lettin u know

uppin********* come on close this since ludacris is banned for cheatin i want this done. add another loss to his 0-4 record. peace

Voted For: *+*ludacris*+*

... i didnt wanna give this one to luda because ya structure sucked man, imma tell ya plain and simple... no hate tho... but then i read X's verse and i had to vote for luda... first off in a text battle "competition" and "fun" dont really flow togeather, then the next line u rhymed it and it... not very creative man... then u tried to rhyme MC Shit with Bitch... dosent rhyme.... your closer u rhymed Bye with Bye... i got one word for ya hommie... ELEVATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that shit was wack to tha fullest... now this aint a hate vote im just tellin ya that u aint goin no were unless u elevate man big time.... luda takes this one with better flow, wordplay, punches, personals, metas (not many)... basicly all around, all luda needs improovment on is structure.... no hate X bu elevate man....

VOTE- LUDA

how X has 2 votes in this i dont think i can possibly know... no offence man but there is something wrong with the world if you win this shit...

This was feedback posted for *+*ludacris*+*
 

still wanns battle this ludacris wannabe.......................

Voted For: Xponant

aight, imma give this to Xponant.

Luda: Structure: Lines were stretched like mad. Flow Was Pretty Poor To. You df need to work on improving ya structure.

Xponant: Nice structure. Flow Was On Point. Punches Could Of Bin Betta Though. You Need To Work On Wordplay And Metas. Anyway, Good Verse.

Xponant: Betta Structure and flow

Vote: Xponant

Return Tha Vote

Voted For: *+*ludacris*+*

this was a pretty even match but i give dis one to ludacris
he had betta wordplay punches

Xponant some of urs was jus wack as hell didnt even rhyme but no hate

opener:luda
flow:luda
personals:Xponant
punches:nobody
closer:luda

Voted For: *+*ludacris*+*

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