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Ill-Grammatix vs sultan
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unlimited lines no biting all out assault no recycling no crew/hate/dick riding votes default time limit to check in; 30 minutes to post after Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-11-04 at 10:07 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
I'm going to eat... i'll accept after i get some grub and get some sleep... been at work all night... good luck yo!
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by the way... I'm in Iraq and it's 6 am here!
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Sultan has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 10:14 PM.
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It's time to dine...and I hope ya hungry//
Rhymes like "wild turkey suprise"....leavin guts rumbling like Bugs Bunny*// And niggaz say I rule lines like Tommy (Maddox)// Put the "Steal" to ya "ears" (Steelers)// Give ya a "package" (a lost)// Motivate ya ass to start running// I treat this shit like "Monopoly"// Cuz I "Shoot" niggaz off "Ladders", tryin' to elevate on my "property"**// This battle's locked up// I can't say if ya "pussy or an asshole"...either way, ya gettin "fucked"// And, ain't no way you can recover, dude// Cuz I'll leave a nigga in the "dark"....like the girl on 3LW***// U wanna be a "Rebel"....chillin', "Campin"// Until I "Nick" a piece of ya jaw....courtosy of my shinny, chrome "Cannon"// Sultan knows that his rhymes are brutal// U can tell by my opponent's name....I've been had his "Stamp-of-Approval"// And this shit came straight from my mental// I've packed your shit up....cuz there's new management at "Merk Central"// Explanations: *Bugs Bunny fed Taz "wild turkey suprise" (bombs in the shape of a turkey) on one of his cartoons. **The old boardgame "Shoots & Ladders". ***The first member to leave the group, 3LW, b/c other members said she was too "dark". |
Ill-Grammatix has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 01:08 AM.
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just look above me... that bullshyt that was dropped was just "in-sultan"
like old school R&B songs done again by Michael Bolton (lol) I'm hopin ya learn a lesson from this... ya steppin into my arena; ain't no way you disrespecting my crib I'm wrecking this kid; disect him from his av to his sig then put him on a "weight loss" plan for kids who thinking they "B.I.G." Original rhymes... and yo lines? they come a dime a dozen Ya lyrics ain't buzzin' cousin! Stop breaking the bank for nothin'! I'm crushing ya flow, crushing ya hopes, crushing ya dreams you just a textee with a rap career that's stuck in a screen It's gon' take more than just a mere noobie to do me You ain't "Scrappy" enough; I think you need to go and find "Shaggy and Scooby" and pray that "Velma" can come up with a hypothetical thoery cuz without that... there ain't no other way you gettin' near me *finish'm off* back that ass up or get clapped with the quickness death by Ill-Grammatix's ya fastest to seeing sickness I'll flip ya simplistic linguistics and leave you mentally twisted so that ya brain no longer knows that you existed acidic flows I spit at foes with hits thats crit-i-cal landing blows like Riddick Bowe while you crying "Quit it, yo!"... lmao No need for explanations but if ya need it i'll be more than happy to drop it on you...lol |
that line should read: death by Ill- Grammatix's ya fastes "route" to seeing sickness...
3rd bar... got an av and no sig (dissected it...lol)..."weight-loss" plan (not even a featherweight or lightweight yet) everything else should be easy to understand Good luck man... not a bad drop at all |
oh yeah...line one: bull shyt dropped... In-sultan = that's where it came from.. in Sultan...lol
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This was feedback posted for Sultan
nice drops, good elevation... brutal hits, didnt think ya had that in you...
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
Aight sultan: youve got potential... fix ya structure though man... Seriously, ya flow was there, but really hard to see.. And ya vocab is aight but you need to word ya shit better.. like i got it but i had to think n shit n it was kinda far fetched.. plus peeps always say the punches that need explainin are the weakest, unless they personal... Ill: LoL at ya opener and that scooby shit... and that "stuck in a screen" line was nice.. flow was good, then got better in the last stanza, at the cost of punches... But ya punches in the first paragraph were wreckin him, so its all good... liked ya closer.. Yo Ill, drop me a PM sometime.. gotta catch up one |
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haha... that guys cool.... |
no doubt... i'll holla... yeah, punches were harder in the beginning but homie did his thing, too... not bad for a kat i barely ever see post :thumbup:
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Thanx, man. Yo, tight drop. I appreciate the respect, man. Stay up.
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Voted For: Sultan
Aight, Sultan Hit Harder Punches n Had Some Nice Wordplay In My Opinnon, Used His Personals Alot Better... Ill Ya Had Some Aight Rhymes, Not As Good As I've Seen U Post But Still An Okay Drop.. Keep Em Comin Ya'll Return The Favor P E A C E |
Voted For: Sultan
decent battle i guess. sultan your verse would look alot better if ya took all the ()//"" < characters out of it..makes it easier to read, and helps on the enjoyment.. also, fix your rhyme scheme up, because it seems like theyre all over the place.. punches- sultan (some creative ones) personals- none, really.. werdplay- sultan. flow- tie. multis- ? vote- sultan.. decent battle. drop an honest vote here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148270 |
nice lil' battle sultan
one day we will battle you's my nigga |
uppin this.. let's get this thing closed out with some honest votes ppl
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Voted For: Sultan
Sultan -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out.. Ill G. -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho.. ill g. elevate more Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
Vote: ill Lyrics: ill Wordplay: sultan Originality: tied Opening: ill Ending: sultan Punches:ill Personals: neither Multies: neither really Flow: ill Overall: an aight battle but ill came stronger and less wit da "fuk,bitch suk a dik" type crap im gettin acustomed to seeing. Peace, return favour! |
This was feedback posted for Ill-Grammatix
Ill Gram (No Pun Intendid) ... Jus Checkin Out Sum Of Ya Shit ... Lookin Good ... Still ... lOl ...
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No multies?... ya might wanna read my verse again homie....lol
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Uppin for votes....let's get this thang ova with!!!
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
gramatix, your flow rolled off the tongue easier than the sultan's mommas pussy juice |
I can't stand stand fuck niggaz like u. Go back and attach yourself to the underbelly of ya momma's cunt...u bottom-feeder. And if u got something else to say....then battle me, motha-fucka!!! Other than that...we need some more of votes (from real rappers, not wanna-be puzzle niggaz).
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
It's time to dine...and I hope ya hungry// Rhymes like "wild turkey suprise"....leavin guts rumbling like Bugs Bunny*// And niggaz say I rule lines like Tommy (Maddox)// ^^^^^^^^^^^^ nice opener homie,,,,,,, nice punch too Put the "Steal" to ya "ears" (Steelers)// Give ya a "package" (a lost)// Motivate ya ass to start running// I treat this shit like "Monopoly"// Cuz I "Shoot" niggaz off "Ladders", tryin' to elevate on my "property"**// This battle's locked up// I can't say if ya "pussy or an asshole"...either way, ya gettin "fucked"// ^^^^^^^^^^^^ o aight mayne u had flow and punches ur gettin heated~! And, ain't no way you can recover, dude// Cuz I'll leave a nigga in the "dark"....like the girl on 3LW***// U wanna be a "Rebel"....chillin', "Campin"// Until I "Nick" a piece of ya jaw....courtosy of my shinny, chrome "Cannon"// Sultan knows that his rhymes are brutal// U can tell by my opponent's name....I've been had his "Stamp-of-Approval"// And this shit came straight from my mental// I've packed your shit up....cuz there's new management at "Merk Central"// ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ha ha ha nice closa and dem punches meta'z mayne (whoa) keep at it just look above me... that bullshyt that was dropped was just "in-sultan" like old school R&B songs done again by Michael Bolton (lol) ^^^^^^^^^^^ oooooooooooo nice opener mayne w/punch Original rhymes... and yo lines? they come a dime a dozen Ya lyrics ain't buzzin' cousin! Stop breaking the bank for nothin'! I'm crushing ya flow, crushing ya hopes, crushing ya dreams you just a textee with a rap career that's stuck in a screen It's gon' take more than just a mere noobie to do me You ain't "Scrappy" enough; I think you need to go and find "Shaggy and Scooby" and pray that "Velma" can come up with a hypothetical thoery cuz without that... there ain't no other way you gettin' near me ^^^^^^^^^^^ ha ha ha ha ha ha ha what! nice punches homie dats wayyyyyyyy harder mayne (fiya) keep at it lets read da closa back that ass up or get clapped with the quickness death by Ill-Grammatix's ya fastest to seeing sickness I'll flip ya simplistic linguistics and leave you mentally twisted so that ya brain no longer knows that you existed acidic flows I spit at foes with hits thats crit-i-cal landing blows like Riddick Bowe while you crying "Quit it, yo!"... lmao ^^^^^^^^^ nice closa da whole verse had some throwin punches mayne// nice i vote for ill grammatix cause he had me with da scooby line (lol) plus he had an lil personal and a punch sultan u had good verse homie u had punches throwin but i voted for G becuz he had da personal and a punch to go with it and plus dat scooby line (lol) v-Grammatix for personal and punches and dat scooby line (lol) |
Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
yo nice battle lil wins this 1 close battle tho lil had beter punches n per, met n all that hes won this 1 plz return da fav on 1 of my battlez in my sig pz out consider closed |
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