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.:SnoOk:. vs Livin Legend
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-09-04 at 12:59 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
.:SnoOk:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 12:21 AM.
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Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 12:30 AM.
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IIghtz itz on
Bytch i know your shyt iz doped but ima-try Tha reason iz i gotta get ma rhymez in Rv can u Justify? Nigga steppin into ma world, Bytch ima kill you fo-this This bytch is gay like when he gott it goin on wit his bro dat why he gotta show-his Tha boyz is like why tha fuck u got a chinese sized dick-for? Cause he dont give a shyt all he does iz pickz-whorez When dis bytch iz all pumped now itz up to tha Dick-Sizer Gurl cryin sayin BYTCH STOP ITZ TOO SMALL When i get on wit da gurlz they say now THATZ TALL This h0e is fuckin around with tha new boi illest But i got a record to get pumped thats why i gotta Fill This Hey boy this aint no mistake to check in but u was Takin-Long Why tha fuck you gotta get up on all them Shakin-Thongz? You cant get no pussy in real life Nigga im done fuckin with ur wife Im done with fuckin around with you Now you left with a big ass Flu |
yo dawg when are you gonn drop your verse??? hurr up wit tha shyt
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like 50 said is it a nightmare or a dream...put more 'x's on ya ass then the fucking magazine (xxl)
run around with a mask like i'm off of scream...leave ya blood in a container like it's whip cream i throw more punches then lennox lewis, this a first round knockout it's a damn shame everybody knows u a wannabe 50...trying to throw punchlines but u ain't bring ya "Game" i smack down niggas who wish for a fight...lyrics string u along throw u in the air like a kite to battle me u gonna need ya best verses...words subscribing u perscriptions like o.r. nurses heater leave ya body black like funeral herses...put a bounty on ya head the price of gotchi purses spin ya ass around like a ride at the circus...ya rhymes are like i.o.u's there just worthless u could be an oven and still not bring heat...run my lyrics at ya ass like i'm a football athlete unlike a priest u ain't got a prayer of beating me...i spit this off the top my head u just wrote your's recently now u can battle me i welcome another "vic-tim"...i don't choose the battles my lyrics are the ones who "pick-em" like d-block i carry two guns up...and hand out ass whoppins to ever who wants what u need to revaluate the situation if u think i'm joke...lyrics crumble ya career like 9/11 leave u up in smoke even if i was hung it wouldn't make me choke...the only way you'll come fresher then me is if ya a bar of soap desert eagle leave ya body bagged like dope...if ya wondering if i got doubts about losing this battle i say nope |
ma weak ass shyt! oh well uppin 4 votez!! UPPIN 4 VOTEZ!!!
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like 50 said is it a nightmare or a dream
put more 'x's on ya ass then the fucking magazine (xxl) run around with a mask like i'm off of scream leave ya blood in a container like it's whip cream i throw more punches then lennox lewis this a first round knockout it's a damn shame everybody knows u a wannabe 50 trying to throw punchlines but u ain't bring ya "Game" i smack down niggas who wish for a fight lyrics string u along throw u in the air like a kite to battle me u gonna need ya best verses words subscribing u perscriptions like o.r. nurses heater leave ya body black like funeral herses put a bounty on ya head the price of gotchi purses spin ya ass around like a ride at the circus ya rhymes are like i.o.u's there just worthless u could be an oven and still not bring heat run my lyrics at ya ass like i'm a football athlete unlike a priest u ain't got a prayer of beating me i spit this off the top my head u just wrote your's recently now u can battle me i welcome another "vic-tim" i don't choose the battles my lyrics are the ones who "pick-em" like d-block i carry two guns up and hand out ass whoppins to ever who wants what u need to revaluate the situation if u think i'm joke lyrics crumble ya career like 9/11 leave u up in smoke even if i was hung it wouldn't make me choke the only way you'll come fresher then me is if ya a bar of soap desert eagle leave ya body bagged like dope if ya wondering if i got doubts about losing this battle i say nope |
look at the corrected structure and not the messed up one
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Voted For: Livin Legend
Livin Legend -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was too stretchy... .:SnoOk:. -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Livin Legend
DO I HAVE TO EXPLAIN HELL NO~ LIVIN GOT DIS HANDS DOWN NO DOUBT PUNCHES FLOWIN AND FLOWZ FLOWIN NICE MAYNE SNOOK WORK ON DEM PUNCHES MAYNE ITS GOOD U CAME OUT AND TRIED MAYNE// U HAD GOOD FLOWZ AND PUNCHES BUT LIVIN CAME HARDER NO BEEF MAYNE ~PEACE~ RETURN AN FAV Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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why aint yall muh fuckaz postin shyt on hurr? uppin fo some voterz.......ya hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrd?
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Voted For: Livin Legend
this was battle wasnt that great, both of ya'll drop alot of played out punches, so im gonna decide this on flow and delivery, which i felt living legend did a little better, snook the dick jokes are so played and you talked about his penis for about 4 lines which kinda throws the reader off. vote -living legend return the favour even if i didnt vote for you. |
Voted For: .:SnoOk:.
This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to .......... I really like the flow to both verses there was a nice touch to LL flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, SNOOK had some GREAT line too i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick nice battle -Please return the favor on my battle I know its a lil weak but its ok Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Livin Legend
This was a close one but Livin Legend took this one. He overall had better flow, and vocab. It definately had more versatility, whereas Snook's verse basically focused on one topic... soo.... my vote goes to LL. |
This was feedback posted for .:SnoOk:.
just check'in polls nice to see u'r back at battling my old V.T fam...
holla N stay up... |
Voted For: .:SnoOk:.
weak battle but snook won by a second rhyming was kinda basic but he had a nice flow metas were kinda weak and punches didnt really hit livin had an aight verse but it didnt flow rhymes was aight metas barley there and punches didnt hit his first half of his verse was bout g-unit and he bit his frist line from 50 cent wich isnt a good line anyway |
Voted For: Livin Legend
yo dis was a alright battle but im goin to have to give dis one to Livin Legend cuz i think his punches hit harder and he had better structure, word play and flow Snook ur verse was iight but it didnt get my attention he had some alright punches and his structure was iight but u need to work on it some moe... Dis one goes to Livin Legend.....~1~ |
return da favor honest votes only and explain it.......~1~
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Voted For: Livin Legend
snook, ya verse was wack...sry, but you really need to elevate...livin legend, ya verse was better than his, but you still didnt come with too many creative punches or wordplay...both verses flowed ok, but as for punches, livin legend gets this vote...Both need to elevate however...1 |
Voted For: Livin Legend
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahaah... this battle was... WACK.... both of yall..... but one was wacker than the other............. Snook....- your shit was WACK to tha fullest... structure was messed up, even ya lines out goddamn.. u just ranted on and on and on and on about nothin... ya wordplay was bad, flow was horrible... rhyme scheme was bad, u had ZERO complexity... just horrible... not a punch u threw hit, personals the same way... overall i give u a 0.5/10 Livin- WACK... but not as wack... structure was horrible... couldnt even follow it, way to stretched FIX THAT... flow was hurt by the shit structure..... punches and shit were iffy but aight same with the personals.... complexity needs work and u need to be more creative... overall a 2/10... both of yalll..........ELEVATE LIKE SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VOTE- Livin |
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