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GangsStarShit 09-09-04 09:22 AM

sHoTTaBoY vs GangsStarShit
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Crappy Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 09:22 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 09-09-04 09:22 AM

GangsStarShit has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 09:22 AM.

Dirty Nigga 09-09-04 09:40 AM

Aight Yo Fuck It

This Battles FUCKED UP Once Again

Look At The Time He Has Too Post
I'ma Accept n Not Post MMy Verse Til The LAST MINUTE
Hahaha

System 09-09-04 09:41 AM

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 09:41 AM.

GangsStarShit 09-09-04 10:08 AM

U should never have accepted u jus signed ur death,
Like u stabbed urself wit a pen and signed in blood on the check,

All i hear is ya ramblin on about dick heads and dick riders,
But thats jus you i asked ur unofficial clique coz none really like-ya,

Siggin the gun where u apparently sHoTT a BoY,
U bout as real as that drawin please u only gOt A tOy,

8-1-9 posts but u still keep talkin like a newb,
1-0-1 in session but i reckon he'll cry and sue,

Don't make sense dawg fuck you get off my dick,
Ur styles wacker than abused kids u should put this bar in ur sig,

Jus a word of warning this battle jus part of the trick up my sleeve,
Coz i'm jus interest on the losses u'll rack after this...let's see,

Fuck it i got u in more ways than 1 bout 4-5 ways perhaps :thumbup:

Dirty Nigga 09-09-04 10:11 AM

Yo, Aight, This Ol' Dick Rider Wanna Holla Again, Look How Long The Time Limit Is?
Fuck Man, He Gon Pre Write Me A Whole Song n Shit, Fuck That Dick Rider, I'ma Go All Out Fa Sho...

Okay, Okay...

Yo, I'll Say Some Shit These People Wont Be Pleazed Wit Like You's A Cracker n HONKEY..!
Even If I Let This ''Little'' Fuck Put On My Size 12's He Still Couldnt ''STOMP-ME''..!

Man, I'm Tired Of This ''Dick Rider''...
He Had So Much 'Vet' Cock In His Mouth The Battle Was Evidentlly Gonna Be A ONE-SIDER..

He Seriouslly Thinks He Better Than Me!, But Naaw..He Juss ''Bends'' Over To get VOTES..
Claimin Hes ''Sick'' n A Better Emcee When He ''Spititn'' Cum n Tellin People Dick Is The ATIDOTE..!

Man, I've Mered U On Disses....
..U Just Keep Comin Back Claimin U Cant ''Live Without Me'' Like I'm Your ''MISSES''

He Claims He From The Street n When I Said ''Good Lookin''..
...He Replied With A Smile n Said ''Yo Whip Ya Dick Out n I'll Gets Too SUCKIN''...
This Nigguhz ''Ass'' n My ''TextStyles'' Are ''Finger Fuckin''...

I'ma Pass A 'Solid' On Your ''Steez'' So U Can Live Up Too The Name Of 'Gangstarr-SHIT'
I'ma Tell U Like I Tell Every 'Homo' The Ass Is An Entrance Hole Not An EXIIIT..
So I Advise U n Ya White Ass Not Too Run Round With ''Wanna Hit?'' Printed Right Across IT..
O, Another Thing, Clean Up The 'DROOL' Before U Spit...
Wouldnt Want These People To Think U Just Had A ''Eppelctic-FIT''..

See Man, Why Be So Hostile I'm Givin U Advice..
If U Dont Follow What I Say, You'll Be ''Doomed'' For Life, So May Aswell Just Take The Gun From Obie TRICE....!!! (Referring To Suicide An The Gun In His Obie Sig)

But Yo Back To Rhymes n He Thinks He Hittin Hard PUNCHES..
Ya So Elementary n U Couldnt 'Serve' Even At Ya Own ''School-Lunches''..

Maaan, Has Anybody Even Heard Of 'BRIXTON'..?
I Think u Need'a Go Play 'Gangstar' In Ya UnKnown Town n ''SHIT'' Some Bricks-Son..!
Man, U Talk Bout Me Self ''Glorifyin'' But I Gotta To Make Sure U Understand I Got A GUN...
So In Advance I'ma Warn Ya..Next Time U Wanna Talk Bullshit, Remeber TWO IS BETTER THAN ONE...!!!!

Dirty Nigga 09-09-04 10:18 AM

Upppppppppppppppppin

An U Aint Got ''SHIT'' Up Your Sleeve, U Just Hopin U Win This Battle..

I'd Say My Rhymes Was More Complex, But On The Real...

The Battle Aint Gon' Get Many Votes If Its 200 Posts

But Whatever Yo
Have It Your Way

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIIIINNNN

P e a c e

GangsStarShit 09-09-04 10:24 AM

More racist but u aint even gonn notice till i point it out for ya

Dirty Nigga 09-09-04 10:35 AM

More Racist?

Man Shut The Fuck Up....

Uppppin 4 Votes

GangsStarShit 09-09-04 11:14 AM

u shut up uppin this thread yet again.............

Sik Wit It 09-11-04 02:37 AM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

sHoTTaBoY
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

GangsStarShit
Punches were good too not as hard as sHoTTaBoY's tho...
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

Dirty Nigga 09-11-04 06:09 AM

Uppppiiiiin

Dirty Nigga 09-11-04 04:14 PM

Upppiiinnn

Barburyin 09-11-04 04:33 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

shotta killed it his rhymes were tighter n i think he had betta punches n he had a god ass flow so ima go wit shotta

Dirty Nigga 09-11-04 07:16 PM

Upppin...

CataclyzM-i-C 09-11-04 07:34 PM

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 
wow...some1 is wilin...that nigga gangstarr is garbageeeeeeee...lol jus thot i shud post my feedback cuz i can do dat...i dint actually read all of shottas verse cuz that shyt was ridiculously long but im guessin that gang got smashed lmao...pease niggaz...or shud i sed pease nigga and pease whiteboy !


















































im rich BEOTCH
























































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Dirty Nigga 09-12-04 01:45 PM

Upppiinnn Ya';ll...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

La Cosa Nostra 09-13-04 09:09 AM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

Aiight. Personally, I gotta say gss took the battle.. No hate just truth.

Shotta, You need to work a lot on your structure, Some of your lines syllable counts were so un-even I had trouble finding the rhyme. There were also some parts I didnt understand the punches in.

GSS, your structure was a hell of a lot better then shotta's.. Still had some slightly stretched lines. And some of your punches didnt connect.. But it was a lot easier to read, and the disses were easier to get.

Overall, pretty weak battle.. But GSS definatly took it.

GangsStarShit 09-13-04 10:07 AM

Finally proper votes hey herb i'm talkin to sHoTTa where u at...i see you rollin wit a few new dick lickers...have fun

Dirty Nigga 09-14-04 09:37 AM

Upin

plustwo 09-14-04 11:44 AM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

ok nice battle im gonna give it to gangstar cos it flowed better and was more enjoyable to read, shoTTa i liked your verse aswell but the lines were way over streched and way too long to read i got bored of reading it from the forst 6 line...

other than that i liked both of your verses... shoTTa had betta punches but gangstars hit the spot they were aimed in the right direction...

lemme know if you need some more explainin...

GangsStarShit 09-15-04 04:24 AM

/\.

Dirty Nigga 09-15-04 08:52 AM

Upiiiin

GangsStarShit 09-15-04 08:58 AM

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Dirty Nigga 09-15-04 07:25 PM

upin

drop a link n we'll return the favor

p e a c e

Dirty Nigga 09-16-04 11:04 AM

Upin

Dirty Nigga 09-16-04 07:47 PM

Upin



























Leave A Link n I'll Return The Favor
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Kawn Flixx 09-16-04 08:30 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

hmm sorta weak battle
ps. i hate unlimited line battles

structure was a bit off for both

flow was D-thug's
but flow means nothin without punches

remember that

shotta had punches
and wordplay and THAT wins battles

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Dirty Nigga 09-17-04 07:00 AM

Upin Ya'll...

Dirty Nigga 09-17-04 05:39 PM

upin

Dirty Nigga 09-19-04 12:44 PM

upin..

Dirty Nigga 09-20-04 09:48 AM

Upin....

Dirty Nigga 09-21-04 07:06 PM

upin.......................

lil C.A.L.I 09-21-04 07:34 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

k close battle to both of u but shotta gots this one because of his punches but d-thug u need to elavate and practice on your lines cause i didnt get your flow but shotta u got this cuz of your punches and your structure good battle to both of u shotta u need a lil practice ok man

Dirty Nigga 09-22-04 06:48 AM

Upin................

Dirty Nigga 09-22-04 05:18 PM

Upin........................

Ice Pick 09-22-04 06:11 PM

This was feedback posted for GangsStarShit
 
This battle was one sided

i aint gonna vote or anything

but THUG murdered you,

Shotta i didnt like your closer

Thug got this hands down

Dirty Nigga 09-23-04 07:26 AM

Upin.............................................

Dirty Nigga 09-24-04 08:10 AM

Upin...............

Reflect 09-24-04 11:59 AM

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 
nice shotta, uppin for my bot shotta !


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