Trooper vs The Kid P-Dizzle
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 Is Ko


Nuff Said

u called me out~~

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The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 08:24 PM.

I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...

I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...

This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food...

Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime...

(His stage name is Jimmy Pocketz and he's from Detroit "The D". That's all I need to explain...)

Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 01:11 AM.

I didnt hit space bar on the 3rd Bar

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

trooper- ummm those punches was weak as fuck. looks like you ran out of similies and diseases and famous people to talk about. switch you style up, its become boring and weak. the simlies and metas werent good at all, thats all i can say....4/10
p-dizzle: ya shit was iight i mean i expected you to come a lil bit harder. flow was off, the wordplay/personal on his aim was iight but not the shit. punches other than that were dope tho so good job mostly.....7/10

v//the kid p-dizzle

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haha that is the funniest shit ever , you merked him ... I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...

^that is to funny

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions

I took this as you were implying like someone with complete paralysis...and that is rare in most spinal injuries...because there are so many different injuries....so i give it a 6/10

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's

why was shyne in quotes? you didn't take that anywhere, you might as well have said shine...the bottom line was ok....7/10

Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech

this was pretty clever, i give it an 8/10

Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals

this had me laughin, kind of a played concept, but you were creative with it...so 8/10

over all 29/40



I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...

the first line kind of lacked, but was picked up by the 2nd, nice work, 7/10

I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...

this was decent, kinda funny, but nothin special....7/10

This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food

this was a good multi, good punch, 9/10

Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime

i got the hate crime line...but i felt it was kind of stretched, so 7/10

as you can see it was a close battle, but kid p-dizzle edged it out by 1 point

good battle, much respect to both of you

Voted For: Trooper

um good battle both were good but not the est ive seen from ya
Troop: um i was feelnig ya shit but ya forgot to space ya 3rd bar um ya lines were streched though ya flow and sturce went good ya punches were really good and so was ya personals

KID: UM YA HAD MULTIS BUT IT WONT DO GOOD YA DID REAL BAD BUT I NO THAT WASNT YA BEST VERSE BUT SORRY MAN I GOTTA GIVE THIS TO TROOP FOR A BETTER VERSE

VOte trooper

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 

good drop both... just checking the polls

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

i'm it was all good both get a handshake but only one can win:

kid the was good wordplay and punch that forsho
nice flow and stlye
nice closer but opener was wack
personals were good
i saw one mult
8/10

J tro great flow but i didn't like the punhes or pessonals it was kinda wack
there were some thing i didn't get
no mult that i saw
nice opener but bad closer
6/10

winer is the kid

Voted For: Trooper

Im Votin For Troop, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Troop Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho...

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Should be 3-2, maybe even 3-1. Uppin' for more votes...

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just checkin out the polls....cant vote..

good job tho dizzle

Aight folks, let's get some more votes here, uppin'...

lol trooper why do you keep deisqualify'n da fuck'n votes , are you scared or something?, when you got cats like wildfire vot'n then u know he got it locked, dont worry i'd be scared to

no offense to you paramik...but how is paramiks vote considred "adaquate feedback" it's no better than the other two votes the kid got....stop gettin votes dq'd....it's not about the record man...

Aight, 2-2 now, still lookin' for more, uppin' ...

Yo, uppin' this shit again folks, don't be shy....

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 

u fuckin suck trooper no wonder u barely on this site u wack@!

remember we was on the same crew and u try to play me when i was 3-5??? i told u then you was ass and u still is nigga
lookin like 50 cent crippled cousin in ya pics say something elite general....i dont forget.

let me know.....

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 

supportin' my nigga Trooper, uppin' this battle.. nice drop Trooper, good luck 2 both..
~L F~

Voted For: Trooper

this was one sided...trooper took this in all topics....and he wasn't trying....good battle but kid....elevate...

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no trig u need to hop off troops dick....:thumbup:

ain't nobody on anyones dick....i felt he came harder...just like you think kid one...

Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions
ummm thats unbeliveably weak, he always uses those weak little sickness similes...
You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
this is the weakst line ever.....doesnt even truly make sense
Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech
taking away yur speech!? by takin out tonsils? extra weak....
Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
ehh this was coo but still pretty damn weak

that was weak. if trooper keeps spittin like that, hes gunna get continually owned...

Aight, still lookin' for more votes, damnn folks...

Still uppin' for votes, let's close this one down, eh?

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Ight this is how I see it......

KPD:
I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...
8/10 - Nice intro, usage of metas and similes

I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...
7/10 - Could have been better, wording was off

This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food...
7/10 - Very weak punch, wording was off

Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime...
9/10 - Good comeback from last line, nice closer
total: 31

Trooper:
Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions
8/10 - Solid intro and opener

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
7/10 - Average punchline, not hard hitting

Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech
7/10 - Average again because of lack of hard punchline

Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
8/10 Very solid and great closer
Total:30

Conclusion:
Both were ok drops, KPD had inconsistancy in his delieverance and Trooper's sentences set up for a great punchline, but lacked the deliver. My vote goes to KPD.

Voted For: Trooper

Aiight, this battle was pretty easy to judge.. Troop got it because although dizzle came with some alright punchlines, it didnt follow through.. Whereas troop came with good shit from the start and it carried through to the closer.

Dizzle, best advice I can give you, is to make your disses more consistant..

vote- Trooper

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Voted For: Trooper

Cool battle...both came alright...Trooper had sum alright meta's...just could be worded better...but good...P-Dizzle had sum ok shit to...this was a pretty even matched battle...Trooper was more consistent in this with his punches...P dizzles last two bars gave Trooper the win...just didnt come hard enough...work on wordplay you guys...keep elevatign cuz ur getting better...good battle!

Hit this up please...its slept on...
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Thanks...

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nice drop P way to rep the crew

Still uppin' for more votes, let's finish this one folks...

Yea look at u
talkin shit bout me Takein off votes



hm Bitch Made

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 

just check'n the count

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

close battle to me

Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions
decent opener first line was decent wording messed it up the punch was ok easy wordplay

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
lol.. ight punch and set up good flow
Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech
umm this was filler i hope weak attemtp at a punch had wordplay but i dont think the punch connected very well brah flow was coo again
Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
lol.. not a bad closer good similie in first line punch was decent basically sayin it wont never happen so not very original

I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...
first line was ok the punch was nice made me laugh at that shit
I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...
um weak bars honestly tried at his name but the punch didnt connect to me decent wordplay though
This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food...
lol..nice flow above average punch wasnt that good though
Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime...
fist line was nice but the punch fucked it up could have killed him with that set up but messed it up with that punch

overall close battle but p dizzle came with more attempts at personals some connected some was way off but still had an overall better verse to me trooped ya shit was coo wit all the similies no real personals but in the closer everything else u just stuck his name in it neither really had real strong punchs to mebut close battle here ya'll both about on the same level

nice battle kids

Ayo still uppin' this shit, let's get some more votes here...

Voted For: Trooper

yo dis goes to troopa man but Kid u had some good lines son,
I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper that was a pretty good one but u need more peronals and mayb a few more harder punches
Troopa dawg u gave it to him specially wit this lineYou will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
that was funny as hell good battle yall but from harder punches and betta wordplay this goes to troopa

v/troopa
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Voted For: Trooper

breakdown for sizzle

I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...

Opener was blah, punch was fair nothing special4/10

I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...

Iraqi lines are really played3/10


This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food...

This was jus wack 2/10

Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime...

Clever closer, ya best line but not very hard 5/10
Overall:14/40

Trooper


Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions

Creative opener, wording wasn't right tho..7/10

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's

Opener was played, punch was played 3/10

Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech

Creative again....6/10

Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals

Kinda blah but decent...5/10
Overall:21/40

Not a close battle both came weak but trooper was better of the two

Vote: troop