big GZ vs A.K.A.
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 55

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 06:33 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 06:34 PM.

big GZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 06:48 PM.

when u accepted this battle...i heard "Dead man walking"
so when u spit ya verse...u just a dead man talking//
my boy's call me "paperweight"...i'm holding shit down
i'll dig a "circle" in the ground and have u laying a "Round"//
i ain't talking bout' noodles when the cops find big shells
ain't from "Harlem World", but i'll give ya record a "Big L"//
i take my time when i write...u can say i'm cautious
cuz my rhymes is so sick...i feel i'm nauseous//
i'm unemployed but still making cents (Sense) like Common
i like hip-hop but at shows i "rock" like "diamonds"//
I'm Mike Vanderjagt the way i be kicking shit
u collect stamps, A.K.A.= u like licking shit//

this is really sad...i took like 15 minutes to write this verse and i wrote it about 7 hours ago...this cat is still thinking of a way to win...if he doesn't come with the best verse in his life...i believe he should be kicked off the site!

this guy is gonna be a no-show...A.K.A.= he ghosted this battle...HAHAHAHAHA!

nah son don't think it like that i just had three other battles to get done you the last on my merk list. is you serious i never run

now i no you joking if you think you a gangsta and you from MILWAUKEE//
but we all no you don't do shit to back up all that talkee//
big gz gonna be out the window forsheaz and then he ain't gonna rest easy//
i got a ton apower on this site so you better please me//
just cause you 4-1 doesn't mean your fabulious//
the only question you can ask is "why" i lose like jadakiss//
you no the boy aka banned for being to good//
i saw this dude on a farm and he was calling it his hood//
this faggit saw me and had to hold his dick down//
warning when i'm rapping here just don't come around//

Voted For: big GZ

big GZ
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

A.K.A.
Punches were good too not as hard tho…
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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Voted For: big GZ

BIG
he came harder nice structure his punches was tight had some word play hardly saw personals tho

AKA u was aiight mayn but u gotta come harder next time wit better punches naw im sayin

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Voted For: big GZ

big gz took this with more punches better vocab better flow... all round was a level above his a.k

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Voted For: big GZ

the reason i voted for you was u came with morwe metaphires and better flow in this one.....the verse was just overall better....some advice is to come with a better finishing bar the verse sorta fell off at the end, but other then that u took this battle.....my vote

Vote: Big GZ

i got 1 question for A.K.A...whose "merk" list was i on??? HAHAHAHAHA!

wut happened??? why did 4 mc's vote 4 me...but the poll only says 1???

i am dead serious...can anyone tell me what the fuck happened here???

aye yo its cuzz that nigga dissqualifed or votes thats why

Voted For: big GZ

nice battled dogg good flow good structure good rymes peace holla back

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This was feedback posted for A.K.A.
 

I give this one to A.K.A. because he had 3 strong disses, and one was at the very beginning. He(A.K.A) had decent structure and an okay flow, but most important his rhyme was more focused( attacking.) On the other hand, though big GZ had slightly better structure, flow and good word play as well, by my observation he only had one strong diss( attack) in his whole piece, and that came at the end in the last 2 lines. He (big GZ) spent the rest of his verse just making threats. In battle u have to attack, and big GZ failed to do that enough here so that the reason for my choice.

how the fuck would u know what has to go down in a battle...and ya record is 0-1...how bout i battle you and you show me what "attacking" is all about...FAG!

lets get this battle over and done with...so i can add another win to my record

This was feedback posted for A.K.A.
 

i wasent feelin nether of these songs:(

Voted For: A.K.A.

honestly dis battle was not da best.
i think aka had betta punches even though dey were not as hard as i noe dey can b( no hate)
ur flow and vocab was slighly betta
big u had good punches but couldve been betta and ur flow was ok
v/aka

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need some more votes so i can continue eating other imposters on this website!

Voted For: big GZ

Big GZ
took diss dat one line was fuckin hot

my boy's call me "paperweight"...i'm holding shit down
i'll dig a "circle" in the ground and have u laying a "Round"//

^^^shit was fire took out A.K.A's whole verse


A.K.A
u need better punches better vocab wordplay
metas but ok verse elevate a lil more u'll be
tyght

vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

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more votes come on people it ain't that hard. upping

Voted For: big GZ

i voted for GZ becasue i liked his wordplay and his punches hit a lot harder than a.k.a. both had sik verses but i felt that GZ had more and harder punches than a.k.a

you no we can say what ever we want and no one can see it till the vote so it really doesn't matter to say upping or tell what the score is.

Voted For: A.K.A.

vote goes to A.K.A. BETTER, flow, punches, structure and intro. big gz , your shit was good but just doesnt compare with A.K.A. punches hit hard and flow was very consistant.

good job!! please return the favour and drop an honest vote on the battles below

Voted For: A.K.A.

i vote aka cause he got the best rhymes.
that was the shit man.
and to big gz- man ure rhymes were whack.

this nigga got 2 be a retard...his record is 1-3...and he said my rhymes were whack!

Voted For: A.K.A.

i give it to
aka cuss
flow- it was iight flow i got to give it to him
struk-was a tie both of yawl flows was sick when it cam to ryming
punchlines-would have to go to big gz becus they had my laughin
mult-have to go to aka cuss he had tight flow in it

so it goes to aka

uppin i tryed of seeing this shit come on let get it over wit already

This was feedback posted for A.K.A.
 

this battle is trash... you both suck... GL finding somebody to vote on this shyt

Voted For: big GZ

Big GZ won this battle pretty easily. His flowed better n had harder n more creative punches. N i liked his closer wit the personal at the end. AKA most of ur bars didnt really rhyme well n ur punches were simple work on makin em more creative n rhymin better
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ok it 3-3 so close to being over so lets get it closed

Voted For: A.K.A.

aiigh AkA got this battle he had a better flow mayn nice lines good structure but one thing of advise both yall dont use tha "/" makes it look sloppy yo 4 really but uh my vote goes to AKA

Big G'z
he had a good flow mayn nice wordplay came pretty hard but i was feeling AKA verse more then your he came good fast clean nice mayn big ups both yall

This was feedback posted for big GZ
 

you were good man you held ur own man and thats wwhat matterz...

Voted For: A.K.A.

aka won diz battl he had all round da better verse hiz punches hit harder an diz other kat didnt even rhyme in sum placez datz y i vote fo aka