2pac vs TURBAN
 

Battle Rules:

round 2

6 - 15 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hate votes

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 06:51 PM

Must drop verse in 300 minutes after check in.

TURBAN has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 06:52 PM.

2pac has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 06:56 PM.

k turban her we go again dis is part 2 ill murder u like a goddamn jew/listen bitch last time we rapped u beat me but its coo/next time u win ima sue/ill leave u like da bitch u are in dis rap ill beat u by far/ ill make sure u aint got teeth to "spit" with when i beat u with a crow bar/bitch ill leave u like a hoe on ricky lake/ claimin your baby daddy's a fake/ damn dog nows tha time to wittness your rap fate/ ill rub u off like what i do when i masterbait/ nigga this aint rhymeing dis is mother fucking street rap/ ill leave u feeling like crap/bitch u rap like my ass sounds like/ nigga ill leave u breathless/when i rap im wreakless/nigga i got u rapped round this rap like my necklace/

this is round 2 n i'm `one for oh
you rap round here like you a scary ho
droppin like you think you hot
but heres a hint you'll never be a pac
and its another attack on society
from the verbal stanza's of the "great mystery"
you sketchy like ja rules history
you claim to pop guns whats that about ,
when you couldnt even figure the fucking trigger out
more like a novice, a simplistic, i bet some village is missing there idi-ot
you cant be legitimate , when you this wack
and its another win a verbal attack
this isnt the outback, and your not kangaroo jack
so gimme one last laugh, and on behalf of the rv community
this is one game where you wont get immunity

uppin for sum votes............................................. ...............................

Voted For: 2pac

yo many/ but nun the less good battle stucutre is way fucked:
punches 2pac
vocab no one wack in this battle
metas no one
multis towel head aka turban
openers 2pac
closeners towelhead aka turban
v/2pac
liekd his verse

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Voted For: TURBAN

i'ma have to go with turban in this battle, 2pac, you came to simple man, you need to elevate in your rhymes is was too nursery rhymish, you got potential though, just keep workin on it, your flow was decent, its just wasnt nothin comin out

turban you did aight in this battle, but you brought enough to the table to take out 2pac, structure was a little off but the overall flow was good, punchlines were decent, my vote goes to turban

Voted For: TURBAN

Turbans Verse

this is round 2 n i'm `one for oh
you rap round here like you a scary ho
3/10 could be better
droppin like you think you hot
but heres a hint you'll never be a pac
10/10 good personals
and its another attack on society
from the verbal stanza's of the "great mystery"
you sketchy like ja rules history
8/10 nice!
you claim to pop guns whats that about ,
when you couldnt even figure the fucking trigger out
8/10 haha
more like a novice, a simplistic, i bet some village is missing there idi-ot
you cant be legitimate , when you this wack
and its another win a verbal attack
this isnt the outback, and your not kangaroo jack
8.5/10 nice multis and punches
so gimme one last laugh, and on behalf of the rv community
this is one game where you wont get immunity
6/10 nice..outtro
8.5/10Good overall flow punches, easy to read structure, and some multis

2pacs verse

k turban her we go again dis is part 2 ill murder u like a goddamn jew/listen bitch last time we rapped u beat me but its coo/next time u win ima sue/ill leave u like da bitch u are in dis rap ill beat u by far/ ill make sure u aint got teeth to "spit" with when i beat u with a crow bar/bitch ill leave u like a hoe on ricky lake/ claimin your baby daddy's a fake/ damn dog nows tha time to wittness your rap fate/ ill rub u off like what i do when i masterbait/ nigga this aint rhymeing dis is mother fucking street rap/ ill leave u feeling like crap/bitch u rap like my ass sounds like/ nigga ill leave u breathless/when i rap im wreakless/nigga i got u rapped round this rap like my necklace/

2/10 ur structure was fucked, ok flow, personals but NO creativity anywas 2pac this is adequate feedback if u didn't know.. :|

bitch u mad cause i voted for nomercy over your punk ass faggot!! :gfy:

Nope i voted for Turban cause he better than u. bitch.

[QUOTE=Turnheads]Nope i voted for Turban cause im gay bitch.QUOTE]


lol u gay u fuckin faggot!!! :laugh:

are you fucking kidding me? , get out of here, droppin stupid shit like that, strobe look at that shit , towelhead? i dont think so u little racist bitch

aha we have a clown..

2pac trust me,, i didn't vote for ya cause i don't like ya, it's because U need elavation B.A.D.L.Y damn it. and plus u actin a fool. :banghead:

ayo still uppin..................... drop a link i'll hit it up

uppin still
c'mooooon lets get this thing closed grrrrrrreat

This was feedback posted for TURBAN
 

nice drop^...

Voted For: TURBAN

ok no good vocab or punches disses were corny but turban wins in structure and flow the only things left to rate and gets my vote

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This was feedback posted for TURBAN
 

you took it wit ease , u been workn on ya rhym'n 2

hahaha pac you gonna lose this one, he had u at every angle hahahaha

Voted For: TURBAN

TURBAN won diss
his structure was better he attempted
better punches just had a better verse

2pac
fix ur structure it fucked ur flow
u need 2 use wordplay vocab n metas etc.
it'll make ur verse way better beleive me

vote on da my battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

still uppin i would loooooove to get this one closed

Voted For: TURBAN

hahhahah both of you were not as good and not ya best verses

TURBAN: ya verse was not ya best ive seen but it was ok at least and it had bvad strucutre and diodnt flow well though ya punches were good a lil bit u shud try harder though

2pac: the only reason u didnt win is cos ya strucutre and flow ya could had had a better chance it it all messed up for you

Vote Turban

Voted For: TURBAN

TURBAN
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent & not stretched out...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

2pac
Punches were good too not as hard as TURBAN's tho...
Structure was good and not all stretched out...
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was ok...