20 GraND vs Unrealghost
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 09-09-04 at 09:21 PM

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20 GraND has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 08:39 PM.

Unrealghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 08:43 PM.

ima give u 2 days ta prewrite, but i aint offering ya plenty-hands-u-dummy
even if ya begged on ya knees and offered me Twenty-grands-of-Money

yo chains n ice wont do no good when ya jailed-n-behind-bars
u couldnt be hot n wavey even if hell-combined-wit-scars

now i hope dis is a lesson not to battle noobs-with-skills
to get easy wins, but ill shove ya ass to a tube-that-kills

Im back in the game, here to hunt u like a scavanga//
Leave u in a haze, hit u with the blunt when im stabbn Ya//
Lets be real, u aint worth my spit//
But u are worth all my clip, belee me 2 slugs to the chest will make u drip//
Sick with skill all overs, so i hope u remeber me man//
Or ill hit you with twin revolvers like yo sammity sam//

spit.. and dont pre-write shit, i want to see it posted asap nigga.

ight lets get some votes up in hurr

no offense to ya man, i just have had ppl pre-write in da past, so u never know
ya feel me

good spit

Voted For: Unrealghost

well weak battle in my eyes but im gonna go with this verse cause he attempted punches in all his lines n they were better than the other verses...the other verse seemed rushed n not alot of thought,there was no punches at all....

can we get some real votes please... details
not just i vote for him because it was good....
come on niggas

UppN

Voted For: Unrealghost

Vote: Unrealghost

Unrealghost: had a nice structure, and personally that first bar was nasty cause it was a nasty personal, nice wordplay,
and great multi's

20 Grand: ok structure, not really any personals, could have had better punches, i will give it to u though u had the better closer, u had some meta's

no beef 20 grand, u guys return the honest vote on Livin Legend vs Infector Mindz, Livin Legend vs realistnicca, Livin Legend vs Mc *Maze*

This was feedback posted for 20 GraND
 

so i hope u remeber me man//
twin revolvers like yo sammity sam//

THEM 2 LINES IS 4RM CASSIDY FREESTYLE HAHA FUCKIN CHEATER STOP BITIN N MAKE YA OWN SHIT UP

Voted For: Unrealghost

wasn't feelin this battle sorry..

both of you try to work on your metaphores and similes, then that will help your punches hit stronger..

also look for name plays, because those can help you some too..

punches- unreal
personals- none.
werdplay- none..
flow- unreal
multis- unreal.

bro, its a freestyle, u dont have time to think and work....
u just spit it out..
if it was a pre-written battle, then i could find out where he lives and talk shit about dat or w/e.. but its a FREESTYLE....
most cats on here pre-write shit, i know it cuz half of dem told me....

Voted For: Unrealghost

lol this was a good battle on this side for Unreaighost he took it to you it was one (onesided battle) takes it with better punches then the othe rguy and better vocab:
vocab:Un
Punches:Un
Opener:Un
Cloener:un
metas: 3/10 Un 0/10 for other cat
multi's Un
v/ Unrealgihost
return the favour in anyone of my battles in my sig thanks peace

Voted For: Unrealghost

unreal you took it ,

you had all around better punches, the flow was alittle off but u could both use a lot more work, but i enjoyed reading it

punches//ug
personals//none
meta's//sorta ug
structure//ug

20 grand your was alright jus work on your structure and your flow a little more

vote// unrealghost

this battle was a quick one so drop a vote

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