Empire vs street legend
 

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6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
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You keep going for 12 lines im starting to think you have a prewrite we set the battles up whore were the vet crew and im the vet battler and you dont get elevated you dont deserve it you aint got 5 wins you refuse this and its a no show :gfy:

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Street Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 10:56 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 11:26 PM.

did you drop yet or you prewriting like you said you never do fucking ho drop now

Try to 'ride' but when 'mindz kollide' i collapse active brain waves(1)
Flow 'mastered' listen 'bastard' as i rap and collapse ya mainframe
Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting(2)
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking(3)
No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work(4)
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse(4)
Must be 'slow' this 'ho' just force me to smash and whore um
You 'ass' whole crew 'trash' thats why you last in the forum(5)







EXPLANITIONS there are alot of personals so read this too understand basically my whole verse is personals-
1)mindz kollide is his crew
2)his profile says his occupation is the block
3)his name is street legend
4)His hot mail name is b-more hustla but he only has 15 r.v dollars hes even broke here ....lmao
5)his crew is the last one on crew page all the ways at the bottom

yo,

My lyrical wrath is catastropic, deep inside you envee me
suspciously, i dont think you can beat me dependently
you gonna be embarresed after this lose fallin in pits
ya kindergarden lyrics portrays that ya got noncomposmentis
i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose"
empire has been flagellated, unbeaten record put in the cementary
we can tell by ya strange attire that you are eleemosynary(supported by charity)
you to confident ya cocky but Rv knows ya average kid
Ima "collapse this empire" like he was "Roman" even vets say that ima cataylist

Voted For: Empire

Empire had the better disses here, but one line that stood out for streetlegend was the eleemosynary line. That was tight. I just though a lot of what Street bought to the table metaphorically was weak. didn't feel the glucose line all that much. Empire threw punches left and right that were landing. Legends gave a bad intro which left a bad impression for the rest of the verse which was a little better than that intro. cause it was weak.

Empire takes this.

This was feedback posted for Street Legend
 

checkin out the battle.....n posts n shit....nice verses...

Voted For: Street Legend

yo im gonna vote for street because.. its not very fair that empire explains his lines.. because i wouldnt have understood any of his punches otherwise... i think street legend had better vocab.. punches were probably tied.. but only cause empire explained em.. so all together this was a REALLY CLOSE battle.. but i think street legend got it due to the fact his vocab was SICK

Voted For: Street Legend

Booo @ this battle. I really thought i would see better from both of you. Street Legend had some OK attempts at being witty while Empire just wasn't.....sorry, but you were lacking in the whole wit department. I guess I gotta give this one to Street cause atleast it seemed like he tried to come up with some original concepts....

Vote - Street Legend

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ok ones a fucking dr the others a hate vote you are botrh now blacklisted fucking faggot ass whores :gfy:

Voted For: Empire

Empire -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

Street Legend -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

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damn Empire...cryin cuz i got some votes??? lol

pussy its squared up

This was feedback posted for Empire
 

just checkin it out empire took it no doubt this guy street legend got someone to vote for him i kno it but he still good im not saying im better cuz i aint or i might be idk realy but anyway empire has this but im mad that i cant vote.

^^kid....stfu...got somebody to vote for me....LMAO....do i look like Empire...if u sayin im gettin somebody to vote for me...then y is Sik Wit it always votin on Empire battles...man yall crack me up lol

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Voted For: Empire

Empire got this shit with,

better opener, better punches, use of wordplay and personals....

Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting(2)
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking(3)
that was fire

No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work(4)
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse(4)
That was also pretty nice shit

Street legeng, not bad use of words, punches could have been harder, structure could be better, personals could have been alot better.... Nothing in your verse hasnt been said before, no hate JUST ELEVATE

i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose"
that was ya only descent line

VOTE EMPIRE

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Voted For: Empire

vote empire
he had nice wordplay and personals,he also had some decent punches with a nice structure,dope opener i was feeling that

ST- you had an ockword structure..sretched lines..and tht threw ur floe way off,ur punches were kay,u had a little bit of wordplay...but thats it

v/empire

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Voted For: Empire

ok... this coulda went either way but i gotta go with empire on this one...

Personals: Empire
Punches: Empire
Structure: Street Legend
Vocab: Street Legend
metas: Street Legend (only cuz empire didn't use any... SL's were kinda weak but he did have some)
multi's: Empire (coulda been used better but there was an attempt)
opener: tie
closer:Empire

as you can see this was real close... not ya rare and sacred kinda "OH Shyt!!!" battle but close none-the-less.

Vote goes to E for harder punches and personals galore... on another note I see that Street is definitely trying to elevate from when I first battled him... good shyt ... keep growing

Voted For: Empire

opener: empire
meta's: none
multi's: empire
structure: empire
flow: empire
punches: empire
personals: empire

to be honest i thought this was kinda one sided, good shit empire

street legend u could elevate a bit more but u did pretty good

no hate/beef

vote: empire

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return the favor, livin legend vs realistnicca386, livin legend vs snook, livin legend vs ludacris

Voted For: Street Legend

Damn...this was a close ass battle. But I gotta give this one to Street. Even though it was even I liked streets battle abit better. His structure was nice and I liked da words he used. He vocab is abit better but not much. Both brought the heat but for some reason I think Streets punches hit abit better. Nice battle from both but i gotta give this to street.

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Voted For: Street Legend

street got this.. better punches and vocab... im gonna say flow and structure was the same... empires punches were pretty tight too.. u both came with tight personals.. but i just think that street came with harder punches and better vocab

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Voted For: Street Legend

good battle for u both

street legend- good verse, nice flow, good punches and i liked some of the wordplay..also had nice vocab..ur last line is kinda played against empire but u worded it good..i give ur verse a 7.5/10

empire- iight verse, ive seen way better from u..nice flow like always, ur punches were iight but not hard enuff, good personals on his crew and shit..some good wordplay, no hate to u but i kno u can do better i think u underestimated him
ur verse is a 6.5/10 cuz u can come harder

v/street

Voted For: Empire

my vote is for empire he got real personal and his bars made more since an i felt tha way he set it up with thw explanitions

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Voted For: Street Legend

Try to 'ride' but when 'mindz kollide' i collapse active brain waves(1)
Flow 'mastered' listen 'bastard' as i rap and collapse ya mainframe (OK Punch ... Nice Multies)5/10

Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting(2)
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking(3)(Didn't Really Make Sense, Decent)3/10

No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work(4)
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse(4) (Def One Of Ya Best Punches, Nice Personal)7/10

Must be 'slow' this 'ho' just force me to smash and whore um
You 'ass' whole crew 'trash' thats why you last in the forum(5)
(Ur Best Punch, Good Personal)8/10

Empire:Overall... Good Structure And Flow ... Your First Two Punches Wern't That Great ... But They Picked Up ... Nice Multies Also ... Last Two Personals Were Real Nice ...

My lyrical wrath is catastropic, deep inside you envee me
suspciously, i dont think you can beat me dependently
(Ive Seen Betta Openers But Decent Enough)5.5/10

you gonna be embarresed after this lose fallin in pits
ya kindergarden lyrics portrays that ya got noncomposmentis
(Nice Vocab, Didn't really Hit Hard Though)4.5/10

i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose" (Nice Punch/Personal) 7.5/10

empire has been flagellated, unbeaten record put in the cementary
we can tell by ya strange attire that you are eleemosynary(Lol ... Good Personal, Best Line Of Tha Match ...)9/10

you to confident ya cocky but Rv knows ya average kid
Ima "collapse this empire" like he was "Roman" even vets say that ima cataylist (Decent Punch)7/10

Overall: Street Legend ...Structure Wasn't as Good As Empire ... But Was Was Definatly On Another Level With Tha Vocab ... That Personal, For Me Definatly Got Tha Match Won For You ...

Vote:Street Legend

Voted For: Street Legend

empre- fuck that was some nice shit kid. punches was on point and all that but major points off for explain the punches again. its koo to explain but most of that shit, peeps already knew. keep it up.....8/10

street- good shit also. structure was kinda off but you put major vocab in ya shit and used it correctly for nicely delivered punches. i realllllly liked that glucose line...good shit.....8.5/10

both was ill but somebody has to win.....RTF.

Voted For: Empire

i think empire came harder. he had real good personals n his flow was okbut needs jus a lil work. but other then that he did real good. so....
vote=empire

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Voted For: Empire

Break Down...

Multiz - Street
Personalz - Empire
Vocab - Street but 2 hard 2 read therefore 2 much vocab
Flow - Empire
Punchez - Empire

Empirez verse wuz sicker then streetz an wuz eazy 2 read streetz shit wuz like college level i mean i can read it an shit but itz hard as hell suma these people can't read that shit anyway empire won this battle in my opinion

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This was feedback posted for Street Legend
 

My lyrical wrath is catastropic, deep inside you envee me
suspciously, i dont think you can beat me dependently
blah, ok opener 6/10
you gonna be embarresed after this lose fallin in pits
ya kindergarden lyrics portrays that ya got noncomposmentis
lol not bad 7.5/10
i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose"
like the wordplay here, punch hit 9/10
empire has been flagellated, unbeaten record put in the cementary
we can tell by ya strange attire that you are eleemosynary(supported by charity)
ok not bad, 7.5/10
you to confident ya cocky but Rv knows ya average kid
Ima "collapse this empire" like he was "Roman" even vets say that ima cataylist
decent closer 7/10

overall 37/50

Try to 'ride' but when 'mindz kollide' i collapse active brain waves
Flow 'mastered' listen 'bastard' as i rap and collapse ya mainframe
good wordplay no punch here tho 4/10
Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking lol nice personel 8/10
No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse
Oh DAMN 8/10 good personell
Must be 'slow' this 'ho' just force me to smash and whore um
You 'ass' whole crew 'trash' thats why you last in the forum
blah not feelin it 5/10

overall 35/50

Street wins sry.........

Voted For: Street Legend

Try to 'ride' but when 'mindz kollide' i collapse active brain waves(1)
Flow 'mastered' listen 'bastard' as i rap and collapse ya mainframe
^^^^^^^^^^^ o aight dis an killa opener nice mayne

Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting(2)
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking
^^^^^^^^^ nice mayne good punch and wordplay

No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work(4)
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse(4)
Must be 'slow' this 'ho' just force me to smash and whore um
You 'ass' whole crew 'trash' thats why you last in the forum(5)
^^^^^^^^^ aight mayne u had flow and punches and personals nice mayne

9/10



My lyrical wrath is catastropic, deep inside you envee me
suspciously, i dont think you can beat me dependently
^^^^^^^^^ ha nice opener i had to look up in da dictionary to know what da words mean lol

you gonna be embarresed after this lose fallin in pits
ya kindergarden lyrics portrays that ya got noncomposmentis
i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose"
^^^^^^^^^^^ yo nice wordplay and punch and flow omg dis an sik shit right der


empire has been flagellated, unbeaten record put in the cementary
we can tell by ya strange attire that you are eleemosynary(supported by charity)
you to confident ya cocky but Rv knows ya average kid
Ima "collapse this empire" like he was "Roman" even vets say that ima cataylist
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ o aight mayne u had good flow and punches (harder)

CLOSE SHIT RIGHT HERE BOTH OF YALL GOT SKILLZ~!



yo i gots to give dis to street legend he came harder punches (edge)

yo empire u got skillz homie sik shit mayne punches and personal

but da punches didnt hit harder dan street legend//

yo street legend keep it up mayne,,,,,,u had flow and harder punches

my vote goes to street legend becuz of harder flowz and punches

empire u wasnt wack nor anything u had good sik shit,,,,, but street came harder wit dem punches

~peace~ no beef