VALOR vs enygma
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
20 mins max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-10-04 at 12:57 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

VALOR has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 12:30 AM.

enygma has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 12:36 AM.

im not dumb,you'll collect d/r to win then hate..
your wack tactics are old and played like crhyme syndicate..
''text is so last weak'' cus you get mad when ya loose..
thought ud do better in audio,but failed and your now 1 and 2..
if you really want to be like enygma than take notes-
and make sure you make all your battles 20 posts to vote..{you pussy}
and you will always when all the time...by getting ur dick rode
nygma's a fan favorite has everyones dick in his ear lobe..
im ending this battle not careing win or loose..
because when his friends vote for him it'll just be old news..

blah...wack

This dude ain't cool.....shit, I'll hide you in the flame
Couldn't capitolize in this battle...so he tried to in his name
This fag stays undercover....but he never tries though
Cause when he drops his shit....it's obviously 5-0
Your verse is like no more than a blur....ya stay hidin
And you're waiting for my reign....like hurricane Ivan
You're coming with open palms...while I got closed fists
You'll probably sleep on this battle to try and win by osmosis
Fuck this verse......I don't even got to seem tight
Cause I can come Lazy Boy....and you'll watch my feats rise

Voted For: VALOR

valor took this one with obviously better punches, heres break down:

This dude ain't cool.....shit, I'll hide you in the flame
Couldn't capitolize in this battle...so he tried to in his name
^^lame opener, lol
This fag stays undercover....but he never tries though
Cause when he drops his shit....it's obviously 5-0
^^aight punch
Your verse is like no more than a blur....ya stay hidin
And you're waiting for my reign....like hurricane Ivan
^^hidin and Ivan don't rhyme...weak punch
You're coming with open palms...while I got closed fists
You'll probably sleep on this battle to try and win by osmosis
^^aight punch
Fuck this verse......I don't even got to seem tight
Cause I can come Lazy Boy....and you'll watch my feats rise
^^nice

im not dumb,you'll collect d/r to win then hate..
your wack tactics are old and played like crhyme syndicate..
^^weak opener...
''text is so last weak'' cus you get mad when ya loose..
thought ud do better in audio,but failed and your now 1 and 2..
^^nice personal
if you really want to be like enygma than take notes-
and make sure you make all your battles 20 posts to vote..
{you pussy}
^^^aight punch
and you will always when all the time...by getting ur dick rode
nygma's a fan favorite has everyones dick in his ear lobe..
^^^weak
im ending this battle not careing win or loose..
because when his friends vote for him it'll just be old news..
^^nice closer

obviously none of yall tried, but Valor had better punches and flow, enygma's verse was hard to read if you try reading with the dots, his flow was screwed up by it, Valor's punches hit harder and makes more sense, while some of enygma's punches are weak, no hates to both of ya

vote: VALOR

Voted For: enygma

bout time u battled on here again

bastard :thumbup:

Removed

HOLY FUCK REMOVE MY VOTE

my bad suppost to be feedback :thumbup:

WOW!!!! Valor, remove E Looch's vote and stop inviting your dick riders in here :thumbup:


*imagining people could see this before they posted*
If you don't get the punches.....don't vote :thumbup:

^^^maybe if you can come up with a good explaination on why enygma wins, you dont have to

crew vote idiot

and word at not voting if u dont get punchs

shit is fuckin anoying

He's in my crew......and he doesn't have to show how I won, my verse speaks for itself.....you were just too stubborn to realize it :thumbup:

uppin thisshit again.......

Voted For: enygma

Enygma got da battle
like da worplay n punches n da
personal u used about da name good shit

Valor
u had a good verse 2 but i felt nygma's punches
hit just a lil harder n u didn't have much wordplay
nice drop dough diss was a good battle

vote on da battles in my sig honestly i voted on ya battle

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This was feedback posted for VALOR
 

not voting cuz valor's in my crew neither one of y'all came hard but i wanna see how this turns out, so good luck to you two..

Upiin

No Fake Votes Bitches Thanks.....................

Voted For: enygma

ya u get this one....u had betta punchlines...wordplay was ok in this one prolly coulda been betta..you flow was good too good job on dat...personal about capitalizin his name that was funny..overall it was and ok verse...you took this becuz of punches...

Valor..ya shit coulda been betta then that dawg...you was only focused on him gettin d/r votes..you shoulda talked about more in this verse...ya punches were...soft i guess u can say...personals was good tho maybe if u woulda put more effort in this one homie....

Can yall return the favor plz against me and Empire...i cant d the link cuz it fucks up when i try to do it...its in regluar frontlines..good lookin...i took the time out to vote on yall shit so do the same

*Achoo!!!!!!*

Voted For: enygma

enygma
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

VALOR
Punches were good too not as hard as enygma's tho...
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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lol
i new ur friends would vote for u.....
ur wack puNches vs my 3 peronals in the first 3 bars

ur a pussy dude

Voted For: VALOR

ok valor first

first bar- flow a little streched but ok diss a 4/10
2-1-2 lol that was a hard diss cuz its true 7/10
3-good diss also another factual punch a 5/10
4- ok the dr shit is getting outta hand now still a good ender a 5/10
valor good flow and disses a whole verse of personals good shit here but could be better a 25/40

enygma
1st bar- good diss real original a 8/10
2nd bar-second flow aint hit neither did punch that wasnt good at all 1/10
3-a self glorification bar a 3/10
4-ok good diss again it hit a 7/10
5- didnt rhyme fell off in flow a 1/10
overall-20/50

ok e had a better flow and structure but not by much yet valor had a whole verse of personals and decent punches this was not a strong battle but i think valor came with harder hitting shit and got at his oppenant better

2nd^^^honest vote

anyone elsee wann have an honest vote and not ride dick?

oh shit i wondered how the fuck he thought street legend beat me when his verse was garbge no i see hes trding votes ohhhhhhhhh shit you fucking whore i should blacklist the whole chrmye syndicate you fucking slut ass bitch :cussing:

Are you serious? Look at how you voted.

VALOR was dope with all of his indirect punches. As a matter of fact, none of his punches were effective at all, but I still think he won this battle

Enygma, Being dope will cost you. You need to come wack so I can vote for youevery once in a while :thumbup:

Thanks for the hate vote biotch...

Voted For: enygma

hahaha both were good but ya verse were kinda weak
I was feeling enygmas lines more cos valor was not as stairnt to the point and had played concepts
Valors best line:
if you really want to be like enygma than take notes-
and make sure you make all your battles 20 posts to vote..{you pussy}

enygmas : ya shit was good and ya had better punches and it was more better
Best line:
You're coming with open palms...while I got closed fists
You'll probably sleep on this battle to try and win by osmosis

vote enygma

Voted For: VALOR

Both came with good structure annd aight punches, but VALOR had more and better personals. enygma you had some good wordplay yourself, but it didn't come hard eough to win this time. No hate, this was a good battle for the 20 minutes you had to drop...
Vote - VALOR

Return the favor to the link in my sig, honest votes only...

Uppin 4
......3-4
Finally Real Votes Comin In This Battle

You really gotta be kidding me......upping for more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: enygma

Aight Enygma Got This Purely On His Wordplay...

Ya Both Couldda Stepped Up Ya Punches n Multies, But On The Whole Nice Drops..

Elevate Ya Punches n Try Addin Humour In Ya Rhymes

No Hate!

Good Lookin Ya'll, Keep Em Comin An RETURN THE FAVOR

P E A C E

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wow.....what a bitch. You got all my votes removed like a pussy. Just take the loss like a man....

uppin number 5.......................
..........................................

Voted For: enygma

This dude ain't cool.....shit, I'll hide you in the flame
Couldn't capitolize in this battle...so he tried to in his name
ok
This fag stays undercover....but he never tries though
Cause when he drops his shit....it's obviously 5-0
ehh
Your verse is like no more than a blur....ya stay hidin
And you're waiting for my reign....like hurricane Ivan
nice
You're coming with open palms...while I got closed fists
You'll probably sleep on this battle to try and win by osmosis
dont get it :huh:
Fuck this verse......I don't even got to seem tight
Cause I can come Lazy Boy....and you'll watch my feats rise
nice
ehh verse...didnt really come that hard.

im not dumb,you'll collect d/r to win then hate..
your wack tactics are old and played like crhyme syndicate..
ehh
''text is so last weak'' cus you get mad when ya loose..
thought ud do better in audio,but failed and your now 1 and 2..
wack
if you really want to be like enygma than take notes-
and make sure you make all your battles 20 posts to vote..{you pussy}
weak, but why say that..lol
and you will always when all the time...by getting ur dick rode
nygma's a fan favorite has everyones dick in his ear lobe..
huh...wack
im ending this battle not careing win or loose..
because when his friends vote for him it'll just be old news..
[b]wtf....wack
had some weak lines...weak overall...
v/enygma

Go return the favor...link in sig.

Yo enymgma u should do tha same thing back at him wit The Kid P-Dizzle's vote aint dat explained, but no hatin from me juz lookin by some battlez... n i aint votin fo this shyt to many haterz gon hate on me
PEECE

Voted For: enygma

mah... i expected this to be a tight battle... valor punches kinda came weak.. enygma i liked the osmosis and hurrican ivan lines.. both had nice flow.. valor's fell on one line but picked back up... but i gotta vote based on punches and i feel enygma came harder with punches... PEACE

Lets get this closed out!!!!!!!!!

*cough*

Go return the favor with a vote...homo-thug.

Voted For: enygma

v/ enygma no this isnt d/r

enygma-nice verse in the begining but you kinda fell off in the middle....some nice metaphours but the capitolize and 5-0 lines were dope....overall 84.2/100


vlaor what happened dog.....you kinda fell off too except much more severly.....your sarted telling a four line story at one point......you came way too weka for htis battle...sorry but..

v/ enygma