WORDPLAYA vs The MC
 

Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-13-04 at 03:37 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

WORDPLAYA has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 03:41 PM.

The MC has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 03:52 PM.

im flowin drastically how could u possible flow after me
THE MC.........more like Manuered Coochy if u askin me
it had 2 be a newb persuin 2 'RHYME' but u a 'BUSTA'
squeeze ya blood all over 'hotdogs' so i call u Kernal 'Mustard'
u musta bit a style i while ago before u spit yo shit
i call u 'House' when im on da mic kuz i leave u shittin 'Bricks'
da only way u get a hit is pickin up a hammer n bangin nails
like not studieing 4 a test wit yo rhymes yo ass bound 2 Fail
while i prevail 2 excel ya follow da happy trail eating 'Skittles'
'taste the rainbow' faggot shake mo den Harlem n da wobble

[CLOSER]
i bake hoe 'CAKES' wit heat u won't withstand man
Fuck callin u 'Peter' Just understand u goin in da 'Pan'

A'yo Look........................
dis kids selfglorifying just check out his verses,
he cant diss his opponent his rhymes are worthless,
u trick ya words into thinken ya good,dats y u wordplaya,
bitch is gonna lose afta dis and wine,now he word-swaya,
U on a beat would be on da intrumentally challenged list,
Who r u to think u a pimp,ure sig is snoop,ure an ass kiss,
A bitch like u must smoke weed if u reppin a true pothead,
C if u stop smoken for this sites sake u wont regret 2 pop shit,
Kangaroos and rabbits will even jump u more on this site,
whats bolded sez U WACK,N dogs get jealous of how u bite,
-1-

A'yo Look........................
dis kids selfglorifying just check out his verses,
he cant diss his opponent his rhymes are worthless,
u trick ya words into thinken ya good,dats y u wordplaya,
bitch is gonna lose afta dis and wine,now he word-swaya,
U on a beat would be on da intrumentally challenged list,
Who r u to think u a pimp,ure sig is snoop,ure an ass kiss,
A bitch like u must smoke weed if u reppin a true pothead,
C if u stop smoken for this sites sake u wont regret 2 pop shit,
Kangaroos and rabbits will even jump u more on this site,
whats bolded sez U WACK,N dogs get jealous of how u bite,
-1-

sry but my verse is supposed to come out like this i must of made a mistake b4

uppin 2

uppin 3

Voted For: The MC

Im Votin For The MC, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But MC Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho...

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STIll uppin diss battle
cum give a honest vote
we'll return da favor

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

aight thi battle goes to WORDPLAYA because he had way way superior punches over The MC.MC,you had some decent punches and personals but your shit didnt hit as hard.I liked your dogs are jealous of your bite line,but the rest was kinda filler.WORD,you were ok in every category except for personals.You guys just need to elevate on that.
Nice verses,but this goes to WORDPLAYA.

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

Aiiight

wordplaya got this...
nice finisher word..

ya came strong here, nice metas n personals, structure was nice n clear to read too
nice drop.........................

mc, i wasnt real;ly feelin ya line, you didnt really hit any hard punches or personals, ya flow was aight, an the lines connected well, but some of the lines were kinda pointless, try addin humouress punces my nigguh
no hate...........

return the fave in my sig


p e a c e

yo we uppin 4 votes
so cum give a honest vote
we'll return da favor

Voted For: The MC

MC took this one man.

Harder punches and his personals were insane.
Wordplaya's lines were played, Ive heard that skittles line a few times before from other peeps...

The MC: Overall - 8/10
WORDPLAYA: Overall - 5/10

Both were close but MC just wanted it more and got my vote, no beef boys, just my honest feedback/opinion, peace...

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

this is hard to vote on

wordplaya..ya punches hit real harder...and indeed u had some tight wordplay...nice personals and gd flow...closer was tight and structure was good aswell


mc...ur verse was ok..............but ur punches didnt hit as hard as WP's..u had a gd vocab but andur lines were stretched a lil...wordplay was ok but not as cool as WP's...


cool battle tho


holla at minez.....

1

thanx 4 ya vote still uppin
4 more votes we'll return da
favor

Voted For: WORDPLAYA




im flowin drastically how could u possible flow after me
THE MC.........more like Manuered Coochy if u askin me
it had 2 be a newb persuin 2 'RHYME' but u a 'BUSTA'
squeeze ya blood all over 'hotdogs' so i call u Kernal 'Mustard'
^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER MAYNE GOOD PUNCH

u musta bit a style i while ago before u spit yo shit
i call u 'House' when im on da mic kuz i leave u shittin 'Bricks'
da only way u get a hit is pickin up a hammer n bangin nails
like not studieing 4 a test wit yo rhymes yo ass bound 2 Fail
^^^^^^^^^^^ DATS GOOD DATS AN DECENT PUNCH AND FLOW


while i prevail 2 excel ya follow da happy trail eating 'Skittles'
'taste the rainbow' faggot shake mo den Harlem n da wobble

[CLOSER]
i bake hoe 'CAKES' wit heat u won't withstand man
Fuck callin u 'Peter' Just understand u goin in da 'Pan'

^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE MAYNE GOOD CLOSA



A'yo Look........................
dis kids selfglorifying just check out his verses,
he cant diss his opponent his rhymes are worthless,
u trick ya words into thinken ya good,dats y u wordplaya,
bitch is gonna lose afta dis and wine,now he word-swaya,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PERSONALS MAYNE NICE PUNCH

U on a beat would be on da intrumentally challenged list,
Who r u to think u a pimp,ure sig is snoop,ure an ass kiss,
A bitch like u must smoke weed if u reppin a true pothead,
C if u stop smoken for this sites sake u wont regret 2 pop shit,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCH NICE MAYNE

Kangaroos and rabbits will even jump u more on this site,
whats bolded sez U WACK,N dogs get jealous of how u bite,
^^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL NICE CLOSA MAYNE


I GOTS TO GIVE DIS TO WORDPLAYA CAUSE "HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES THROWIN AT MC"

MC UR GOOD KEEP ELEVATIN MAYNE WORK ON DEM PUNCHES THOUGH HIT HARDER NEXT TIME

V-WORDPLAYA CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES

~PEACE~

uppin 4 1 last vote
give a honest vote we'll
return 1 if i haven't already

still uppinh 4 1 last vote
i'll returb a honest 1 so
cum vote

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

wordplaya had a better structure and his flow was just wayyy better he came harder with the punches everyline was just killah

v/wordplaya