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Archeologist vs [~*Lady Fiya*~]
Battle Rules:
Crew Battle- Archeologist (A.I.) vs. Lady Fiya (The Council) 10 Lines max. No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No B/S No unexplained.. Last time set-up, make sho, u check in so we can do this! aight....... Good luck min. post 150.. check in by 24 hours........ then drop in 24 hours.. ~wun~ Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 09-11-04 at 07:46 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
[~*Lady Fiya*~] has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 07:47 PM.
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Archeologist has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 07:50 PM.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~* *avoidin' peekers^ aight this the crew battle fa sho, let's get this poppin'.. special note: mod the E.I. (emcee introductions) u newbie-killa...!* -My verse- herbs bring ya record to life, their graves "you dig"! {avi} lend sum respect 4 this vet puts self-quotes in his sig! {removed lol} pimp this Rascal, ya search 4 wins like raided artifacts! ya "sight" impacted like passing Stevie "clear" contacts! Vision has "no faith in you", ur here 2 relieve wut's dead! ^deadly think ur a short-cut, can't measure 2 other heads?! ya bars need space to enter ya "run-ons" like "treadmills" "couple of vowels" ya dial, crew help-ya-lines get filled (lmfao) you A.in't I.ll, can't kill if ya shovel came to a fine point!! {avi} ur record's "paralyze" just like arthritis to double-joints!* ^deadly Vision- leader of A.I., seein', sight, clear, Vision.. Rascal aka Archeologist, artifacts, "you dig", shovel (avi) *paralyze- (pair-of-lies), still and not moving ~if u don't get the punches, then don't vote.. simply put..~ good luck Archeologist, do ur thing.. nigga, ~wun~ |
Lady's that type of girl who's always got her mouthfull..*
And when it came to DR'in, you were the 1st 1 hopin on to Spul.. Try for repect by claimin yourself to be the ~*Duchess of Metaphors*~.. Showing your destined for heights, when you hang around with dwafs..** Lf's realy trying for this battle she' gaggin for a council win.. See she get's to 3 pussy votes, then no more are fitting in..*** No chance of winnin girl.. this battle's already been claimed.. I'd say you suck at everything, but hundreds have said the same.. Carry's a pocket knife like she'll get raped, your nothin we desire..**** Chew up this girl like a match.. to show im the only one spittin Fiya. *Mouthful. sucking a duummy Avy. **Her sis looks like a Dwaf.:laugh: ***Riding A Female. She Has No Dick So They Pussy Ride. ****She bout a pocket Knife. Blah Had Writers Block And Trouble In Real Life. Pz. |
yea, I can't vote on this. But I'll jus leave some feedback for both. Lady fiya you had a nice verse. Nice punches and personals in their. You had nice original punches. Nice stuff. Arch, yo verse was aiight. That first link was wack. Made no sense at all. Seriously, what was the point? Quote a post if you directin' to a post not the whole thread. But yea, yo other punches were aiight. None to weak or hard. Basic rhymin'. And also, that closer was really played, but whatever. I think Fiya took this one. But yea, I can't vote so jus left feedback. pc
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Voted For: Archeologist
lmfao......yo archeologist gets this fo real.... both had a good structure but archeologist gets dis cos : his punches were clear and hit harder......they were interessting and got me laffing....7/10 his wordplay was tight too.....i like the last 2 lines...they were very good...compliments...7/10 props to both tho... 1 |
Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
ctfu...yo... damn Arch... wtf happened to you?...this shyt wasn't even close! the hardest line you had wasn't even about her... it was about her sister... who ain't even registered on the site! LF killed you with the metaphors... can't front... ol gurl got a way with words... Arch... ya shyt was real simplistic this time around... wheres the wordplay, metaphors, multi's, and punches? ya bars need space to enter ya "run-ons" like "treadmills" ...that shyt right there was killer! ur record's "paralyze" just like arthritis to double-joints!* ...nice closer! .lmao Yo arch... ya gotta throw ya punches like ya wanna put a fist through the other side of ya opponents body! Them shyts you threw were frail... it was like watching a geriatric boxer picking a fight with the Mike Tyson pre-Buster Douglas! come back again when you ain't got all that shyt on ya mind and drop like ya usually do... one |
^uppin' the crew battle for more explained votes, fa sho.. bitches don't sleep on this!!
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This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
Just check'n this out .
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This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
nice drop mami... just peepin the poles
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This was feedback posted for Archeologist
peepin those pizzoles. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
both are good but im juss seeign this up
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
herbs bring ya record to life, their graves "you dig"! {avi} lend sum respect 4 this vet puts self-quotes in his sig! {removed lol} ha decent start... pimp this Rascal, ya search 4 wins like raided artifacts! ya "sight" impacted like passing Stevie "clear" contacts! preety good Vision has "no faith in you", ur here 2 relieve wut's dead! ^deadly think ur a short-cut, can't measure 2 other heads?! decent.. ya bars need space to enter ya "run-ons" like "treadmills" "couple of vowels" ya dial, crew help-ya-lines get filled (lmfao) i dont get it??, you A.in't I.ll, can't kill if ya shovel came to a fine point!! {avi} ur record's "paralyze" just like arthritis to double-joints!* good ending.. not a bad verse....... Lady's that type of girl who's always got her mouthfull..* And when it came to DR'in, you were the 1st 1 hopin on to Spul.. ok.. Try for repect by claimin yourself to be the ~*Duchess of Metaphors*~.. Showing your destined for heights, when you hang around with dwafs..** haha nice diss... * saw the pic * Lf's realy trying for this battle she' gaggin for a council win.. See she get's to 3 pussy votes, then no more are fitting in..*** decent... No chance of winnin girl.. this battle's already been claimed.. I'd say you suck at everything, but hundreds have said the same.. ha made me laugh decent diss... Carry's a pocket knife like she'll get raped, your nothin we desire..**** Chew up this girl like a match.. to show im the only one spittin Fiya. good ending.. finally a punch... all around nice battle both, but i think lady fiya just came with a little more heat, A.I u had some nice diss 1 punch if u would of had like 1 more good punch u would of gotmy vote... |
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
Ok, both of you came with some good punches and good structure, but Lady Fiya had some ill wordplay. I had to read some of it a second time, and when I did shit was hot ma. Arch you had a good drop too, with a nice personal bout her sis lol, no hate tho Fiya. This was a good battle, keep bangin'... Vote - Lady Fiya Return the vote to the link in my sig. Honest explained votes only please... |
Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
Lady: You came weak, week punches, and you kept makin comments after every line, why? I liked the paralyze line, thats pretty much it. Whats up with the colors? Gay. The only verse I was really feelin from you is the on wit Empire. Archeologist: You came super wack son. The dwarf line was super wack. Pussy vote...wtf is that. Wack. Didnt have any lines I realy liked. The closer was ehh....but thats it. Weak battle. v/Lady Fiya...for one good line. Return the favor...link in sig. |
This was feedback posted for Archeologist
Good battle both just checking poll
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
ima have to give this one to you....you led this one wit your punches and metphors...both had good wordplay..but yours was just that much betta that you took that catagory..both had personals..and it was hard to decide...but since lady fiya incorperated good wordplay in..they were betta..opener goes to Lady fiya...as well as closer...no hate just a honest vote..could yall retun the favor on my shit....me vs. shabba Ranks and me vs. Shottaboy |
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