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Onor Code 09-11-04 12:43 AM

untouchablekilla vs Onor Code
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 10:03 AM

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System 09-11-04 12:45 AM

Onor Code has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 12:45 AM.

System 09-11-04 02:48 AM

untouchablekilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 02:48 AM.

untouchablekilla 09-11-04 09:34 AM

code you thought you were pretty tuff you looked at me and roared
I proved I can kill you with 8 fingers 2 thumbs and a keyboard
but to be honest, I dont be feelin ur shit when u write
so ill leave a virgins pussy on ur mind so u can "think" that ur tight
Pussy go to tutorial learn to spit and then come battle me
otherwise ur chances of winning are as slim as winning the llottery
I Slump Minds With Punchlines, Listen Son..Your Future's Sad
I'll Make This Dude Disappear Like The Weight Missy Used To have
you da bootlegger in everything i wont be shocked if u copy this
next thing you know he'll be pullin up my verse on his floppy disk
i’m calling code peter pan, cuz his punches Never Never land
this battle is going down like the twin towers in new york man

Onor Code 09-11-04 04:04 PM

I am not a cop, But i will lock this 'killa' behind my bars
You a star?.. uppercut him.. and make him swallow 'mars'

Your lips are like pussy lips.. all you spit its blank!
Swallo my shank, I got more green.. than city banks

I slash n 'Gut' ur Bodly 'Structre' Till ur in the shape of a 'Pegisis'
Mount n 'Hold' ur Fluidz in a 'Container'
Till Ur Lowwer body 'Caps' in ur in a 'Leg Assist'

'Gap yah 'Teeth', so yah gums are 'Playing Wide Spred', Like ILL hookers, Ur 'Deseased wit Head'
Got u 'Scared of Darkness' So Shadow 'Under Yah Bed'...

untouchablekilla 09-11-04 04:26 PM

iight uppin for votes

UnKnoWn-KiLLa 09-11-04 06:04 PM

Voted For: untouchablekilla

this battle was kinda 1 sided killa took this by far....really far

code you thought you were pretty tuff you looked at me and roared
I proved I can kill you with 8 fingers 2 thumbs and a keyboard
9/10


but to be honest, I dont be feelin ur shit when u write
so ill leave a virgins pussy on ur mind so u can "think" that ur tight
8/10
Pussy go to tutorial learn to spit and then come battle me
otherwise ur chances of winning are as slim as winning the llottery
9/10

I Slump Minds With Punchlines, Listen Son..Your Future's Sad
I'll Make This Dude Disappear Like The Weight Missy Used To have
7/10

you da bootlegger in everything i wont be shocked if u copy this
next thing you know he'll be pullin up my verse on his floppy disk
8/10
i’m calling code peter pan, cuz his punches Never Never land
this battle is going down like the twin towers in new york man
9/10....that line ripped em o shit....

code..
I am not a cop, But i will lock this 'killa' behind my bars
You a star?.. uppercut him.. and make him swallow 'mars'
7/10
Your lips are like pussy lips.. all you spit its blank!
Swallo my shank, I got more green.. than city banks
5/10

I slash n 'Gut' ur Bodly 'Structre' Till ur in the shape of a 'Pegisis'
Mount n 'Hold' ur Fluidz in a 'Container'
Till Ur Lowwer body 'Caps' in ur in a 'Leg Assist'
8/10

'Gap yah 'Teeth', so yah gums are 'Playing Wide Spred', Like ILL hookers, Ur 'Deseased wit Head'
Got u 'Scared of Darkness' So Shadow 'Under Yah Bed'...
7/10

Flip Kid 09-11-04 06:58 PM

Voted For: Onor Code

I'm goin to give this battle to onor code for good punches, structure, both had good and outstanding verses. but i think oner code's ender killed the battle, nice personals by both.

untouchablekilla 09-11-04 07:55 PM

uppin

untouchablekilla 09-11-04 10:14 PM

uppping

DrasticMeasureZ 09-11-04 10:31 PM

Voted For: untouchablekilla

I am not a cop, But i will lock this 'killa' behind my bars
You a star?.. uppercut him.. and make him swallow 'mars'
^^^^^^^^ UM NICE PUNCH BUT NOT DAT DECENT

Your lips are like pussy lips.. all you spit its blank!
Swallo my shank, I got more green.. than city banks
^^^^^^^^ NICE PUNCH

I slash n 'Gut' ur Bodly 'Structre' Till ur in the shape of a 'Pegisis'
Mount n 'Hold' ur Fluidz in a 'Container'
Till Ur Lowwer body 'Caps' in ur in a 'Leg Assist'
^^^^^^^^^^ NICE PUNCH GOOD ONE

'Gap yah 'Teeth', so yah gums are 'Playing Wide Spred', Like ILL hookers, Ur 'Deseased wit Head'
Got u 'Scared of Darkness' So Shadow 'Under Yah Bed'...
^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT LOOKIN GOOD FOR U MAYNE


code you thought you were pretty tuff you looked at me and roared
I proved I can kill you with 8 fingers 2 thumbs and a keyboard
^^^^^^^^^ ITS AIGHT OPENER

but to be honest, I dont be feelin ur shit when u write
so ill leave a virgins pussy on ur mind so u can "think" that ur tight
^^^^^^^^^ NICE PUNCH

Pussy go to tutorial learn to spit and then come battle me
otherwise ur chances of winning are as slim as winning the llottery
^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE PUNCH DA LINKS IS AN POINT

I Slump Minds With Punchlines, Listen Son..Your Future's Sad
I'll Make This Dude Disappear Like The Weight Missy Used To have
^^^^^^ TO ME DAT WAS AN PERSONAL AND A PUNCH NICE

you da bootlegger in everything i wont be shocked if u copy this
next thing you know he'll be pullin up my verse on his floppy disk
^^^^^^^^^ HA HA HA DAT LINE MADE AN KO

i’m calling code peter pan, cuz his punches Never Never land
this battle is going down like the twin towers in new york man
AIGHT KO MAYNE NICE CLOSA

UNTOUCH GOT DIS HE EDGE IT A LIL BY USING DEM LINKS AND DEM PERSONAL AND DA GOOD CLOSA

ONOR UR GOOD MAYNE U ALMOST HAD IT BUT UNTOUCH CAME HARDER DAN AND MUCH BETTA VERSE DAN U MAYNE BUT KEEP SPITTIN AND KEEP AT IT MAYNE

~PEACE~ NO BEEF RETURN AN FAV

Sean Gunner 09-11-04 11:10 PM

Voted For: untouchablekilla

untouch u won this hands down. structure- untouch, punches- untouch, flow- untouch, metas- untouch, multis- untouch, personals- untouch had 1. Onor i didnt understand half of your verse, and it felt like u just used words that rhymed and tried to make em work. one thing, untouch im not sure who copied who, but u and LEazy have a same line almost. "i’m calling code peter pan, cuz his punches Never Never land" its worded different, but the end is the same. v/ untouchable. peace

untouchablekilla 09-11-04 11:31 PM

uppin

WhiTe_Tee 09-12-04 12:38 AM

This was feedback posted for untouchablekilla
 
just wanna see the stats

untouchablekilla 09-12-04 02:13 AM

upping

HOLLOW_TIPS 09-12-04 02:20 AM

Voted For: untouchablekilla

untouchable
u got this mayn u had better punches and vocab but tha structure was onor code he had a nice structure mattafact both yall did onor code elivate mayn

Dirty Nigga 09-12-04 11:04 AM

Voted For: untouchablekilla

Aight Killa Gets My Vote...

More Creative Lines n Punches, Structure Wasnt As Good As The Other Kat But Still It Was A Nice Drop..

Keep Em Comin Killa...

Onor Ya Verse Kinda Lacked Creativity An The Punches U Try To Land Seemed A Lil Played Out, Still An Aight Drop Tho

Good Lookin n No Hate

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