Mc:Xplicit vs Elusiv G
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 11:39 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 11:40 AM.

Mc:Xplicit has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 11:43 AM.

This here is not a rap battle its more like a knowledge dual
Cause ima drop “so many lines” on this nigga you’ll think I sppittin in “college rule”
I “eat” mcs “daily” lyrically as part of my “nutritional breakfast”
G want drop a “metaphor” so lets put him on the spit a “punch line back fast”
Half G’s raps trash…
Me… going down in history so in the “future” what im sppitin is a “back flash”
My rhymes will spark heat…
That’ll take you “old school” “listening” to the “greatest” of your last “five heartbeats”
I say the greatest cause the last is always the best
Eternity on the flat line see if you can pass the test
You judging my rhymes dawg that’s a weird event
Cause you criticizing yourself seeing your rhymes in the mirror tint
~one Xplicit ~

yo yo yo yo yo

Mc:Xplicit hate do burst yo bubble, but u jus not wit it
like cheddar bomb in 8mile u jus cant kick it//
rhyming baffles u, like words to illeterates
ur brain confused, like fathers to illegitimates//( out of wedlock babies)
U think u got skillz, n rightz to say that ur ill
Its a fact thats earned, not a sentence that can be sparadically spurned//
"U remind me" of usher and his battle wit sisqo ( u reind me trak by usher)
U seem scared to step up and battle ur foes!//
15-7, ur records impressive, i aint stressin'
cos all ur votes were from fake aliases signed with fake e-mail addreses//( blap)
Yo rhymes weak, phone "alicia" 4 u hit the "keys" ( keyboard and pun on a.keys)
shed cud help u out and fix tha jelly in your knees//
ur so fat ,u remind me of big pun
girlz scared, cos cholesterol comes out every time u spunk// (lol..ejaculate)
Ur rhymes remind me of fat people da way u screaming
Its a similar sound, its like fat people breathing.//(lol)
Like a wack ass programme i wanna change the channel
Ur rhymes bore me, cos there wetter than a flannel//
Mc:Xplicit, im stumped, cos ur rhymes fail to exhibit
The skills u speak of in each and every spit//
Self-glorifying nigga, yo rhymes bush shud prohibit
Cos kindergarten kids c ur verses and easily rip it//
I'm gonna "Xplicitly" lace u wit psychopathic profanity
Leave stunned and robbed of yo vanity//
Like in tha sims i seen a character whos strait up shit
To erase u fool, all i gotta do is type and click//
I cud hav won this battle from half way across tha globe
I'm surprised u even posted, I'm surprised u even showed//
Cos similar to Nas and Jay-z, ill drown u in "Ether" ( Nas finished Jay wit dis)
Lite ur rhymes on fire, cos u cudnt get "respect" from Arethra// ( arethra franklin and her son r.e.s.p.e.c.t)

hey yo i typed 15-7 cos i was lookin at big bad wolfs record a diff mc im battlin his record is 7-5 tha rhyme still works jus change that shit round y'all . Peace

Voted For: Elusiv G

Aight, Elusiv, Ya Structre Was All....BLAH, Yea...Improve That!...But Other Then That Ya Had Som Nice Metas n Personals, I Think Ya Disses Hit Harderd, Just Improve Vocab n Maybe Up Ya Punches, Add Humour To Em

MC Ya Verse Was Aight, Room 4 Improvement, Better Usage Of Words In My Opinnon, An Addin Humour...But Nice Structure n A Few Aight Metas In There, Nice Drop...

Return The Favor Ya'll...

P E A C E

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Voted For: Elusiv G

elusive wins this. both were about equal as far as punches go. elusive just had more. this infinite lines shit sucks cause it gives the second guy posting more of a chance to win, especially when competition is this close.

i like the second guy's rhyme pattern and layout better. it seemed like you bit it from Jay-Z, but it would be pretty effective in a live battle.

uppin for votes in here

to dren..i cudnt c his verse..when i posted!!!!! hey yo uppin 4 votes

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This was feedback posted for Mc:Xplicit
 

Chop down ya structure
Elevate a lil




Good shit

uppin for votes thanx trooper for the feedback i will work on it

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uppin do anyone vote here i will drop an honest vote so leave a link

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uppin again dorp a link and i will get back at u with an honest vote
~one xplicit

Voted For: Elusiv G

My Vote Goes To Elusiv G, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Elusiv Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho...

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Voted For: Elusiv G

yo ima hafe to give this one to elusiv g he came harder with his punches but they werent complete punches but i like the creativity in his verse by spellin his name n shit i liked that:) well heres what i came otu with:
punches: elusiv g
vocab: Mc
wordplay: elusiv g
metas: Mc
multi's: elusiv G
flow: eluisive G
stucture: Mc
opener: elusive G he didnt have vocab but he had punches
closener: elusiv G he had wordplay and punch, vocab
vote and more enjoyed: elusiv G
return the favour in my battle verse Matte1 the links in ma sig thanks peace

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Voted For: Elusiv G

aiight G got this one he came harder with his punches and better vicab he had a good structure and his punches was tight

MC
ya verse was tight to dont get it wrong you had some nice punches and ya lines was tight them worddy and shit
but G got my vote on this one

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Voted For: Mc:Xplicit

xplicit got it done in less lines. he said what he wanted...hit just as hard...and had an alright flow behind it. voted for xplicit becuase it was shorter and to the point. no need to beat around bushes.

"rhyming baffles u, like words to illeterates
ur brain confused, like fathers to illegitimates"
^^^best line ive read in a while elusiv yo......

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uppin............................................. ......and chek ma sig shop y'all, below is a lil taster of ma skillz

uppin for votes drop a link and ill repay the vote with an honest one

uppin...............................honest votes will b returned.............. ......and chek ma sig shop y'all, below is a lil taster of ma skillz

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