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sHoTTaBoY vs UnKnoWn-KiLLa
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-14-04 at 04:56 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 04:59 PM.
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UnKnoWn-KiLLa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 05:00 PM.
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this kid..bitches about voting/
and his sig aint the only thing with its mouth open/ kids a herb kicked the theory right out the door/ cuz i thought the next level..was harder than the one before/ Florida the garden state?..this kid's a born herb/ Gangsta,he spits nuttin but street when he bites the curb/ A character Comical lines this kids bound to get Stripped/ And im like a toddler cuz his image is bound to get ripped/ |
Dogg Look At Ya ''Posts'', Ya New Round Here An I'm The ''UNKNOWN KILLA''...
...I Took This Too The ''Court'' n You Trynna ''Dodge (The) Ball'' Like 'Ben Stiller' Dogg, I Battled Enuff Times To Know How To ''Beat'You''... So That 4320 Minute Drop Is When Ya ''Defeats'Due''... U Still Couldnt ''Spit Fire'' Even If Ya Bought The ''Heat'Thru''.. Only Time You Ever ''Cum Hard'' Is When Ya ''Meat'Blew''.. I Can Already Imagin' You Steppin To Me n Me Choke U Wit The Microphone... Send Ya Ass Packin n Shit U Off To Ah Land ''UNKNOWN''.. |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
haah very easy battle and no doubt shotta won with better punches personals he had way good wordplay and he really put up a good verse nice struccutre and it flow iight the other kid didnt erally put much of a verse and it wasnt that tense and it was weird vote is shotta |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
Shotta Got This ... Shottaboy: ... Structure was good here i can see that you bin workin on it; first two lines could've had better structure ... Punches were good best one was prob tha stiller one: nice ... although tha cum hard is pretty played it was still effective ... Unkown Killa: ... Ya Had Nice Structure ... Ya Vocab is a lil repetitive though; You used tha word kid alot ... Punches didn't really make that much sense ... Vote:ShottaBoy |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
sHoTTaBoY Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... UnKnoWn-KiLLa Punches were good too not as hard as sHoTTaBoY's tho... Structure was good.. Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
Mediocre battle. Shotta had better punches and Unknown's drop stopped going at shotta shortly after it began. No hate, just elevate and you'll improve. Shotta, you had some nice stuff, I was feelin' ya 2nd and 3rd bars, that was the highlight of this battle... Vote - sHoTTaBoY Return the vote to the link in my sig, honest explained votes only please... |
This was feedback posted for UnKnoWn-KiLLa
i wanna see the stats
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
shottaboy deservs dis battle harder hittin punches and better flow shottaboy had a slammin opening and the closin was quite hot it seems to me like unknown killa is just trying to make every line rhyme u need to work on your vocab and punches no h8 u got my vote dis time shotta!!! |
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