mc *maze* vs *+*ludacris*+*
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 05:27 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

*+*ludacris*+* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 05:28 PM.

mc *maze* wot a wack name u mak me lauf//
ur rhymes r wack ur a dick and u r nauf//(crap)
he called me out now he will be wishing he didnt he now nos the meaning of defeat//
i am always da winner im not weak or wack i am neat//
y'd did u tell me to set up a battle u no ur gonna lose coz ur wack//
i slaped u silly with my dope ryhems ur lyk a weak guy in a pac//

check in>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>plz

Mc *MaZe* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 06:44 PM.

yo, your testin a level thats too high for you to take
so be carfull with your words and just remember you are fake
this is just a little verse it wont take long to make
but if you start chattin shit ill leave you floatin in a lake
so *+*ludacris*+* im just giving you a warning
so dont get rude or ill lyricaly burn you till da break ov dawning

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Voted For: Mc *MaZe*

Mc*MaZe*
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

*+*ludacris*+*
Punches were good too not as hard tho…
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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This was feedback posted for *+*ludacris*+*
 

just checkin so yeah dont mind me aight boyz.........

Voted For: Mc *MaZe*

mc maze won but this battle was shitty and ludcris i called you out minue ago,
you scared>

Voted For: Mc *MaZe*

Vote For: Mc *MaZe* Good Structure & Just
Brought it to him better

Voted For: Mc *MaZe*

MC Maze merked that cheating asshole in everyway.
Man he wasnt even worth the effort...

Punches - Maze
Personals - Maze
multies - Maze
Structure - Maze
vocab - Maze
wordplay - Maze

This was embarrasing, I coulda just gave you the vote with no feed and im sure the mods wouldnt care if they read your opponents verse...awful.

MC Maze=8/10
luda=1.5/10

Easy win for Maze, got my vote, peace...

I voted and left feed for you, please do the same for me and help out... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...249#post1599249
Thanks peace.

Voted For: Mc *MaZe*

hahaa maze u got this one by a long shot dude keep up the good work and work on ya punches a bit luda u need to work on mostr things punches , landing ,vocab and more but keep goin te both of you!

Voted For: Mc *MaZe*

mc maze: whack ass verse no hate tho nice try....
punches were not up to bar in strength or effectiveness
was slightly unoriginal but somewhat still decent...
overall: 5/10

ludacris: ummm you tried to get personals but it weak
punches didn't connect well at all points of your battle...
verry verry unoriginal i say up your game a lil..........
overall: 3.5/10

vote: mc maze