Wicked One vs ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
 

Battle Rules:

6 -14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

good luck b4 12 pm est...........

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Check in by: 09-11-04 at 09:43 PM

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Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 07:49 PM.

~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 07:55 PM.

aight yo check it.....''Wicked'' couldn't be sick if the bitch had ''syphillis''
in this battle this kid has no *Presents*[presence] like a jew on ''christmas''.....1/
Im better than u , Kustum stays above ''BK''* like the ''shoes-under-my-feet''
after this loss he'll be dumbfounded b/c hes ''confused-when-it-comes-2-defeat''...2
this kid couldnt be ''sik-wit-it'' if *rafaer alston*cummed ''aids-in-his-eyes''
becuz in this battle i drop ''Wicked'' more than ''paid-british-guys''....3
this kid picks up recycled material once a week like ''trash-can-bins''
facin me? ur better off commiting sucided or checking into an ''afghan-inn''....4
this homos a fag , hes the first to show up to a ''prom-for-gays''
but after this humiliation ''Wicked'' will be like long weekend breaks ''gone-4 [for]-days''
''Wicked'' will be callin me *Dave Chappelle* the ''way-he-gets-pissed-on''
after this loss he will regret battlin me and asking himself *why* like the ''jada-kiss-song''...5
there is no chance of u winning b/c in this battle i ''came-to-devouver''
im killin this kid from new yorks hopes like flyin ''planes-into-towers''.........6

*''BK'' kids from brooklyn
** rafaer alston is sik wit it in and 1

any other explaniations just ask me
uppin for verse and votes......

I’m so fly, after I paralyze you, I'll lay maggots in your open wounds..
My rhymes so sweet,Kustom bit one,and developed cavities in his broken tooth...
Kustom I've been reading your rhymes for quite some time now...
The problem is you couldn't make a punch connect unlike your eye brows...
Your multis are rough with abuse of language Trying to fit in flow with awkward vocab...
You're a family man so take up my retirement plan and we'll reminisce on the skills u had...
Tha best thing you could do to win is script a novel...
Against my skill and logic you'll need more words than are written in tha gospel...
Now I'm killing you with tha skill that you wish you owned...
Cuz I'm tha original vet, but your just i kid who got cloned...
Frodo to this homo,Measuring up to this Death Match as the Ruler-Of-This-Ring...
Blast his faith,I assasinate-the-realist(realest) manipulating a Martin-Luther-King...

Voted For: Wicked One

iight check it out you won becuz of your punches and personals it was good some advise to ku$tom dont explain ya lanes it wakes the reader sound stupid reading it....

iight here was the overall stat

punches: wick
Personals: wick by a lil
flow: both
structure: both

ok bboth need work but kustom needs the most holla 0ne

^^^^ooo yea kust punch about christmas and jews is played I had the same concept wrote in a different way in december of last year lol

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aight dawg good vote.....im high as phuck so i dont care....0-1 uppin votes

yo i think wik won no doubt his kept it together and his flow was really put together good job man.....overall nice battle

yo got 3 post get the fuck outta here.............

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

ok wicked opener was weak a self glorifacation line that aint hit second bar was corny the rest of the disses and punches were also slack not horrible but damn sure not good flow vocab wordplay and structure is tight though a 4/10
kustom dope fucking opener here and ender was played nut decent flow was inpecable structure was good and vocab was nice dope ass disses and punches which your oppenant lacked helped you win this here i especially liked the afgan in line and the and i liked that wordplay on gone for days dope shit here a 7/10

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. CREW VOTE REMOVED

thanx for vote...............1-1
hey wicked one why do u and ur first vote from L.L. have the same ip???? fuckin cheater

still uppin

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

wicked- nah playa wasnt feelin ya punches really. basically just the same shit said a different way, aka played. so everything was just average nuthin special really. keep elevating.....5/10

Kustom- you won the whole damn battle just with ya opener. killer punches, some were kinda played(afghan) but i really like how you added the tein towers thing on 9-11, good shit......8/10

v//kustom-image

btw, NEVER do fake personals wicked. its the worst thing u could ever do.....

2-1 still uppin............................................. ..

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

My Vote Goes To Ku$tUm, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Ku$ Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho...

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This was feedback posted for ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
 

this kid couldnt be ''sik-wit-it'' if *rafaer alston*.....


^^i thought he was Skip to my lou....but uhh whateva just feedback

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

Aight, This One Was REAL Close...

Wicked Ya Hit Some Aight Punches, Metas n Personals Were A Lil Off In This Battle, But Some Okay Metas n Decent Wordplay..
Just Try Addin Humour n Personals Next Time Dogg, Nice Drop Tho..
Keep Em Comin..

Kustum Hit Harder Punches n Better Structure, Nice Wordplay Too...
Finisher Was Off The Chain Too, Kustum Got This One..

No Hate n Return The Favor Ya'll..!

P E A C E

4-1 still uppin........about the rafaer alston skip to my lou yea o well i was high i dont care

Lethal Lunatic is not me even tho it says its the same IP......well its not.....and i dont care if you dont believe me 1.....

This was feedback posted for ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
 

your christmast line is sooo played....work on some better punches they all played out

its str8............ 4-1 thanx for feed backk...........wicked im not sweatin it i believe ya..........

Voted For: Wicked One

this was a pretty good battle but ima have to give this one to my boi Wicked . on this one...

Kustum
damn kustum this was one of the first battles ive seen you in and you really surprised me...structure was way off and it made your verse very difficult to read...multies were there it was decent...punchlines were iight but some really werent hitten very hard...personals were decent all arounded ...overall this was a pretty decent drop ..but you need to work on your structure..and try not to make your lines so stretched...

Wicked
nice drop..you just barely took this one...your structure was as well off...but ive seen alot better...multies were there but some made the line alittle stretched..punchlines..were hot and were really hitten hard...personals were there ..some were good some just feel off..overall this was a pretty hot drop... good enough to take the win....

overall- vote goes - to - wicked one
good battle both

thanx for voting............4-2 still uppin.................................

2-1 still uppin............................................. ..

kustom is not p.s.a we kicked him out cuz he was trying to start his own crew hes been out for a few days now put my vote back strobe

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

sick shit kustom nice punches...10/10
flow was not that bad...6/10
structure well at least i could read it...9/10
wicked you had sorta weak punches...4/10
flow was way off...3/10
yo structure was good...10/10
v/kustum image...

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

aight...dope battle in my eyes.....wicked nic verse...good wordplay..multies was nice...and i felt some of ya punches...personals was ok...could av been tighter...but good verse overall

kustom...another nice verse...this one was close...but i felt u came harder wit the punches and personals...again u had good wordplay an multies...nice verse

both came good with the wordplay and structure....good battle...

my=kustom image

return with a fair vote in my battle...its in ma sig......pz

This was feedback posted for ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
 

checking this shit out
kustum did a really good job thouigh

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

ok my mouse wont let me click and paste soo

opener kustom giftless jew line was better than wickeds cavitie one wick u dissed yaself u said ya rhymes r sweet..
kustums closer of the plane and towers was way betta then wicked martin luther king kinda corny ..kust thats wrong(911)
flows and punches go to kust wick was aiight but no hard punches, kust had punches all day. he wins knockout heres ya vic kust now r we gonna battle so i can set up?