Turnheads vs SUCC MACOKK
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hates votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 09:36 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

SUCC MACOKK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 04:14 PM.

You might think you're 'high',but not on the charts...
Even if you were a surgeon,you couldn't 'own hearts'...
You might think you 'turn-heads',but not from your raps...
Its prolly from the 'stink' of them because they're huge 'craps'!
You know you'll lose a 'shitload',but who knows why you keep on 'dropping'...
I woulda thought 'indigestion' woulda 'hit' U, I guess the whole site can 'keep on hoping'!...
Like Ur little avy,I'll make you walk in a repeated pattern...
A lil like your record,you'll go down.....like a doc who failed by one point......his degree to become an intern!


Aight,understand the personals and everything before voting...

Turnheads has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 07:57 PM.

Wheres ya verse i said 60 minutes after checkin, i'll set up a new one with more time.. and much sure u drop ur verse before time runs out..

peace

"Succ Macokk" It's funny u so 'deperate'--
U can't 'succ ur on cokk' yet alone 'pleasure-it'
Ur verse is as small as ur 'cokk' can't 'measure-it'.
'U better-get', urself a "strap-on", cause u aint 'veteran'
Better than, u and ya family, triggers u 'can't-squeaze'
But U should "stick" to given urself a "Handy" (handjob)
A Mans genitals in ur name, and yet ur still not 'Manly'
Succa, Cant stand me, but..........
Use viagra u still couldn't "Stand up" '4 urself',
'into intercourse' NO Succa 'ur so' into 'oral',
I'll drop u so hard on ya head you be singin 'floor-notes'

nevermind i didn't see ur verse...

Uppin for EXPLAINED votes.

nice verse^.uppin... i have a feeling I lost.

Voted For: Turnheads

lol this was a funny battle, props to both, showed some skill, but i gotta give it to turn heads, only because he kept the punches com'n SM you had a good verse but your punches and meta's werent as strong ... nice word play on both side, it was super close, but the structure and punches were harder on turn's side so he takes it


Use viagra u still couldn't "Stand up" '4 urself', <---that was my favorite line outta both of ya's spits
big props to both

vote//turnheads..


honest vote here, so return the favor, this kid couldnt win unless i get a hatevote ha ..
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uppin...

I misspelled some words tho.. yeah ur's was ok too...

Uppin for more EXPLAINED votes

This was feedback posted for Turnheads
 

well that was ahight but keep battle'n and you'll get better... anybody up for a battle wit me???

uppin 4 votes...

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This was feedback posted for Turnheads
 

weak battle.

punches- Head
personals- Head
mulits- Head
multas- neither
word play- Head

Head u had decent stuff, but the punches were kinda weak. U had multis, and personals.

Succ u had a good idea for a verse, but your wordin and vocab sucked. U woulda won if u had re worded it.

Head:
" Use viagra u still couldn't "Stand up" '4 urself'," i dont see it rhymin but it wuz a good idea.

Succ:
" You might think you're 'high',but not on the charts...
Even if you were a surgeon,you couldn't 'own hearts'..." agin if u had re worded it woulda been good punch.

v/ Head if i could vote

what u talkin about i had multis.. anyways for the feed..

Uppin For EXPLAINED VOTES

uppin 4 votes....

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Voted For: Turnheads

k both were wack but turnheads had better stucturre and wordplay and vocab baically he won cuz he had all the basics in his song:D so ima hafe to vote for him he came pretty strong heres what i got wiht all the thingie's:
punches: turnheads
vocab: turnheads
wordplay: turnheads
flow: both got that
stucture: turnheads
metas: suckmacock
multi's: turnheads
opener: turnheads
closener: turnheads
pretty much 1 sided lol ima have to vote for turnheads
yo return thr favor in my battle in my sig verse mattee1 thanks peace

aight ^youre absolutely horrible but w/e.uppin 4 votes...

uppin this shit...

uppin for votes up in here...

Voted For: Turnheads

You might think you're 'high',but not on the charts...
Even if you were a surgeon,you couldn't 'own hearts'...
^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE PUNCH MAYNE GOOD OPENER


You might think you 'turn-heads',but not from your raps...
Its prolly from the 'stink' of them because they're huge 'craps'!
You know you'll lose a 'shitload',but who knows why you keep on 'dropping'...
I woulda thought 'indigestion' woulda 'hit' U, I guess the whole site can 'keep on hoping'!...
^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS GOOD MAYNE


Like Ur little avy,I'll make you walk in a repeated pattern...
A lil like your record,you'll go down.....like a doc who failed by one point......his degree to become an intern!
^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA

DIS VERSE WAS GOOD HE HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES PLUS IT WAS ON POINT GOOD VERSE


"Succ Macokk" It's funny u so 'deperate'--
U can't 'succ ur on cokk' yet alone 'pleasure-it'
^^^^^^^^^^ LOL GOOD OPENER FUNNY PUNCH



Ur verse is as small as ur 'cokk' can't 'measure-it'.
'U better-get', urself a "strap-on", cause u aint 'veteran'
Better than, u and ya family, triggers u 'can't-squeaze'
But U should "stick" to given urself a "Handy" (handjob)
^^^^^^^^^^^ OOOOOO NICE PUNCH PERSONALS GOOD PUNCHES


A Mans genitals in ur name, and yet ur still not 'Manly'
Succa, Cant stand me, but..........
Use viagra u still couldn't "Stand up" '4 urself',
'into intercourse' NO Succa 'ur so' into 'oral',
I'll drop u so hard on ya head you be singin 'floor-notes'
^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT GOOD SHIT HERE MAYNE GOOD PUNCHES (DECENT)


YO I LIKE TURNHEADS VERSE BECUZ HE PUT DOWN PUNCHES AND PUNCHES AND HARDER PUNCHES


SUCC-MACOKK U HAD GOOD VERSE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

IT SEEMS TURNHEADS EDGE IT A LIL BY USIN HARDA PUNCHES

MY VOTE GOES TO TURNHEADS BECUZ OF HARDER PUNCHES

uppin for votes...

Voted For: SUCC MACOKK

this was a weak ass battle but i gotta give it to succ macokk cuz of structure and fluidity. punches hit harder too personals were ight. Turnheads could of came harder than this but didnt really try hard . holla at me

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Voted For: Turnheads

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turn head wins
pz

Voted For: Turnheads

vote goes to Turnheads!!

His punches came hard, his shit had Much better flow, it was funny, and didnt bore me, it had nice vocab, good wordplay and funny, lines, succ, i found your shit boring, sorry man, just did.

vote goes to Turnheads overall!

PLease return the favour and vote on some of the battles below, thx