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eph 09-12-04 01:34 AM

Phantom vs Verbal Abuse
 
Battle Rules:

10-30
House Rules. Period. You Know em So Dont Cheat.

Dont Worry I Dont DQ People, Its A Shitty Way
To Win, So I Expect The Same In Return. If You
Use This As A Personal, Your A Fuckin Lame.

150 Posts To Vote, No Unexplained. No Leaving Links
For A Returned Favor.

I Fucking Hate Ai.


Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 02:34 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Old/inactive battle win

System 09-12-04 01:39 AM

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 01:39 AM.

Logic The Goonie 09-12-04 02:10 AM

just so yall know, VA is a girl, a bitch, say no more "hims"...
my brother found it out, while in the councils forum...
so why you postin as a dude, ya got little tits?...
oh, cuz you want dudes to know you for a different kinda spit...
imma speak at the whole council, VINCI FUCK YOU TOO!!!...
stupid hoes on A.I just cuz you aint got none in you...
VA, dont deny youre fem-ship, its just how it is....
so know we all see ya true self......its rocked in ya sig...
i wont lie, bitch HAD A.I (brain) but she gave it all to us...
and now shes ridin with a wheelchair on the short bus...
what did we ever do to you? or is we just that ill?...
that you gotta love us for no reason, and then get killed...
but dont slip and drop extra lines, whine and make up excuses..
bitch is bout as tight as her coochie, which makes it all looseness...
did the bitch trooper, treat you badly, and verbally abuse?...
or did you get nutted so hard in your eye, you got left with a bruise?...
this aint even a joke, next time you diss us, do it in our face...
dont come from behind, we aint like you, its not our taste...
fuck you ......ya whole crew,... ya family... ya friends...
postin in a stciky thread, wouldnt help you make amends...
this aint a nice thing to do, i know it, but you asked for it...
i cant "bear" how its not quite right, like "beds chairs, or porridge"...
how many pms you gotta send, to actually take this?....
this aint orgasms honey, ya cant easily fake this...
need serious "council"ing when im through, im real pissed at you...
you aint fly, ya tampon wings cant even soar on through...
i hope you quit when done here, cuz ya lyrics aint impressive...
god damn you cant even get ya punchlines to be slightly subjective...
"im rick james bitch" the way i lyrically slap you...
imma let the rest of A.I come in and e-style clap you...

if you dont get something, ask me. i aint gunna drop links cuz thats played as fuck. and how i was talkin bout how VA is a girl, its totally true, dont believe her lies. fuck you and all the council hoe, yall can suck a dick.......im out.

System 09-12-04 02:21 AM

Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 02:21 AM.

eph 09-12-04 02:53 AM

The Setting

^^^Must Read: Then follow up with...

...Phantom:

A member of youth. Your wasting time here, go rake the leaves.
Goblin n ghost stories dont cut it, come back when your not make believe.
Your still underground. When you open your mouth, no bodies hearing a sound.
Nineteen posts per day, how can a ghost be three fourths of the lyricist lounge?
Not dope or respected. Read your title, your nothing but a guest.
Your not a scary figure. Merely Obsine, Like tounge between Mary's beloved breast.
How can you represent such stupidity, best shot would be to bite my words.
Recite like birds. My advise: dont ever quit, youll just retire an herb.
Ai is far from such talent, and even farther from wise.
Id inquire more landed punches, even if each member started with five.
Its inevitbale, you cant prevail. Like fighting the one. (the matrix)
Mantains his topical division, cause in audio...hed end up biting his tounge.
A transperant being... can only decend in the air.
Well you wont escape fair... when the law of gravity applies everywhere.
No depth to ya, your rhymes are like fat folks in the shallow.
Just raising the limits, well heights only worse when your broke in the gallows.
He asked for some votes, n even his dick riders granted him none.
Keep thinking your prime, until the only thing left of phantoms a crumb.

eph 09-12-04 02:56 AM

^^^woops wrong font size: here it is again.
The Setting

^^^Must Read: Then follow up with...

...Phantom:

A member of youth. Your wasting time here, go rake the leaves.
Goblin n ghost stories dont cut it, come back when your not make believe.
Your still underground. When you open your mouth, no bodies hearing a sound.
Nineteen posts per day, how can a ghost be three fourths of the lyricist lounge?
Not dope or respected. Read your title, your nothing but a guest.
Your not a scary figure. Merely Obsine, Like tounge between Mary's beloved breast.
How can you represent such stupidity, best shot would be to bite my words.
Recite like birds. My advise: dont ever quit, youll just retire an herb.
Ai is far from such talent, and even farther from wise.
Id inquire more landed punches, even if each member started with five.
Its inevitbale, you cant prevail. Like fighting the one. (the matrix)
Mantains his topical division, cause in audio...hed end up biting his tounge.
A transperant being... can only decend in the air.
Well you wont escape fair... when the law of gravity applies everywhere.
No depth to ya, your rhymes are like fat folks in the shallow.
Just raising the limits, well heights only worse when your broke in the gallows.
He asked for some votes, n even his dick riders granted him none.
Keep thinking your prime, until the only thing left of phantoms a crumb.

eph 09-12-04 02:59 AM

woops wrong again: last time.
The Setting

^^^Must Read: Then follow up with...

...Phantom:

A member of youth. Your wasting time here, go rake the leaves.
Goblin n ghost stories dont cut it, come back when your not make believe.
Your still underground. When you open your mouth, no bodies hearing a sound.
Nineteen posts per day, how can a ghost be three fourths of the lyricist lounge?
Not dope or respected. Read your title, your nothing but a guest.
Your not a scary figure. Merely Obsine, Like tounge between Mary's beloved breast.
How can you represent such stupidity, best shot would be to bite my words.
Recite like birds. My advise: dont ever quit, youll just retire an herb.
Ai is far from such talent, and even farther from wise.
Id inquire more landed punches, even if each member started with five.
Its inevitbale, you cant prevail. Like fighting the one. (the matrix)
Mantains his topical division, cause in audio...hed end up biting his tounge.
A transperant being... can only decend in the air.
Well you wont escape fair... when the law of gravity applies everywhere.
No depth to ya, your rhymes are like fat folks in the shallow.
Just raising the limits, well heights only worse when your broke in the gallows.
He asked for some votes, n even his dick riders granted him none.
Keep thinking your prime, until the only thing left of phantoms a crumb.

Logic The Goonie 09-12-04 01:41 PM

:rolleyes: not personal? hmm if you say so, i mean come on, she said i do topicals....wtf? up

eph 09-12-04 02:46 PM

i was emplying that you suck at text, so stick to topical. uppin.

Logic The Goonie 09-12-04 03:23 PM

me suck at text?.......:gfy: ....never that.......

In-Vision 09-13-04 12:04 AM

This was feedback posted for Verbal Abuse
 
V.A...nice verse.....lines i really liked...::


A member of youth. Your wasting time here, go rake the leaves.
Goblin n ghost stories dont cut it, come back when your not make believe

Your still underground. When you open your mouth, no bodies hearing a sound.
Nineteen posts per day, how can a ghost be three fourths of the lyricist lounge?


Ai is far from such talent, and even farther from wise.
Id inquire more landed punches, even if each member started with five

A transperant being... can only decend in the air.
Well you wont escape fair... when the law of gravity applies everywhere

those were all dope....phantom..i've seen you do better....but it had it's bright parts..

Logic The Goonie 09-13-04 09:46 AM

VA....ill give you this much, i shoulda came harder. i underestimated you, wasnt even trying, so if u take this (prolly will)...then:thumbup: ........i did like that gravity line tho. plus u cn hate me/ai all you want but u can at least show some sportsmanship....

Logic The Goonie 09-16-04 01:16 PM

damn guess i gotta keep my fuckin losing streak goin, imma be back tho....uppin

~Luciano~ 09-16-04 05:20 PM

This was feedback posted for Phantom
 
Haaaaaaa

and u say u will son me


Ha ne way

good drop Va way 2 rep the Squad

~Lady Fiya~ 09-16-04 05:39 PM

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

nice battle overall you two.. came in here to support VA and the council.. nice drop fa sho, ma.. get at me, y'all..
~L F~

Removed

~Lady Fiya~ 09-16-04 05:40 PM

^oh shit, i meant to post as feedback, remove it, aight my fault..
~wun~

~Lady Fiya~ 09-16-04 05:41 PM

^oh shit, i meant to post as feedback, remove it, aight my fault..

Logic The Goonie 09-16-04 05:44 PM

lol, we get it baby girl, tis all good :thumbup:...

Kawn Flixx 09-16-04 08:24 PM

Voted For: Phantom

vote/Phantom

ha this was a pretty tight battle

but phantom's verse was just tight

struc. was coo

i liked how his lines weren't predictable
so i made my own flow for it-so it was
kinda interactive and i liked that

the wrodplay was nice also
and plus the rick james linewas funny

VB. i hated the bold everything
and the enlarged letters
plus flow was either too early or too late
wasn't feelin it

Phantom win

~1~

Eclipsik 09-16-04 09:42 PM

Voted For: Phantom

This was destruction. Phantom completely destroys Verbal. He got a hold of some information and ran with it. Smart. Just wailed on her mercilessly with the whole verse being a big fat personal. Verbal prolly against a average cat you would've had a chance, but this guy here not average obviously if he can flow like that. Punches and personals on his side completely crushed your verse Verbal.

eph 09-16-04 10:55 PM

uppin/.

Logic The Goonie 09-22-04 11:50 PM

upsy daisy........................................

Terumoto 09-23-04 05:19 AM

This was feedback posted for Verbal Abuse
 
va nice multis n punches

phantom. nice punches

:thumbup:

^this was a good battle

eph 09-25-04 01:27 PM

uppin...need some more votes on this.

Logic The Goonie 09-27-04 01:09 AM

werd, maybe if you were smart enuff u would put it in ya sig and vote on battles. just a thought. uppin

Logic The Goonie 09-28-04 07:25 PM

Posts: 1,204
Joined: Jul 2004
From: So. Killa Kali
Status: Online
Text Record: 15-5
Audio Record: 0-0

50Cal. 09-28-04 09:12 PM

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

ok verbal lol dope fucking opener here lol second bar dope too lol good ass personals third bar was ok slacked alittle 4th also slacked a little lol good punch on the 5th bar dope 6th no again 7th nice try but aint hit hard 8th also weak ender could have been better.verbal this had some dope vocab structure fell off in certain places some punches were dope others were slacking here overall a good verse a 7/10
phantom opener no it aint rhyme sun second good flow aint get the punch 3rd stupid hos in a.i huh you calling yourself a ho?aint get it at all lol 4th good ass personal lol lol at the ai line too 5th bar in the 6th bar wack 7th also 8th lol funny too 10th bar wack as fuck rest was wack phantom she merked you .4/10
this was the worst i ever heard from you until you step back up you are off my list of top 10 this sucked and your last one also stop rushing shit what the fuck are you doing you know i vote honest she had better punches throughout even though yours were more funny and shes not in the council either.maybe you dont know how to diss a femcee but this aint do it wack is all i can say get back on your game and send me a link when you do

Dirty Nigga 10-05-04 08:10 AM

This was feedback posted for Verbal Abuse
 
just checkin whasup with the votes an how the battles goin..

Soul Sickness 10-05-04 09:23 AM

Voted For: Phantom

yo dis was a hot battle but here the break down.....
personals Socrates
punches Socrates
flow verbal
structure Socrates
vocab Socrates

vote Socrates

it was a good battle no hate....return da favor iight peace ~1~....

D-ICED 10-08-04 12:18 AM

This was feedback posted for Phantom
 
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