NoMercy vs trojan
 

Battle Rules:

10-16 16 man no higher
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
blind spit

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-15-04 at 02:48 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Trojan has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 02:54 AM.

NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 02:54 AM.

Now ill be the one and only one to “merk” you quick alright “Trojan”/(1)
I will win with ease cuz you like a “faggot” some of us call a “Joanna-man”/.(2)
I kno you think yer scared cuz I could “win” easy cuz im dangerous/(3)
So now you kno that I don’t give “nomercy” now do you wanna “discuss”/.(4)
Its easy to become a greater “rhymer” spit it quick don’t say to much about yer fucked shit/(5)
You were even the first I ever met that was the first that’s not afraid to “admit”/.(6)
Now are you scared?, cuz my rhymes make you feel less “embellish”/(7)
Workin you should be easy, it’ll be like im “throwin” you down cuz its like im evil and more hellish/.(8)
Ill be forcen you to “elevate” cuz of the way I told you it was like my own suggestion/(9)
Drop right now is what I will be saying to you and ask me another “question”/(10)
What you a goof that names himself after a “condom-brand”?/(11)
This was only my choice to take out a “normal” one like you, now tell me the truth was it goodly “planned”/.(12)

it was a blind spit man i jsut elavated and read some of empires songs lol

am handin out repeative blows,ma rhymes dont show mercy..jus break jaws...
ma verse got more punches in it thn a jerry springer show...*
nomercy gettin stomps to the face,the way this bitch is been stept on...
his flowz like a water bed,cos its always gettin slept on...**
ya rhymes aint heavy..only way you'll sound good is to stay quite
fo sho,this bitch is used to loosin like he stay on instant diets...***
ya could never be ill,even if ya had cancer in five places...
and fag,u never gona be straight,not even if you wore braces***
a put verbs to ma verse,lyrically MERC and curse these herbs...
ma wordz hurt,leave ya more dead,thn someone ridin in bk of a hurst...
a leave ya burst...blood stains on ya screen..ma bars packin heat...
ya whack as fuck..kid ya bout as raw as burnt meat...*****
this boy say he 14..awww.lil man thts so sweet...
i jus give ya a line for each year of ya life..ya got beat...******


YES...i explained ma votes...for all you herbs....pz

*they always av punch ups on jerry springer
**flowz and water...water flowz....a bed is wer ya sleep..duh...
dont say its played....its about the 'flowz' and 'water' gettin slept on...
nt nesercerally the bed...think bout it...pz
***instand diets....to 'loose' weight...because u heavy
****braces...used to keep ya teeth 'straight'
*****raw meat is meat thts uncooked...so burnt meat is far from raw
******hes 14 or sum shit...it say in cla sic tryouts

nice verse...uppin this shit...

yo nice battle man now lets get some votes

Voted For: NoMercy

i think no mercy had this 1 he had a nice flow goin on n his rhymes were pretty tight like tha embellish n hellish line. his punchlines were ok need just a lil more in them n his vocab was pretty tight to so my vote goes to.....
vote=no mercy

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

LOL^^^wot the fuck......

uppin this shit? people vote i elavated again:) and im so happy now i feel like laughing:laugh" and the reason why i wanna laugh is cuz im mad that i cant in b-ball this year im the best in my devision and im the best at school jsut had to say that
but anyway uppin

your shits bin reported...........certifiedthug votes.....then u vote 4 him.....YES...i know u did...dont deny it...i know these things....and he left no link to return favour.....yall votin 4 each other....i aint dumb......and dont deny this shit......dick ridin fucks....

uppin this.......................

Voted For: Trojan

this battle kinda sucked.....

NoMercy came pretty sorry in my eyes. He had no attempts at wit ane his lines weren't really hitting at all.....

Trojan was OK. He had a line or two that were alright.....everything else doesn't really matter in my eyes when it comes to text....

Vote = Trojan

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uppin this..............

Voted For: NoMercy

trojans verse was pretty nice i felt most of ya punchlines except for the waterbed.....i know theres more behind it i just didnt feel it. wordplay was nice ye vocab just good, overall pretty tight verse especially the way u finished it off.

no mercy verse i didnt really feel at all.....nothin hit it for me just very plain and boring.....i see ur structure was alright and ya vocab was alright but man all i can say is 'elevate'.
u coulda done sumthin with him naming himself after a condom brand tho....good idea.


Vote Switched

sorry i fuct u........will fix that mistake i meant to vote for trojan....give me a sec

This was feedback posted for Trojan
 

i think trojan got this battle with better punches flow and personals no mercy ad an ight verse but i felt it wasnt hard enuf

lol.......^^^could av voted g......uppin this..........

well its true trojan is a condom brand lol
uppin

lol.........uppin...................

upppppppppiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn this shit yalllllll..........

Voted For: Trojan

this is the second battle of yours i have read and i am liking what i am seein , you new name should be one sided haha
nice drop
punche's// trojan
personals//trojan
flow//trojan
metaphors//trojan
thats all i an think of right now

so vote//trojan

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Voted For: Trojan

yo this is how i saw it.......
punches: trojan.....8/10..... nm 5/10
personals: no mercy 6/10.... trojan 3/10
multis none
metas: trojan....8/10....nm..6/10
flow...trojan....9/10.....nm 4/10

no mercy ur flow was off...........and barley rhymed

trojan ur punches connected....and i like ur metaphores


v/ trojan.................. good battle

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lmao.........wot the fuck......enygmas vote was easily explained.......haha....bullshit man.....u shud be banned for avin ur scam wit certified thug........biatch...lost ma respect nah........uppin this.......

holy man certifeidthug is a goof anyway i dont scam he just did it swear i usto do it lots he pmed me after and told me to vote for him on a battle after so i did plus theres money when you vote and trojan you did win but i saw 1 unexplained by someone else i forgot who but its gone now and i guess they seen more hmm:) o well
uppin

Voted For: Trojan

trojan u won dis shit it was close but u won bcuz of vocab and u tore him wit ya punches good shit u can do better tho

nomercy u were ok ya flow was better but where were the punches and metas u need to come harder if u wouldve u wouldve won no hate keep at it

vote= trojan

~peace~

nomercy pissed cuz he loosin lmao

^no im not im good now but do you even no what metas are cuz all my lines were metas and flow i didnt have any of them you realy think yer good then battle me if you kno metas haha and if i was you i would be afraid to show my record:laugh:
uppin

Voted For: NoMercy

Im given my man some credit for his age but trojan it was a lil hard to read yer shit same with NoMercy the stucture is so complex its hard to understand both of you had streched yer like the same rappers lol:)
punches: trojan
vocab: No
wordplay: trojan
metas: No
multi's: jsut by a bit No
opener: No nice wordplay to
closener: No the idea with condom unblieveble:)
flow: no need for this in text
vote and jsut a bit better: NoMercy loved it:)

lmao....structure soo complex to understand....both structures were simple to understand.......and the condom thing is played out.......lol.....and werd play......lol......u musta read the wrong verse man..........pz tho..................uppin this

This was feedback posted for Trojan
 

checking it out

are you cheating cos ya ips match with that kid that voted for ya

This was feedback posted for Trojan
 

I think u deff. got this battle man.. just checkin for suspicious votes..

Voted For: NoMercy

had ta give it ta nomercy wuzn't realli feelin' eitha verse but NoMercy had that last name diss an i wuz feelin tha so i gave it ta him no hate no dick ridin' anyway big up`z ta both y'all

Voted For: NoMercy

peeping to see if wat Trojan sed is true

fuck................ take that off............. as soon as possible.......... matter of fact, give it to trojan if anythin............

Voted For: Trojan

nice verse, you did way better then No Mercy..... good job

lol same for me too.......

i accidently pressed vote instead of feedback

hehe.......sssshhhhhhhhhh........lol..........nice crew vote right ther