e-dubz vs Yvonne
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


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e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 12:11 PM.

Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 12:11 PM.

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ima clap a glock 'n make u seak a cock 'fore u win over ur crap*
look at ur clock,tic-tock,cos its d last time you ever gon drop
outta my hot bitch slap,son,ur punches are str8 up hitting "light"
watch me stuff this bitch with fat,so he dont fall of with the mic
your lines weak as fuck,dey easily fall down a fork cos smokin "dubz" makes u a dork
i piss in ya mouth so u can flow,cuz I rep u&ur fam like the stat 2 new york**
a bitch without occupation,u'ld get one by spitting from what the fuck i mention***
you wouldn’t spit loads of vocabs even if u was an antique librarian
my advice is quit spittin&eat my meaty lyrics like u a hungry ass vegitarian


* dat shit is wasy to understand..........u dont get it?...u can aswell not vote

** stat 2 new york = the statue of liberty to new york......

*** his profile says he looking for 1 (dats what " I "understood)

a quick somn somn.....if you dont understand my verse for some reason.....then dont vote thanx

somethin quik, it should b enuff

leave your face masked with stitches even half assed im viscious
ill laugh 'n rip this cuz u aint seen da real problems like practice quizes
when cats flow they wack.... but when I'm talkin I'm nice
niggaz couldn't catch me "slippin'" if I was "walkin' on ice"
i'm conceited, there's two "I's" that "knows" my "mouth"
but let's "face" the facts..... I'm too high to notice now
you fear my skills...... I leave you clutchin' ya kinfolk
cuz I only "feel pain"..... when I'm "touchin' a window"

if u dont get any of the wordplay dont vote

Voted For: e-dubz

Ok, e-dubz came with harder punches right out the gate. I was feelin' that "practice quizzes" line, that was hot. Yvonne, your lines were stretched at times which threw your whole structure off. But hey, it's nothing a little practice can't fix. So my vote goes to e-dubz for harder punches, better style and better wordplay...
Vote - e-dubz

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uppin this bitch..........plz dont sleep on this

uppin

Voted For: e-dubz

My vote goes to e-dubz.

e-dubz: Flow was aight, dint really fall off too much and your punches hit her kinda hard. It was original and the wordplay was dope. The wordplay is what won u the battle in my eyes. The closer was dope but a few personals wouldnt go a miss. Anyhow, nice verse.

Yvonne: This verse was also nice but lacked the kind of quality dubz bought to the table. vocab was alrite. punches were ok, sum were a little weak like the dork, new york one, ut all in all it was a decent verse.

SO i vote for e-dubz.

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Voted For: Yvonne

ok 1st of all...idk why both of u think ur verse is so complex that no1 wud understand it...4 simple barz...dont gas yaself...but i'll b honest....heres da breakdown....

Punches - blahhhhhhhhh...very weak...none hardhittin but i'll give it to Yvonne...cuz they were SLIGHTY harder hittin then Dubz shyt...weak tho

Personals - Yvonne...only 4 the fact that he actually did try to get personal in his verse...Dubz wasnt very personal at all...jus some ramdom punches that were weak as well...

Meta4s - blahh...tie...none were really iLL like dat if there were any at all...so i gotta tie dat catagory

Wordplay - NONE...theres a problem wit both styles...Yvonne u kept switchin up ur Rhyme Scheme n it was makin ur verse sound worse...u was goin from AABB to ABAB...n it was startin to get confusin to where the punch was gna come in at...Dubz...ur wordplay was jus useless in wut u was sayin...none of it was special enuff to b used to DISS the other nigga u was battlin so dont gas urself wit dat last line u put !!!!!

Enjoyment - blahh...im gna have to tie this catagory 2 cuz i really wasnt feelin this battle...work on ya shyt iigh yall

but in da end i gotta give it to Yvonne cuz his punches were SLIGHTY harder n more direct n he had some personals in the mix as well...some of Dubz verse didnt even rhyme n if u gna have a short battle then at least rhyme it iigh...

Vote - Yvonne

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Voted For: e-dubz

e dubz nice drop man yvonne no hate but u were off flow anf ur rimes werent workin.. edubz nice punches and wordplay and metas. vonne elevate but you alrite i just wasnt feelin you no hate return tha favor one vote to edubz..

heres t6ha link if yall going to return tha favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149133

uppin..

upp....

This was feedback posted for e-dubz
 

Cant vote on this cause i know yvonne will probably dq my vote wich is gay but my vote would goto e-dubz yvonne your verse didnt flow whatsoever your word play was weak and the entire verse didnt really make sense structure needs alot of work. e-dubz flow was alright alot better than the yvonne's wordplay was tight yvonne had you on number of punches but your few hit harder and flowed way better although your closer was kinda weak and yvonne's was sick you still won this battle in my opinion.

uppin..dont sleep

who the hell is that guy????????????????..........i dont even know him ........wdf...o well


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Voted For: Yvonne

yvonne wins this cos she had harder punches which were absolutely direct...structure was a lil wack but i was feeling her style for the personals...both had a gd verse tho..but yvonne gets this...

uppin...

Voted For: e-dubz

E-DUBZ MERKED YVONNE IN THIS BATTLE..HARDER PUNCHES NICE STRUCTURE THA VERSE WAS IIGHT HAVE HARDER DISSES ...

YVONNE YA FLOW WAS KOO 2 I JUSS THINK E CAME HARDER NO HATE

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This was feedback posted for e-dubz
 

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.. vote here... ive seen better from both of u......

up..

Voted For: e-dubz

Opener - Dubz, Yvonne tried too hard to use multies
Closer - Dubz, Loved that shit dawg, Yvonne's was a weaker punch
Punches - Yvonne, Dubz didnt have as many
Personals - Yvonne, for use of Dubz name in his verse
Multies - Tie, althought Dubz opener was dope, you both used'em
Metas - Yvonne, had more than Dubz
Structure - Dubz, Yvonne's wasn't as clean
Vocab - Tie, both were satisfactory
Flow - Dubz, Yvonne's bars were longer and hat commas in strange places which threw off the flow

No hate boys, both verses were tight, I just wanna say props to both but there has gotta be one winner. As you can tell from my statistics above ^^^ E-Dubz is our winner here today in my honest opinion. Yvonne - Work on flow, structure, and vocab. Dubz - Work on Punches/Personals, and harder metas. Great Job.