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d. cepth shun vs Mc *MaZe*
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6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-12-04 at 03:10 PM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. |
Mc *MaZe* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 02:40 PM.
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look at dis lil punk ass d. cepth shun
wen u see me online it is best to fuckin run click the log out thing, shut the internet down u wana battle me wen im the one with the crown look,u must b dumb or are u smokin crack? this crown is mine and aint no one gettin it back because im just too good at doin wot i do and wiv a name like dat your bound to get slew (slew = boid off) |
D. Cepth Shun has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 02:56 PM.
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watch this kid get lost, like playing a hard Maze
and its like high force winds the way this fag sways ima eat M&M up in fully cos this bastards bite sized MC can't figure a coin trick he he was Genius wised ecery time Maze comes in a battle he tends to Reck-less cos he keeps ducking battles no wonder hes neck-less |
done in 3 mins
now let people vote My shit was keyed |
ayo!
yo shit was not keyed dont try it
a coin trick he he was (1 he will do,people aint gonna notise you more f you double your letters) ecery time Maze (im no expert but i think you ment to say every??) check yo shit b 4 you submit!!! thats wat i allways say mother fucker! cmon ppl vote up uppppiiiiinnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! :shoot: :shoot: :thefinger |
This was feedback posted for D. Cepth Shun
checkin it out
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Voted For: D. Cepth Shun
watch this kid get lost, like playing a hard Maze and its like high force winds the way this fag sways ^^^^^^^^ WEAK PUNCH HOMIE ima eat M&M up in fully cos this bastards bite sized MC can't figure a coin trick he he was Genius wised ^^^^^^^^^ KINDA A PUNCH BUT ITS OK ecery time Maze comes in a battle he tends to Reck-less cos he keeps ducking battles no wonder hes neck-less ^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD CLOSA MAYNE look at dis lil punk ass d. cepth shun wen u see me online it is best to fuckin run ^^^^^^^^ BOOOOOOOOOOOO click the log out thing, shut the internet down u wana battle me wen im the one with the crown ^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT WEAK PUNCH DER MAYNE WEAK look,u must b dumb or are u smokin crack? this crown is mine and aint no one gettin it back ^^^^^^^^^ OK WHERES DA PUNCHES MAYNE WEAK because im just too good at doin wot i do and wiv a name like dat your bound to get slew ^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT WEAK CLOSA MAYNE YO SHUN HAD AN WEAK VERSE BUT SOME OF DA PUNCHES WERE A LIL BETTA DAN MC.MAZE VERSE MAZE WORK ON YO PUNCHES U HAVE A LIL FLOW MAYNE WORK ON DEM PUNCHES HIT HARD NEXT TIME V-D.CEPTH SHUN RETURN DA FAV |
fuck you nigga
ayo u only voted dis lil bitch hear coz he sed dis:
Vote on my battles: I will always return the favor i was nuff better dan dis lil bitch and u all know it man that vote shouldnt have bin allowed man and you shouldnt say shit like dat u lil punk u only win battles coz u say to people ill vote for you if you vote for me u fuckin faggot get the fuck off this site nigga |
Voted For: D. Cepth Shun
D. Cepth Shun he came wayyy harder so he gets my vote his flow and punches were just simply better v/D. Cepth Shun |
Mc Maze Do U Want To Prove To Me Dat Ur Betta Dan Me Mayne And Matta Of Fact I Didnt Get A Win Yet Lol
Call Me A Punk Hmmmmmm Lets Go Kid Or U Quick To Back Down |
Even Untouch Says It Ur Wack Accept Yo Wack Rap Gene U Live By It Keep It And Carry It On
Fuckin Herb |
Voted For: D. Cepth Shun
rrrrriiiiiittttteeeeee....dis battle needs alil work...i aint even gna give the usual breakdown D. - weak verse...very simple, no creativeness, no meta4s, useless wordplay, punches didnt hit hard, corny personal, and it sounded like u was just rhymin just to rhyme MC - what can i say...^^^^^ THE EXACT SAME THING !!!!! all n all i have to give this verse to D.Cepth Shun because although both verses were weak...his punches were SLIGHTLYYYYYY harder n direct...MC was just gasin himself in half the battle...iight Vote - D.Cepth Shun drop an honest vote on da battle in my Sig....(HONEST) |
Neeeeed Voted Ppl Come On I Know Im Better Than Dis Piece Ov Shit Hear Cmon Ppl I Will Watch Out For Hew Eva Votes Me And Give A Fair Judgment But I Will Look Out For My Homies Ya Get Me, Need Votes Quick People
****u****p****i****n**** ****u****p****i****n**** |
^^ dam...face it...his verse was better...ur BEGGIN for votes...dat shyt anit coo fam !!!!
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Lol ^^^^^^^^ Baby Mc.maze Face Da Fait That U Loss Homie
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Word Yo Anyone Have A Baby Bottle For Dis Kid He Being Sarcastic And Stupid His Rhymes Needs Nourishment
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lol madd grimes^^
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Voted For: Mc *MaZe*
Aight Maze Got This One... Some Aight Wordplay From Maze, Not Many Good Punches From Either, But Maze Had The Better Structured More Consitant Verse.... Shun, Ya Verse Was Aight, U Lacked A Nice Opener An Your Finisher...Rhymin Wreck-Less An Necklace Kinda Stole The Idea From Ludas Track ''Stand Up''...So It Made The Impact Of The Finisher Less Effective... No Hate From Either Of Ya'll, Nice Verses, Keep Em Comin Return The Favor.. |
Upin
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!up up up UP UP UP UUUPPPIIINNN IN IN IN in in in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :shoot: :thefinger :shoot:
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hahah i did key it for the peeps sayign that i was wack... i didnt even try i put 1/10 effort cos i knew i was gonna win anyways i got an alias and more that 6 peeps know it upping |
This was feedback posted for D. Cepth Shun
nice shit nice shit but i wanna battle u mayne less g0o
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upping this
if you put that we had punches your a idiot and your vote will be d/q'ed cos none of us had any punches |
Voted For: D. Cepth Shun
nice battle i vote d. bcoz better. punches met mul per sttureetc.. he wins this east v/ d.cepth |
Voted For: D. Cepth Shun
D.Cepth Shun Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... Mc*MaZe* Punches were good too not as hard tho… Structure was good.. Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upping this shit huur give the honest vote niggahs
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vote you fags
we need votes up here |
Upping this siht
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Voted For: D. Cepth Shun
IIGHT THEY BOTH WAS WEAK....DCS HAD A LIL PUNCHES SO DID MCM..BOTH OF THA STRUCTUR WAS KOO NO VOCAB,PERSONALS,METAS(SOME), ELIVATE BOTH YALL |
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