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Pop Lotty 09-12-04 04:06 PM

Shabba Ranks vs [.:Diabolic:.]
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Due by 12:00

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 04:36 PM

Must drop verse in 480 minutes after check in.

System 09-12-04 04:06 PM

Shabba Ranks has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 04:06 PM.

System 09-12-04 04:10 PM

[.:Diabolic:.] has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 04:10 PM.

Pop Lotty 09-12-04 04:52 PM

Why should I try…when this kids gonna come weak and played…
Named yourself Street Legend, cuz you’ll never be a household name.
You on the wrong terrain, your even a shame to the site’s newbs…
I don’t care about your location dog, Ill always Bmore than you.
I’m whoring this dude, your gonna lose, you getting ya ass kicked…
Better off not showing up here…just like your sig graphics.
We all know it…. there’s now way you stand tough…
Think your cool, cuz you joined the ‘Hate Empire’ fan club.
Your whack my nig, go ahead and drop, it is your choice…
I hope you do, so you can just prove my point.

I went 10, match it.

[.:D:.] 09-12-04 05:18 PM

yo.....

Your "rank" is inferior, so hands down gimme my praise
I have prosperity, witout havin thuggish internet ways
You are a hazard, "diseasin" members wassup wit that
Cuz Shabba and Kyro be runnin around givin niggas the "Clap"
Cant equalize my complexity, searchin for lost answers
Shabba couldnt Speak sick even if he endorsed cancers
Continue to free post, battle statistics give explained reasons
Verse's transform ya E-Style code, Ranks commitin Treason
Truth is, Shabba is overrated, im here to portray the truth
gonna have to attend "counciling" after this "verbal Abuse"


.................

God 09-12-04 05:26 PM

Voted For: [.:Diabolic:.]

lol damn street sweept the floor with shabba...

Shabba
Why should I try…when this kids gonna come weak and played…
Named yourself Street Legend, cuz you’ll never be a household name.
pretty good
You on the wrong terrain, your even a shame to the site’s newbs…
I don’t care about your location dog, Ill always Bmore than you.
not really feelin this
I’m whoring this dude, your gonna lose, you getting ya ass kicked…
Better off not showing up here…just like your sig graphics.
decent ..
We all know it…. there’s now way you stand tough…
Think your cool, cuz you joined the ‘Hate Empire’ fan club.
Who hasnt.......weak
Your whack my nig, go ahead and drop, it is your choice…
I hope you do, so you can just prove my point.
good closer

overall your verse as decent not the best ive seen 6/10

Street
Your "rank" is inferior, so hands down gimme my praise
I have prosperity, witout havin thuggish internet ways
pretty hot opener
You are a hazard, "diseasin" members wassup wit that
Cuz Shabba and Kyro be runnin around givin niggas the "Clap"
lol nice punch
Cant equalize my complexity, searchin for lost answers
Shabba couldnt Speak sick even if he endorsed cancers
lmao..one of your best lines
Continue to free post, battle statistics give explained reasons
Verse's transform ya E-Style code, Ranks commitin Treason
pretty hot ..nice wordplay
Truth is, Shabba is overrated, im here to portray the truth
gonna have to attend "counciling" after this "verbal Abuse"
lmao... nice closer

nice verse son... 8/10

overall vote-Street

fluidmoon 09-12-04 05:56 PM

shit, i meant to say nice shit as feedback........dont worry i'll have it takin out

Removed

Logic The Goonie 09-12-04 05:58 PM

This was feedback posted for Shabba Ranks
 
too lazy to vote just peepin the pizzoles.........

[.:D:.] 09-12-04 06:09 PM

........:wtf:

Pop Lotty 09-12-04 06:52 PM

lmao@insane...a sick line is the best...ahahaha
Keep stealin ppl's names and avvys...ahahah

LivenLegend 09-12-04 07:09 PM

Vocab: Diabolic
Mulitiz: none really
Wordplay: Shabba Ranks
Structure: Diabolic
Punches: Diabolic
Personals: Diabolic

V/ Diabolical fa sho

LivenLegend 09-12-04 07:13 PM

Vocab: Diabolic
Mulitiz: none really
Wordplay: Shabba Ranks
Structure: Diabolic
Punches: Diabolic
Personals: Diabolic

V/ Diabolical fa sho

yea street killed him, wit nice structure, and got him wit punches, and had hot vocab, Shabba gotta elevate keep tryin nice battle stay up^

[.:D:.] 09-12-04 07:14 PM

^^nah dat dont count.... wont cheat....

Pop Lotty 09-12-04 07:24 PM

^Thanks...report it.

Pop Lotty 09-12-04 07:26 PM

How did he even post in here?

[.:D:.] 09-12-04 07:37 PM

dunno........it didnt poll anyway....its a vote from joka..and im guessin that Fluidmoon..pressed vote instead of feedback...thats taken away too cuz she's in my crew...1-0 my way...

[.:D:.] 09-13-04 03:10 PM

up............................

[.:D:.] 09-13-04 08:42 PM

DAMN...........up.....

Durmil 09-13-04 09:31 PM

Voted For: Shabba Ranks

Vote Shabbe

Much better personals...more to the point and hit harder...i was also feelin ur punches more

Why should I try…when this kids gonna come weak and played…
Named yourself Street Legend, cuz you’ll never be a household name.

^my fav line...pretty nice

both ur flows were fine and i dunno most other categories were pretty even so Shabba gets this "w" from punches and personals bein better

*but i'd still murk you..LoL*

Vote Shabba

Keith Moon 09-13-04 10:26 PM

Voted For: Shabba Ranks

hahah v/ shabba

shab
nice verse came hard hard hitten personals...nice metaphors............youre 2 good kid...lol

had me laughing

diabolic...bleh came ok...no real punches wasnt feelin ya verse soorry...

Keith Moon 09-13-04 10:28 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by LivenLegend
Vocab: Diabolic
Mulitiz: none really
Wordplay: Shabba Ranks
Structure: Diabolic
Punches: Diabolic
Personals: Diabolic

V/ Diabolical fa sho

yea street killed him, wit nice structure, and got him wit punches, and had hot vocab, Shabba gotta elevate keep tryin nice battle stay up^



sooo d/r shabba needin to elevate....hahahhahah

Pop Lotty 09-14-04 03:09 PM

up.

Keith Moon 09-14-04 09:48 PM

yo man b.t.w good battle i voted but cna yall rerturn the favon my tournie battle gainst re$tricted thnx...

~Luciano~ 09-14-04 10:06 PM

Voted For: [.:Diabolic:.]



Why should I try…when this kids gonna come weak and played…
Named yourself Street Legend, cuz you’ll never be a household name.
2/10
You on the wrong terrain, your even a shame to the site’s newbs…
I don’t care about your location dog, Ill always Bmore than you.
1/10
I’m whoring this dude, your gonna lose, you getting ya ass kicked…
Better off not showing up here…just like your sig graphics.
2/10
We all know it…. there’s now way you stand tough…
Think your cool, cuz you joined the ‘Hate Empire’ fan club.
2/10
Your whack my nig, go ahead and drop, it is your choice…
I hope you do, so you can just prove my point.
1/10

ya punches were simple ive seen alot more originality from u in the past like u didnt bother comin hard for this battle at all
there was basically no wordplay or vocab in this u had an ok personal here and there
overall was a very weak drop



Your "rank" is inferior, so hands down gimme my praise
I have prosperity, witout havin thuggish internet ways
2/10
You are a hazard, "diseasin" members wassup wit that
Cuz Shabba and Kyro be runnin around givin niggas the "Clap"
3/10
Cant equalize my complexity, searchin for lost answers
Shabba couldnt Speak sick even if he endorsed cancers
2/10
Continue to free post, battle statistics give explained reasons
Verse's transform ya E-Style code, Ranks commitin Treason
4/10
Truth is, Shabba is overrated, im here to portray the truth
gonna have to attend "counciling" after this "verbal Abuse"
6/10

ya punches were also kinda basic and played ya wordplay was better and ya complexity was there ya structure was alson on
point but u had a nice drop
ya closer won u this battle

Pop Lotty 09-14-04 10:08 PM

^rofl.

fluidmoon 09-15-04 02:30 AM

uppin for the fam....yo, BIG, you should really explain that vote man,and no offense but you postin everywhere looks like D/R as well.......1

Pop Lotty 09-15-04 08:51 PM

up.

Know-Gimix 09-15-04 10:50 PM

This was feedback posted for [.:Diabolic:.]
 
this was a dope verse... you both came pretty tite but i was honestly feelin this more... good shit.

Pop Lotty 09-16-04 08:15 PM

up.

Pop Lotty 09-17-04 12:29 PM

up...why cant ppl vote.........!!!!!!
You can leave ya links if ya want.

Delorean 09-19-04 12:23 AM

Voted For: Shabba Ranks

diabolic: ummmmm

Your "rank" is inferior, so hands down gimme my praise
I have prosperity, witout havin thuggish internet ways
nice vocab ok opener 7/10
You are a hazard, "diseasin" members wassup wit that
Cuz Shabba and Kyro be runnin around givin niggas the "Clap"
blah aight personal but weak 6/10
Cant equalize my complexity, searchin for lost answers
Shabba couldnt Speak sick even if he endorsed cancers
damn never say sick in a battle thats whack 6/10
Continue to free post, battle statistics give explained reasons
Verse's transform ya E-Style code, Ranks commitin Treason
ok blah it was decent5.5/10
Truth is, Shabba is overrated, im here to portray the truth
gonna have to attend "counciling" after this "verbal Abuse
ok wordplay i understood it 6.5/10

overall 6.2/10

Shabba: ummm

Why should I try…when this kids gonna come weak and played…
Named yourself Street Legend, cuz you’ll never be a household name.
hott personal and opener tight wordplay 9/10
You on the wrong terrain, your even a shame to the site’s newbs…
I don’t care about your location dog, Ill always Bmore than you.
nice play on location mmmmaaaddd hootttt 8/10
I’m whoring this dude, your gonna lose, you getting ya ass kicked…
Better off not showing up here…just like your sig graphics.
nice again 7.5/10
We all know it…. there’s now way you stand tough…
Think your cool, cuz you joined the ‘Hate Empire’ fan club.
ummm quite basic 6/10
Your whack my nig, go ahead and drop, it is your choice…
I hope you do, so you can just prove my point.
decent closer but you could do better 6/10

overall 7.3/10

vote goes to Mike Hawk

Pop Lotty 09-19-04 06:16 PM

up.

[.:D:.] 09-19-04 09:02 PM

damn......yall niggas sleepin......up

Pop Lotty 09-19-04 10:08 PM

Dame...this place is dead.
Up!...................

Pop Lotty 09-20-04 03:10 PM

up.

Pop Lotty 09-21-04 04:39 PM

wtf..this shit shouldnt be goin 3 pages.....up!

Status 09-21-04 07:21 PM

Voted For: Shabba Ranks

aight im gonna have to give htis to oyu becuz you just had no real played lines

MIKE: you was aight you only one htis becuz you actually had perosnals....good spit you just need to take more time to drop...so you correct any errors and shit...but good spit i liked the empire line it was funny and true...

DIABOLIC: you was aight i liked your structure it was nice....but your punches were played that cancer lines was so last week and that verbal abuse is also so last week....but just try and apply your self a lilmore...


vote=mike

Pop Lotty 09-21-04 10:31 PM

Word Life...uppin for the last vote...................

Daclassic 09-22-04 01:05 AM

Voted For: [.:Diabolic:.]

shabba their is nothing fantastic really about this. A few punches but they didnt hit hard. Your verse was funny. but it look real simple like you rushed to do this ...the structure was not good

diabolic. nice structure it was okay. you have witty wordplay. very complexed well complexed enough. flow was nice. No hard hitting punches either. you'll both got personal on this one...but nothing outstanding. I'm a have to go with diabolic on this one.

return the favor

Pop Lotty 09-22-04 07:14 PM

up!


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