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20 GraND vs Street Poet
Battle Rules:
5 Bars, so like 10 lines... No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting This is for fun, me and my nigga street! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-13-04 at 12:02 AM Must drop verse in 90 minutes after check in. |
20 GraND has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 10:33 PM.
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yea ok vote on flowz yo flowz only damn it
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Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 10:35 PM.
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Ight, some friendly battle right hurr
I got arrows that will hit you in different directions// Artillary shed smaller than your N Sync poster collection// The last thing ull hear is the fuckn trigger click// Ironic.. uve been beatin in the day with a night stick// Ill take an egg beater and shove it into your chest// Then youll know the true meaning of beatn to death// This aint a battle its and abortion, cuz im killing this kid// Your lame ass rhymes you need to "get-rid"// This freestyle is soo good, it should be made into a song// You wish u were a "vet", so you could take care of ur mom// (^^^ooooOOOOoo^^^) Nothing personal mayne, straight up freestyle u know how it is. Good luck to ya MAYNE.. HOLLA! |
Yall Katz Iz Garbage Ya Level is Way Belo Mine Ur Wacknes Is Undefined-
Spit Dat Sizzlin' Shit.. Hotter then da Devil N the Sun Combined- Kids Gettin Raped Quick Like Michael Jackson at a 7 year olds BurfDay- Droppin Missiles Spit Big Lines..Look Like Fuckin Eearthquakes- Get Tackled And "Caught On Ya Own Side" LIke A Touchback- U Rushin In My Yard like dat meat comercial U Quick To Get Rushed Back- Playin Against Da Kid You'll Get Shook Quick Like Dem And 1 Niggaz- Typa Ma fucka To GetUp In Ya Grill Slap U An Ask You Now What Nigga!? Mayn You Wack Ya Raps Are Real Dirty Like A Gas Station Basket- Im Like VampiresYou Cant Kil me I jus Keep Resurectin From My Cascatte- Click Of A Button n Ull Get Shut Down Nigga cheerin like I gota Tuchdown- *POP POP* What Now!?! Kids in jail gettin raped up the butt now-hha its like dat flow damn it flow vote on flow |
if dis battle aint vote on flow it will be dq point blank
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Voted For: Street poet
VOTE GOES TO S.P. BETTER VOCAP BETTER FLOW BETTER WORDPLAY BETTER PUNCHES I THINK THIS BATTLE WAS EASILY 1 sided........... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lets get some real votes plz, we need details.... not just "hes better"..
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This was feedback posted for 20 GraND
20 grand you need some stucture in there its easy stucuture just add some
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UppN
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come on lets get some votes plz
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This was feedback posted for Street poet
you both were ill yo and i woulda voted for street doe he was way better wit punches...
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Uppn
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Aight Yall Need To Vote On Dis Battle
Yo 109 Peepz View Dis Thread And No One Battle Come On Yo Vote |
I Mean No One Votes
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VOTE or DIE ppl...
lol COME ON |
Voted For: Street poet
I got arrows that will hit you in different directions// Artillary shed smaller than your N Sync poster collection// ^^no punch but good flow The last thing ull hear is the fuckn trigger click// Ironic.. uve been beatin in the day with a night stick// ^^this was koo Ill take an egg beater and shove it into your chest// Then youll know the true meaning of beatn to death// ^^nice..lol This aint a battle its and abortion, cuz im killing this kid// Your lame ass rhymes you need to "get-rid"// ^^flow fell off This freestyle is soo good, it should be made into a song// You wish u were a "vet", so you could take care of ur mom// (^^^ooooOOOOoo^^^) ^^ok,but keep on topic its a battle between you n him not his mom...lol... Yall Katz Iz Garbage Ya Level is Way Belo Mine Ur Wacknes Is Undefined- Spit Dat Sizzlin' Shit.. Hotter then da Devil N the Sun Combined- ^^nice flow but no hard punch.. Kids Gettin Raped Quick Like Michael Jackson at a 7 year olds BurfDay- Droppin Missiles Spit Big Lines..Look Like Fuckin Eearthquakes- ^^??.good flow but did'nt really make sense?? Get Tackled And "Caught On Ya Own Side" LIke A Touchback- U Rushin In My Yard like dat meat comercial U Quick To Get Rushed Back- ^^iffy rhymin/back n back?.shouldnt rhyme the same word. Playin Against Da Kid You'll Get Shook Quick Like Dem And 1 Niggaz- Typa Ma fucka To GetUp In Ya Grill Slap U An Ask You Now What Nigga!? ^^ok.same as the line before.. Mayn You Wack Ya Raps Are Real Dirty Like A Gas Station Basket- Im Like VampiresYou Cant Kil me I jus Keep Resurectin From My Cascatte- ^^ok Click Of A Button n Ull Get Shut Down Nigga cheerin like I gota Tuchdown- *POP POP* What Now!?! Kids in jail gettin raped up the butt now-hha its like dat ^^ok closer aight this was an ok battle but you both lacked in hard hitting punches n should work on that,both had good flow but 20 grand yours fell off at points,overall pretty close...but i gave it to street poet...for a couple slightly better punches n content in verse. |
This was feedback posted for Street poet
so poets can rap
punches- street personals- neither multis- street multas- street flow- street word play- street Street nice drop. flow wuz on, punches hit hard, but no personals. 20 not bad verse just not as good as streets. just keep elevatin. also keep the flow goin, u fell off a few times. Street: ''Yall Katz Iz Garbage Ya Level is Way Belo Mine Ur Wacknes Is Undefined- Spit Dat Sizzlin' Shit.. Hotter then da Devil N the Sun Combined-" nice punch. keep em comin 20: "I got arrows that will hit you in different directions// Artillary shed smaller than your N Sync poster collection//" funny and decent punch. v/street if i could vote |
Voted For: Street poet
yo post got this you had beter punches and better flow 8/10 on punches and flow nice word useage i liked it all you kept it real and didnt need to battle this rookie newb grand- work on your word useage the rhymes were all typical and played out think of shit dont just type what first comes to mouth aight dawg work on you structure and punces over all 3/10 no hate tho man i realize ur just learnin so its understandable just try to pick some other newbs ya know ones you can handle....sike na you lear when you get on good ppl but then they shit on your text so just get newb's till you work on ur shit |
i meant poet not post my bad man
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oppps my bad grand u not a newb i glanced at the adio record and i thought it was ur text but i still meant all i posted
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yo uppin uppin mayne uppin peepz vote or die damn it~!
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UPPN, as P.Diddy would say
VOTE or DIE |
Voted For: 20 GraND
not the best ive seen from 20 grand but he came a little harder then street poet and street poet im aloud to vote like this so dont get mad and im voting honest man so ya 20 grand you had some wordplay not realy to much but this is what i found out in this battle check it out: punches: 20 vocab: 20 wordplay: poet metas: 20 multi's: poet stucture: poet flow: 20 opener: 20 closener: 20 basically 20 took this one:) heres my vote and its for 20 grand:) return soem feedback in my open mic Pure Pressure thanks:) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: 20 GraND
YOU GOT THIS ONE BECAUSE YOU HAD BETTER PUNCHES & PERSONALS V/T 20 Grand |
yo UPPN
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uppin peep'z vote or die lol uppin for mo votes
~peace~ |
UPPN, no one votes anymore? whats up wit dat??
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Voted For: Street poet
neither was real nice but street poet got dis one... FLOW was better..<---happy now?... better vocab, punches, more personals, realy wat makes a better verse.. v/ street poet |
Voted For: 20 GraND
20 Grand got my vote here lol im just closin this battle well trying to cuzz other dude says he's banned for biting so yea but good verse kid |
Yup, holla at me mayne.
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Jesus, 2 months... lol |
Voted For: 20 GraND
lmao..........he said vote on flow........flow isnt the most important thing in text....... ill-had good mulites........some played lines......you had some good setups but neva really came threw with the punches....metas were aight......... 20-punches were pretty good.....some pretty good concepts.....structure is aight.....metas are also pretty good............the vet/ mom line was illllllll it had me laughin v/20 |
Voted For: 20 GraND
I think this one was a pretty easy one to vote on. 20 Grand just had more not boring punches. His weren't that great, but Ill Prophet's were just horrible......not to mentioned stretched a whole hell of a lot.... Vote - 20 Grand |
Voted For: Street poet
well ya flow was pretty nice..and u had a lil wordplay..and urs was longer then his witch made it more interestin |
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