100%Gifted vs Street poet
 

Battle Rules:

5 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-15-04 at 10:44 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 10:45 PM.

100%Gifted has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 10:45 PM.

yup my verse
 

..you ain't to me your a flaw-dude, chop ya teeth son like a [jaw-salute!]|..gift'd knock out this dude, leave ['sp(esp) dropp'd'] like mrs.clieo's [law-suits!!]1
..dawg you fake so imma make ya head-ride, ya post couldn't be ranked good if your [thread-was-high!]|..take a tomb stone cas gift'd will leave ya ['restin in piece'](peace) like hippie sleepin [the bed-side!!]2
..please you ain't special, ya talent is a high as [middle-informeicals!]|..no wants to read this dude shit, so ['throw out the s'] shit bitch this ain't even a [skittles-commerical!!] 3
..you have no hook you couldn't real-in-thugs, you bit n steal-in still would [put you above!]|..gift'd will put his hand through streets chest to leave his heart opened like people expressin [feelings-of-love!!]4

my rhymes are as "cold as ice in an air conditioner" bitch i'm "sendin chills", like the "Bay of Pigs" kid i'm gonna sit back and watch u "fail this mission"//
u need 'A' pair of glasses to fix ur vision because i'm the illest New-'B' u'll ever 'C' on television (ABC), this "Kat" wouldn't "send PURR-fect" hits if he was "mailin-kittens"//

bitch u ain't prevailin this shit, i'm like a "watch repairman" the way my rhymes are like "clockwork", ur "PUNCHES ain't SHIT" unless u "SOCK TURDS"//
i'll ruin ur concerts and leave "all eyes on me" like "Pac's words", u winnin the Oscars and when i say "OSCARS" i mean u winnin a "BRATWURST"//

afraid to battle me? look up "chicken on yahoo" and this will be the first emcee on the "COCK search", ur a "portable bitch" the way "u get on Top of Laps"// (laptop)
u'll drop n collapse, pray to the "HOLY GHOST" and "PREECH" every word i say cuz my words will send ur "FATHER to rehab"//

i'll remove ur "EYES" and cut "MIDWAYS IN CAPS" the way i'm "SAWin ur KNEES in HALF", need "COREL to DRAW" ur body in chalk with my "PERFECT-WORDS"// (WordPerfect & Corel Draw)
i hurt in absurd ways, every word dispursed will kill ur lines twice as worse, i might just lurk every night behind a church cuz ur demise is murked//

GIFTED these rhymes will leave u higher than takin ten new pills, looks like i'm gonna have to break one of the "Ten Commandments" cuz it's a "sin to kill"//
every word i send is real, u won't tell ur location cuz of the kin u feel, ur rhymes are "immune" from being "sick", bitch u ain't winnin "ill"//

=5 BARZ

UPPIN VOTES IN PLZ

..you ain't to me your a flaw-dude, chop ya teeth son like a [jaw-salute!]|..gift'd knock out this dude, leave ['sp(esp) dropp'd'] like mrs.clieo's [law-suits!!]1
..dawg you fake so imma make ya head-ride, ya post couldn't be ranked good if your [thread-was-high!]|..take a tomb stone cas gift'd will leave ya ['restin in piece'](peace) like hippie sleepin [the bed-side!!]2
..please you ain't special, ya talent is a high as [middle-informeicals!]|..no wants to read this dude shit, so ['throw out the s'] shit bitch this ain't even a [skittles-commerical!!] 3
..you have no hook you couldn't real-in-thugs, you bit n steal-in still would [put you above!]|..gift'd will put his hand through streets chest to leave his heart opened like people expressin [feelings-of-love!!]4

i had to post it twice.. sorry lol.. i had to post it the box.. my bad.. lol.. alright.. uppin for votes to come through this bitch.. upping

Voted For: Street poet

aight...good battle...gifted ure an up ad comming rapper...but ure gonna need a lot abit more to edge poet...ok poet...i like how u played ure barz out....they were long...but they hit EVERY time...u had good word use...punches were striong...multies everywhere...personals were good...and the wordplay was excelent...i like some of the subjscts u used...and gifted...u did well also...BUT...u need to get more creative...and use better words...vote poet...its just better

This was feedback posted for 100%Gifted
 

just checkin......................................

Voted For: Street poet

y0o mayne wasnt ya best shit not at all but betta than gifted

i liked wordplay and the wrds u used good shit ya vocab was what got u tha win////u had no metas and no real punches sum were iight but not ya bess wrk mayne no hate jus sayin na mean

gifted ya shit was ok ya punches hit harder but ya vocab was off and ya wordplay was all over i couldnt follow ur flow at all it was real hard to read i liked tha miss cleo thing but it wasnt enuff to get u tha win

vote= street

~peace~

Voted For: 100%Gifted

well i think 100% came 100% and Street poet came with only maby 50%

opner- 100
flow-100
personal-street(close)
punches-100
closer-close

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This was feedback posted for Street poet
 

checkin the polls.........

Voted For: Street poet

Street Poet:
better punchlines, better word play, and just doper verse

Gifted: Your format is kinda fucked. Some of it was dope, no doubt, but ya shit was hard to read and understand bra. Get rid of the bracktes and shit. Make it easier to read.

Voted For: Street poet

very tight battle, one of the closet of seen, it was crazy good shit from both of u but my vote is gonna have to go to street poet. sp got my vote because his punches seem to hit a lil bit harder then gifted's punches, ya both had mad punches in their. Street poet i liked that ABC television line
and Gifted i liked your closer. Ya spit some shit, the structures threw me off but if i had to judge i think gifted had the better structure, u both had some tight meta's, i didn't really see any personals. Both ya flows were good but could've been better. The opener went to sp while the closer went to gifted.

vote: Street Poet

no beef, return the honest favor - quick witted vs most, quick witted vs certifiedthug, quick witted vs upfront

Aight Peep'z 1 More Vote Get Dis Shit Closed Mayne Get It Closed

Come On People'z Vote On Dis Battle 1 More To Go Mayne Lets Go Vote

ok i had breck down for you i think street poet is just a little bitch and has problems with a vote aginst him

W/E HOMIE uppin in dis battle uppin mayne uppin

Voted For: Street poet

yo man you got this hands down no hate on gift'd he had some nice lines but poet you punches hit harder and more metas nice battle all tog but just work on that structure and youll be set...gift'd work on your punces and make sure u type right i kept getting confused on what you were trying to get threw work on that dont use all that [blah(blah)] that just isnt appeling at all no style sorry but poet took it hands down