NoMercy vs Lightnin'
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 01:34 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Lightnin' has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 01:36 AM.

how many linez?

I split ya like a pussy cause you gettin a lil mushy/
I thought yous was shaved, but ya pubes was all bushy/
You talk alot of shit but you never back it up/
I read ya fuckin lines, confused like what the fuck/
Ya flow is garbage, ya soundin retarded and foolish/
I keep it gangsta, like a nigga I am toolish/
You dick ridin bitch on the PSA/
But don't eva fuck wid a nigga from the Oaktown bay/
Oaktown hold it down for my crew, 4-0-8/
Ya head is full of air, and I'm here to deflate/
Ya body full of bull, hollow tips and seemen/
I eat beef, nigga yousa veegan/
You don't want war nigga I'm a rebel/
Have you hit puberty? your voice is all treble/
No bass in out your face, you sound like a chick/
So in the words of Luda, get off the T.I.P of my dick/

NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 01:43 AM.

Lines is Unlimited, spit ya shit and get it done. I dun care nigga fill up the screen cause you gon need it.

ok then w/e you say goof

I could sweep you “5-0” now you kno what i can do some people say im like a “grimreaper”/(1)
This battle was over before it “started” now you even in more deeper/.(2)
Ill be the 2nd one to force you to lose but realy I cant say that to much cuz its just an opinion/(3)
But yer realy getting annoying with yer “freeposting” in my threads you like a annoying “minion”/.(4)
Spitin words I do with ease but to say you done fast that’s just an “opinion” of the mind/(5)
Catch you in the back thinking yer “gangsta” but you not even a threat to mankind/.(6)
Hittin you up with words that come from my “brain” make you snitch like a “coward”/(7)
But all as you are is a faker and a crapy “playa” like juwan howard/.(8)
You got nothing on me cuz you got no “vocab” or anything not even yer own hart with a bit of independence/(9)
So that makes yer style die down so fast its like you “killed” it and then you got no people for yer sheet full of all yer attendance/.(10)

Jawan was fab five and live up in Michigan/
Its like Common, in you I see the bitch again/
Once again ya flow is more garbage then dumpster/
My flow is phatter then Profesor Klump -ster/
So I know this is my second flow about to blow/
But I thought I'd let ya know that you jus let me go/
Spit a two bit on which fo you to shit/
But you saw my foot, and on it you start to sit/

Voted For: NoMercy

aiight ..... lemme break this down

flow: lightning
vocab: No mercy
Punches: Tie
Personals: NoMercy

Well, this was a close ass battle.... there were no real openers and/or finishers from either of you two.... but i felt no mercy more


honest votes:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148421
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148011

^ya true but this guy sucks ass i barly tryed:) but you messed vocab n metas n multi's prob dont kno what they are i guess haha

Just so everyone know, the top one was my battle verse

Mercy you talk alot of shit, you can put all the shit in there you want, but if you got no flow you still sound like shit. FLOW is a huge part of rap music, if you ain't got it yousa busta. Check your shit, No flow! None of it! You can say how bad I suck dick and bring in all the personal shit you want, all the metaphors you want, but if you can't tie it in wid a tight flow, ya shit is garbage period. Thats what makes it not easy. Any of ya'lls that read his busted ass verse, and think that his verse is decent, no nothing about flow.

This was feedback posted for NoMercy
 

keep it real that was dope...i liked ur verse better...

^^ lemme just get this straight....... flow is a big role in a decent verse.... and i know what multies and mettas are mayne.... ive been doing this battle verses for roughly a year now (well on and off) ...... i know when i c a decent verse.... allthough its difficult to always come up with it. lightning.... you had a hot verse.... you just need to concentrate on other aspects of a complete battle verse.... 1st comes flow, then punches, then mettas and multies.... keep to your style and youll be ill in no time

thats my fuckin 2 cents

to tell you what im talking about theres no need for flow in text you only need it for audio aight and remember that text is all punches, metas, wordplay whitch i need work on, vocab. and then theres the opener and closener but man you realy need to elavate you got no metas no multi's and no vocab and no wordplay and no stucture theres nothing there lol
and its easy to write metas and multi's i do it all the time now just listen to empire hes pretty good byt hes not the best his audio is about 7/10 and theres way better then that like phenom-in-all hes the best in my veiw hes 14-1 in audio hes got dope ass wordplaya nd everything man try finding his link for audio and man you are gonna get beat by a 14 year old :laugh:

uppin

Voted For: NoMercy

Lightnin verse
I split ya like a pussy cause you gettin a lil mushy/
I thought yous was shaved, but ya pubes was all bushy/
2/10 u a nasty lil man lol
You talk alot of shit but you never back it up/
I read ya fuckin lines, confused like what the fuck/
2/10 hmmm...
Ya flow is garbage, ya soundin retarded and foolish/
I keep it gangsta, like a nigga I am toolish/
0/10.. braggin....yawn
You dick ridin bitch on the PSA/
But don't eva fuck wid a nigga from the Oaktown bay/
2/10 blah..
Oaktown hold it down for my crew, 4-0-8/
Ya head is full of air, and I'm here to deflate/
3/10 um ok punches
Ya body full of bull, hollow tips and seemen/
I eat beef, nigga yousa veegan/
0/10 wtf is veegan? haha makin up new words.
You don't want war nigga I'm a rebel/
Have you hit puberty? your voice is all treble/
1/10 ... enough said.
No bass in out your face, you sound like a chick/
So in the words of Luda, get off the T.I.P of my dick/
4/10 the last verse was ok

overall 2.3/10 after all the shit talkin.. u failed homey... this was below average.. u need help and work on wordplay, vocab, verbals, disses and everythin else..and ull be ok

I could sweep you “5-0” now you kno what i can do some people say im like a “grimreaper”/(1)
This battle was over before it “started” now you even in more deeper/.(2)
3/10 hmm.. "I could sweep you “5-0”" lol u said that in our battle.. but it proved false.
Ill be the 2nd one to force you to lose but realy I cant say that to much cuz its just an opinion/(3)
But yer realy getting annoying with yer “freeposting” in my threads you like a annoying “minion”/.(4)
4/10 blah.. some good verbals
Spitin words I do with ease but to say you done fast that’s just an “opinion” of the mind/(5)
Catch you in the back thinking yer “gangsta” but you not even a threat to mankind/.(6)
3/10 thsi was ok..
Hittin you up with words that come from my “brain” make you snitch like a “coward”/(7)
But all as you are is a faker and a crapy “playa” like juwan howard/.(8)
0/10 ... juwan howard?? ..
You got nothing on me cuz you got no “vocab” or anything not even yer own hart with a bit of independence/(9)
So that makes yer style die down so fast its like you “killed” it and then you got no people for yer sheet full of all yer attendance/.(10)
5/10 stretched out like fuck.. but it was good..

overall 4.5, u had little wordplay,few pucnhes But ok vocab, ur flow was kinda messy, some weak disses ur probably savin it for someone worthy..

even tho we don't agree most the time.. u took this battle mafucka. hahah

^yo i respect that you are gonna beat me in all thanks for the vote to man sry for beefin but i elavated and ya to anser yer question ya this guy sucks i was playin around

hmm yeah yeah.. i will take my vote back thank u..
and yeah keep votin for urself(sha money) aka nomercy hahah.. u shouldn't of done it man...

peace

Voted For: NoMercy

lol now i kno who nomercy is ic ic ya he sucks lol im leaven but he still won this battle easy :laugh:

This was feedback posted for Lightnin'
 

lightnin had it until the end. luda's line was fuckin hot but you cant recylce the shit man. w/e....light had the nicest flow.

<b>^^^^^^^ NoMercy i swear by everything that is holy on gods green earth i hope i never see your bitch ass in public.</b> i hope that youre just high or retarded (really) because what you said is the most incompitant thing ive ever heard. i actually feel a little more stupid now from reading your mouth full of dick. FUCK YOU and fuck your perspective of freestyling. but youre only 14....so i can understand your immaturity.



^^^ word homie i feel what youre sayin. flow is essentially the foundation of hip hop. freestyling evolved from hip hop...its all part of the same genre and if you dont have flow in freestyles then you shouldnt be a part of hip hop. no one ever recognizes what it takes to combine flow and punches at the same time....which is what makes most of the mother fuckers on here whack dick. "punches are what its all about"....fuck you who think that. just fuck you.

Voted For: NoMercy

No Mercy took this bcus Lightnin started off with the most played opener ever. NoMercy had some decent punches but they were mostly stretched.
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Voted For: NoMercy

Ne mercy has y vote... he had a way ebtter verse in my opinion and i likes his style... he had real good flow and i understood.... and you had some alright structure,

Lightnin.... you werent bad ... you had some nice structure good punches ... but mercy came harder with those... and you had nice flow but mercy still came harder with that.. Sry but mercy has this one...

V/ NoMercy