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insane16 vs sHoTTaBoY
Battle Rules:
10 - 14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting I Dunno Why U Want Me To Drop The Verse...Nobody Can See It Til We Both Post Anyway.. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-16-04 at 11:45 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 11:48 AM.
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Yo, Yo, Check It...
Okay... I'ma Spit Some Lyrics That'll Leave U ''In'Pain''.. ''Picture Me Rollin'' An U Jumpin On The ''Bandwagon'' But It ''Drove'' U ''INsane''... Hence The ''Name''.... ..An If That Aint Bad Enuff This Fool Got A ''Sweet Tooth'' 4 Cock Likes Its ''SuagrCane''.. ..Claimin U Ah ''GangBanger'' When All Them Boys Did Was Run A ''Train''... ..They Fucked U n Beat U An U Still Wanted To Give Em ''Brain''... It Hurts I Know But This Is ''Verbal Pain'' At Its ''Finest''... ..Exposin This ''Queen'' (Queer) As His ''Royal Dick Suckin HEIGNESS''... I Only Agreed This Battle Cause I Need Some ''Wins''.. ..U Stood Up n Now I'm Knockin U Down Like ''Pins'' (Bowlin) I'ma Let U Throw The First ''Punch'' n See If U Connect Wit My ''Chin''.. ...If U Miss Then U Better Run n Hide From The 2 ''Twins''...(2 Hand Guns In The Sig) |
insane16 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 11:35 AM.
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insane da best dis shyt is my ill habit/
all dees otha kids is still fagget/ u cant weight up/ lil fagget after 4 bars and u can barely stay up/ cuz insane aint watin/ i could fukin maintain satan/ u and ya boys will forever reside in heaven/ cuz my shyt comes unexpected like 9-11/ my skills is evil and highly protested/ im the fukin champion uncontested/ |
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This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
lol @ eating herbs.. battle me u faggot..
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lol wutever i def jus spit that in 30 sec so it dont even matter u will prolly win cuz i had 2 do that quick so my teacher aint see it and yea it suked but i dun give a shyt....
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Yo, Upppin Ya'll..!!!
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yo upppin
leave a link n i'ma return the favor p e a c e |
uppin for some god damn voters to get this shyt started.................
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yea yea, what insane said...
upppiiin |
Damnit, Upin.............
i need some slots open cause i got 5 open battles |
upin for christ sake...............................
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upin damnit
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Upin Damnit
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more upin damn y the fuk is yall sleppin on dis..............
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the most slept on battle in history...........................
upin damnit |
Wake The Fuck Up n Vote Damnit!
Uppppin!! |
Upiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
] sHoTTaBoY - Yo punches were hard and they landed... Yo structure was pretty~decent... Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice.. And your vocab was pretty good... 5/10 insane16 - Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also... Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out... Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall... And your vocab was aight too... 3/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
shottaboy came harder better vocab and every thing structure and that otha kat his shit was just weak mayn like on tha real vocab=shot punches-shot structure=shot yall already know who won |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
nice battle i cant vote (im in shottas crew) but nice verse both of u i wud vote shotta but as i said i cant |
opppps strobe change dat to feedback
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
flow and structure-shottaboy,insane gotta work on it a lot,one line was short then the next line is long, try to have syllables matching in each line punches/personals-shottaboy,threw more and they hit harder,insanes were ok and he gave an attempt at some metas but shottaboy overthrew it vocab-shottboy, insane tried with the last 2 lines but most of shottaboys verse was filled with vocab no hatin on insane both did good, honest vote good luck peace |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
basically, shotta got this coz he actually had punches ... insane ya really need to work on ya shit. No Punches at all, ya spoke about yaself all the way through. Nice Verse Shotta Vote: ShottaBoy |
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Upin.............
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
you killed him short i loved it it was just bootyfull i mean it you just killed him \ ..Claimin U Ah ''GangBanger'' When All Them Boys Did Was Run A ''Train''... ..They Fucked U n Beat U An U Still Wanted To Give Em ''Brain''... i loved that line man it was great |
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