Elusiv G vs yungster
 

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Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 12:47 PM.

yungster has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 12:50 PM.

yo i step up to da stage start to spilt my dope stuff//
he spilts his wack rhymes they so wack it makes him look lyk a puff//
hes such a batty crying on his mum coz i hi him hard with my ryhmes//
wack wack is his life he is the biggest puff of all times//
shit head,gay boy w.e u wanna call him hes ryhmes r so dim//
hes says hes good but hes look at me :) his gay name sud be kim//

yo yo yo yo...........

yo watup homie, u best baliev ma rhymes best b felt, like roy jones jr., i won every belt//
compared to u nigga ima mothafuckin vet, wen i c u steppin' all i can c is a present 4 ma sista, a lil pet//

i cant baliev u from tha uk, no wonder american cats dissin us, wen turban found u so easy to slay//( he battlin turban and loosin 3-0 so far )
im embarrased, even ashamed, dat u liv near me and ur rhymes so lame// ( he from tha Uk and hes lame)

i leave niggaz feelin jiggie, rippin tha stage like i was biggie//
u shudnt test me mothafucka, its like touchin a blak mans radio, its stupid, jus ask chris tucker// ( rush hour 1 he nearly pimp slaps jackie 4 touchion his radio)

this is over!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Voted For: Elusiv G

yo watup homie, u best baliev ma rhymes best b felt, like roy jones jr., i won every belt//
compared to u nigga ima mothafuckin vet, wen i c u steppin' all i can c is a present 4 ma sista, a lil pet//
^^^^^^ NICE PUNCH AND A OPENER

i cant baliev u from tha uk, no wonder american cats dissin us, wen turban found u so easy to slay//( he battlin turban and loosin 3-0 so far )
im embarrased, even ashamed, dat u liv near me and ur rhymes so lame// ( he from tha Uk and hes lame)
^^^^^^^^^ OOOOOOOOOOO PERSONAL AND A PUNCH DATS AN PLUS

i leave niggaz feelin jiggie, rippin tha stage like i was biggie//
u shudnt test me mothafucka, its like touchin a blak mans radio, its stupid, jus ask chris tucker// ( rush hour 1 he nearly pimp slaps jackie 4 touchion his radio)

this is over!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
^^^^^^^^^^^^ WORD OVA IS DA WORD HOMIE NICE PUNCHE AND A CLOSA NIE MAYNE

yo i step up to da stage start to spilt my dope stuff//
he spilts his wack rhymes they so wack it makes him look lyk a puff//
^^^^^^^ WAT! WEAK MAYNE OPNER IS WEAK

hes such a batty crying on his mum coz i hi him hard with my ryhmes//
wack wack is his life he is the biggest puff of all times//
^^^^^^^^^ OK MAYNE DATS AN INFANT PUNCH COME ON WHERE DA PERSONALS

shit head,gay boy w.e u wanna call him hes ryhmes r so dim//
hes says hes good but hes look at me his gay name sud be kim//
^^^^^^^^^ OK HOMIE BAD CLOSA AND BAD PUNCH

YO G WON DIS HANDS DOWN

WITH PUNCHES AND FLOW AND PLUS A PERSONALS

YUNG WORK ON YO PUNCHES MAYNE I MEAN DONT COME WITH DEM BASIC WORDS LOOK UP IN DA DICTIONARY TO LOOK UP SOME DECENT WORDZ

SO U YUNG U LOST BECUZ OF WEAK PUNCHES AND FLOW

V-G RETURN A FAV

~PEACE~

uppin uppin uppin.....................................

Voted For: Elusiv G

Man Elusive took this one no problem.
He had better Structure, vocab, punches/personal, and wordplay.
Yungster, your punches were weak attempts, no personals, weak 3-letter word multies at the end, and you kept callin him puff, lol, wtf is that...also your lines were off and there was no flow to it at all, I'd have to say that was a terrible verse, elevation is needed.

Elusive G gets the vote from me this time...Peace.

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This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
 

one sided battle

Punches- G
Flow- G
Multis- G
Multas- G
Personals- G
Wordplay- G

G nice verse. hard, connectin punches, pretty much good all round.

yung too elementary compared to G. not hard punches, no personals, and u need to use wut u get, not go min.

G:
"i leave niggaz feelin jiggie, rippin tha stage like i was biggie//
u shudnt test me mothafucka, its like touchin a blak mans radio, its stupid, jus ask chris tucker//" nice closer.

yung:

yo i step up to da stage start to spilt my dope stuff//
he spilts his wack rhymes they so wack it makes him look lyk a puff//" eh ok punch. best i found

v/G if i could vote

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Voted For: Elusiv G

Elusiv G-punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

yungster-yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

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Voted For: Elusiv G

G took this win he came harder with punches and vocab his structure was better and he has some QP so overall G got this one no hate yall just bein real

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Voted For: Elusiv G

elusiv G Koed this muh fucka heres wha tim gonna take on this battle elusiv won by lotsa liek the other guy didnt have a chance elusiv took this shit on every thing:D
punches: G
vocab: G
metas: G
multi's: G
opner: G
closener: G
stucture: needs work G
vote: elusiv G