sHoTTaBoy vs the gifted one
 

Battle Rules:

8Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 03:09 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

the gifted one has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 03:09 PM.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 03:11 PM.

Ill steal your life like the grinch stole christmas.
you on gifted's hit list, playa im relentless to hunt bitches.
Im the new cat gifted
when i spit your world crumble like the whole world shifted
You know im the Best in rank
I rap,while you talk more than a septictank
messing wit me, ill end it quickly, if u die u lucky
In da ring, I cook deez chickens in boxes like fried Kentucky.

Nigguh, I'ma Pop A ''Hand-gun'' n Have You ''Dancin'' Like Michael ''Jackson''...
..Lets Take Time n Check The ''Facts-Son''..

Nobody Can Save U, Its Juss ''One On One'' Like 'Flex Washington'..
U Had The Audasity To Step To Me Cause Ya ''Loss'is'non''..
..Rap Verse Is The ''Location''..
...But You Aint In Our League So Your Facin ''Relegation''...

I'ma Put U In A Lyrical ''Full Nelson''..
Now This Over U Can Run n Tell Ya Friends U Got Beat Down By The True ''Gifted One''

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Voted For: the gifted one

the giftedone just came harder in this battle with the punches and the mulits and everything he ripped this herb

messing wit me, ill end it quickly, if u die u lucky
In da ring, I cook deez chickens in boxes like fried Kentucky.
^ ripped him

v/gifted one

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Voted For: the gifted one

shotta boy all the way, his punches hit harder than the gifted one

Voted For: the gifted one

my vote-the gifted one
he had betta flow and harder punches.
some stuff shottaBoy said did not make sense but it was all cool.
my vote- the gifted one
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Voted For: the gifted one

ayo both was reall simple but i gotta give it to gifted. He had dat last line dat was a killa. Ok battle. No really good punches but the last one. Wordplay goes to gifted. SHotta your verse was good son i aint doggin u. Ill be lookin out for both of yall in tha future. Props to both. Punches....gifted...structure shotta. Gifted work on your lines ...they coulda been longer. FLow. SHotta wit soewm smooth shit props to both. No hate V/gifted 1

This was feedback posted for the gifted one
 

quick battle

punches- gifted
personals- neither
multis- gifted
metas- gifted
word play- shotta
flow- gifted

Gifted nice verse. kept it goin wit the flow, and kept me chucklin. try some personals wit your verses though.

Shotta nice verse but not as many punches as gifted, and the punches were the same when it came to hittin, so quanity won it.

Gifted:
"messing wit me, ill end it quickly, if u die u lucky
In da ring, I cook deez chickens in boxes like fried Kentucky." nice wordplay and punch

Shotta:
"I'ma Put U In A Lyrical ''Full Nelson''..
Now This Over U Can Run n Tell Ya Friends U Got Beat Down By The True ''Gifted One''" good wordplay and closer.

v/gifted if i could vote

This was feedback posted for the gifted one
 

gifted won. all props to gifted because of the structure. it kept flowin in my head. thats why i say gifted won....flow was better