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sHoTTaBoY vs Street poet
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10-15 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 09-13-04 at 05:54 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 05:25 PM.
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sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 05:26 PM.
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...:::Warm Ups:::...
Darker than a "cave" SHOTTA is about to try ta "bear" this lyrikal nightmare// 1 You witnessin' tha evil-lare of destruction, senile-glare like the "evil munchkin"// 2 I got him runnin' scared half ta-death next think u know he breathin' hard cuz i took away half his-breath// 3 Merkers-depth how far am i gonna go destroying this emcee until there ain't nuttin' left// 4 ...:::Getting Heated Up:::... "Vile-lyrics" of painful infliction goes "around" faster than a "West Nile-Spherix"// 5 Fearin'-this after hearin'-this starts pounding your insides till they can't handle-it// 6 Dismantlement of tha "human-brain" will leave you like "gays" "bloomin-flames"// 7 New powerful "reign"(rain) of lyrics "showering" over you ta tha point you'll never b tha same// 8 ...:::BlaZing:::... "Blazing" of this emcee while he sitting there "gazing" into this lyrical "hazing"// 9 These lyrical-"rayz" will leave you "lazy" to tha point your more of a "newbie" than your "baby"// 10 I'm "burnin" you wit my "spit", burnin' your face as if my saliva was "acidic"// 11 If you was a "computer" than i would be "hackin-it", and if i was a "dick" i suppose you would be "wackin-it"// 12 Floating in tha air high on my rhymes, like back to tha future i'ma put u in tha "future" or maybe just "back in time"// 13 Just cuz you be "slackin'-lines" more than tha "stitching of pants" but i'm gonna give u credit for fuckin' tryin'// 14 |
Man, I'm So ''Sick'' One By One I'll Run Thru Ya Family Like The ''Flew''..
U Cant Counterattack These Weaponless ''Attacks'' I'm ''Throwin'' Like Lyrical ''jujutsu''... Man, I'ma Set A ''mine'' On This ''BattleField''.. The Lyrics Got U Trapped n U Stepped To The ''Front Line'' n Defeat Was ''Sealed''.. This Nigguhz Sittin Here Flirtin With My ''Metaphors''... ..Payin (Rappers) Money To Get ''Fucked Over'' Like A ''Lyrical Whore''.. ..On ''All Fours'' Claimin Dick Is The Key To ''Unlock'' His Sexual ''Doors''.. This Kids Rhymes Are On ''Rasion'' Like Hes In A ''world War''... Man, Ya Records Three-To-Nil, But Ya Skill? You've Yet To ''Show'It''... Ya Live In The ''Suburbs'' n Rhymes One ''Word'' n Now This Bitch Is A ''Poet''...!!! |
Rashion? ...IU Dunno How Ya Spell That, But Nice Verse...
Upppin Ya'll |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
This was a tight battle. Street had some good shit, but i wasnt feeling the flow.. it was hard to read and got confusing after a while. But u did have good vocab, needed some better structure. Shotta's flow was sick... i got into it. his metas seemed more focused and easy to understand. need some better vocab i think. Honest VOte |
Voted For: Street poet
NICE BATTLE BOTH HAD THA VOCAB AND THA STRUCTURE EASY 2 READ...BUT I THINK STREET PULLED THIS OFF BY A INCH CUS HE HAD HARDER DISSES AND "BLAZING" PUNCHLINES BATTLE WAS HOT GOOD SHIT BOTH OF YALL |
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yup fa sho, the battle was hot, nice drop poet, holla if u wanna do a collabo or anythin
upppin fools...... |
Ok I'll Do An Callbo With U, Whats Da Topic//
I'll Start Typin And Post Tonight! |
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upppin this shit
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This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
lol @ sick one by one... ill run thru ya crew like the FLEW... u bitting.. CANIBUS lyrics... but u added FAMILY and not CREW.. lmfao...
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Yo If He Bittin Da Lyrics Post A Link To Prove It If U Dont Den Dont Say Nutthin
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no street, that stupid faggot bit a line an i posted in the forum that he bit as line....
so now hes trynna make up i was bitin shit from canibus, be serious, if i was gonna bitte rhymes wouldnt i choose somebody a lil less popular? an i supposedly stole a line from a track which is recognized as a hip hop anthem! its just lyin, seriouslly...i aint bite no shit, i know better than that... the fools mad cause he bit lines in our battle n i'm still whooopin him..... but upppinn 4 votes ya'll |
Upppppppin damnit
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Upin 4 Votes On This Hot Ass Battle
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Werd Uppin Dis An Hottttt Battle Here And Yall Need To Vote Damn It
Vote Or Die |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
street- noooooo. i cant believe u actually used that structure...i mean it was horrible. but other than that punches were ehh, personals were not that good, everything else wa just iight. work on ya structure.....5/10 shotta- ehh structure was iight, personals was coo, punches was actually good cuz that last line was SICK! lol, anyways u are certainly gettin better at this shit. keep elevating....7/10 RTF dammit...links in the sig. |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
sHoTTaBoY Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... Street poet Punches were good too not as hard tho… Structure was good.. Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
I was told 2 peep this so here goes No hate No d/r No jokes..... Shotta killed it. Man, Ya Records Three-To-Nil, But Ya Skill? You've Yet To ''Show'It''... Ya Live In The ''Suburbs'' n Rhymes One ''Word'' n Now This Bitch Is A ''Poet''...!!! ^^Stylish finish it had 1 HELLA kick 2 it like jackie chan in a box :) woot (poet) U came weaker then u did in the limited battle Just cuz you be "slackin'-lines" more than tha "stitching of pants" but i'm gonna give u credit for fuckin' tryin'// 14 ^^sloppy and isnt even a good finisher Uppin for this battle Metas:Shotta Multi:Shotta Wordplay:Poet LMAO factor:Both Vote Shotta by a 2-1-0 margin |
Upoin ya'll
leave a link n we'll return the favor with honest votes c'mon dont sleep damnit |
This was feedback posted for Street poet
chekin tha polls...
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vote or die bitches lol vote
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Dont sleep yall
uppin for votes, honest votes will be returned |
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dont sleep honest votes will be returned |
This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
^sHoTTaBoY-nice closer..... nice drop both u two street poet had adrenaline buildin' up in his verse- "old school flavor" bars ran on the next line but flow was nice....... nice job tho, both... good luck with this....
~wun~ |
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