DV8 vs Ill-Grammatix
 

Battle Rules:....... ....:CREW BATTLE:....
.............................Ill-Grammatix (KK)..VS DV8 (MK)....
10-15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no d/r votes..no hate votes..if votes are not explain they will be
..................disqaulified,honest n explained votes will be returned,
this is a crew battle if you do not except,you will be dq'd...
read the rules/line limit/n drop time........goo'luck ill'g.....

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 09-17-04 at 07:02 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

yo... when you say lines do mean actual lines or bars... how the hell you do a verse w/ 15 lines?... one of ya lines won't have a line coupled with it

Ill-Grammatix has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 03:28 PM.

I appreciate the chance to alleviate DV8
Ya intermedi-ate skills ain't good enough for drops I.G. create
Mock Battle Verses?... you pre-write! you thought we wouldn't remember?
Ya entered R.V. a loser still you think you a contender
"Pretend-to-be-sick with words" but I'm the only "Ill-Grammatix"
This faggot's a clone-a baggage of bones with skills extracted
Ya "Mind Kollidez" with mine-ya mental's gettin scrambled
Can't think straight... like homos with pictures of Tevin Campbell (lmao)
Keep ramblin' on and on about the garbage kats you blow through
They all noobs... ya supposed to win... but this post here exposed you
I coast through ya flow with ease... this text-tease (textee's)
Gettin' "clowned" and knocked down like "Ron" boxin' in "Mickey D's" (lol)
Nigga please... the only way you seeing me is in member mugshots
It must be mosquito season cuz all ya punches feel like love knocks
My hammerin blows leave foes stammerin... doze? I'll finish you
"Pop-eyes" using lethal lines with the same effect that spinach do (ctfu)
Miniscule kat... Diminish ya raps... ya styles beneath me
Whenever you want another "L" you know where you can reach me!


line 3: one of his first posts was a mock batle verse asking for feedback..lol
everything else should be obvious...one

Yo, GL on this shyt, D.

DV8 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 08:28 PM.

good shyt yo... thoughtyou had writers block?...lol

lol.i did thats why it took me like i think 2 hrs ta write it.....
i was gettin pissed off to...but ya good verse..

This was feedback posted for DV8
 

OOO FIYA LINEZ.. good spit by both... u rep the crew well D

uppin 4 some votes n ill return them..............

vote .................................................. ......

This was feedback posted for DV8
 

haha, nice personals man, uppin for da crew.................

i'll keep all comments to myself...lol.... can we get some honest votes here?... two hot verses waiting for a winner !

hey man... we got 122 views and no votes... i think 400 posts may have been a bit much for front lines... elevated frontlines woulda been better for that many posts... most of these kats in FL are either noobs or don't know how to vote properly

This was feedback posted for DV8
 

damn you tore him a nkew one on this one dv you came harded and you jus left him hangin

hol up... we got a pending battle against PSA... i don't wanna see none of that hate shyt!

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

oooooooh shit!

this battle was niiiice ya'll, real nice...

ya both really hit hard, exceptional personals n punches from both emcees in this one..

ILL, ya flow was right on point, ya personals n punches connected an hit as u planned them too, real good job, u got my vote cause of the humouress lines n the killer finisher u dropped.....damn good drop my nigguh

DV8 ya flow was siiiiick, loved this bar...
ya drops are neglected, you ILL? .......nah ya shits not even close to being infected,
ya got a false sense of being respected, here ill fix ya verse *DELETE*..!!now its perfected,
^^^^
dope as fuuuuuuuuuck man

but the rest of ya verse lacked the humour that ILL dropped, ya both prety damn equal on structure, punches n personals, u took the metaphore side of the battle, but ILL had some humour n connected his personals n punches pretty damn good...

ya'll should throw ya hat off to each other cause this was one close, tight, kickass battle, keep em comin ya'll...

p e a c e

hmmm,i don't see how you be votin on humour as the determining factor,?
a verse doesnt have to be humourous to be hard hitting...!!,not a very well explained vote,n ill-g im not jus sayin that cause he did'nt vote 4 me...lol...

uppin 4 honest votes......................................

uppin 4 votes people....................................

uppin............................................. .......

This was feedback posted for DV8
 

Yo, I can't vote on this oe, just checkin' the count...

Voted For: DV8

OMG!!!!!! DOPE ASS BATTLE!

BREAKDOWN!!!\/ \/

it was a real close battle. ill was leading in the flow category but DV8 was leading in the complexity category, and other than that, it was a tie. the thing i used to decide a winner was how many great (not good) punches you had. ill had 3 great punches that actually made me laugh (bars 2, 4 and closer)
and DV8 had 4 that made me laugh (bars 1,3,4 and 6) so DV8 takes the win. i gotta say, ill try to be more creative with ya punches, those are almost all semi-played. DV8, we already had a convo on the length of bars so u still need to shorten that up. good damn battle both of yall. RTF....links in the sig. :thumbup:

Voted For: DV8

DAyum...thas all i gotta say to this...both came real hard in this...some real ocmplexity in the rhymes in here both had good usage of multies punches galore...structure i'd give Ill Grammatix because it was more clean in my opinion but the flow on both accounts was easily readable...Ill @ times u self-G'd urself

"Ya intermedi-ate skills ain't good enough for drops I.G. create"

Like that try and avoid that...

DV8 got this purely because he used more personals and though some say links are played...i kinda like them...and D used this to good effect which in my own opinion won this battle but both verses were nice

RTF on ma sig \/

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

I think was pretty easy....
Dv8
You had sum nice vocab. But that was about it. The rest was hella stretched an mostly metiphores. You had personals. But the pretty lil Link design killed it. I hate explanations. I can figure shit out for myself. Overall, you seem'd to focus more on your vocabulay an smartness...with flow and multi's...rather than the all important basic insulting of your opponent. It was pretty. But that was about it. Pretty soft for a battle. Do topicals or summin.
Ill-Grammatix
Good flow. Basic to the point, punching with heavy personals. It's what a battle is all about. You forced this. And take the easy victory for it in my eyes. You also had moments of nice vocab and colorfull metiphores witch add'd to your verse in the end.

return with an honest vote here.
DV8 u said you would. So I expect your honest vote as well. another words.....

Dont be like everyone else and not return with an honest vote. Because I did not vote for you. ;)
here. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=150258
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This was feedback posted for DV8
 

fuckin rank ass shit! dv8's got this:)

2-2... good battle... seems pretty close so far.... keep them votes coming... by the way, I'm still on vacation and gotta wait hella long for a comp in this library...lol... things will be back to normal by like the 6th 0r 7th of October.

aight ill-grammatix ive been hit with 2 fuckin hate votes in this stinkin battle, i aint to bitter but i think your crew is already disolved considering manipulation has tried out 4 A.I...props on being the only 1 in your FUCKIN crew that gave a shit about the crew battle.../............uppin 4 more votes...!

uppin............................................. .....

This was feedback posted for DV8
 

woord... dv8 way better on the multis than our battle.. ya shit made sense!! and you got some nice punches in there... was gettin a bit forced by the end though... but a good verse - multi-wise... not all of em were perfectly syllable matched though..

sup IG... nice verse :thumbup: ,, funny shit.. lmao

aight we need more votes leave a link n ill return the favour/don't expect ill-g to,cause hes on vacation...com'on need more votes..............

need feedback...holla...

This was feedback posted for Ill-Grammatix
 

hot shit kid, keep it up, battle was to hard/close to vote on

lol...i guess..but all of your disses were aimed at Manip instead of me..lol....real good spit though.... still too close to call... even if I voted I'd have a hard time deciding who won....lol

This was feedback posted for DV8
 

meh can't vote jus checkin something...............

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

I appreciate the chance to alleviate DV8
Ya intermedi-ate skills ain't good enough for drops I.G. create
NO KINDA WEAK OK THOUGH
Mock Battle Verses?... you pre-write! you thought we wouldn't remember?
Ya entered R.V. a loser still you think you a contender
GOOD DISS I MADE THE PRE WRITE THREAD LOL FUCK YOU ILL LOL GOOD PERSONAL
"Pretend-to-be-sick with words" but I'm the only "Ill-Grammatix"
This faggot's a clone-a baggage of bones with skills extracted
DOPE SHIT GOOD ASS PUNCH
Ya "Mind Kollidez" with mine-ya mental's gettin scrambled
Can't think straight... like homos with pictures of Tevin Campbell (lmao)
OK HOMO JOKES ARE PLAYED
Keep ramblin' on and on about the garbage kats you blow through
They all noobs... ya supposed to win... but this post here exposed you
GOOD ASS PUNCH AGAIN
I coast through ya flow with ease... this text-tease (textee's)
Gettin' "clowned" and knocked down like "Ron" boxin' in "Mickey D's" (lol)
OK
Nigga please... the only way you seeing me is in member mugshots
It must be mosquito season cuz all ya punches feel like love knocks
LOL GOOD PUNCH AGAIN
My hammerin blows leave foes stammerin... doze? I'll finish you
"Pop-eyes" using lethal lines with the same effect that spinach do (ctfu)
DOPE FUCKING PUNCH HERE NICE WORDPLAY
Miniscule kat... Diminish ya raps... ya styles beneath me
Whenever you want another "L" you know where you can reach me!
ENDER NICE GOOD CLOSER
THIS WAS DOPE NICE FLOW GOOD ASS VOCAB NICE MULTIS GREAT PUNCHES AND DISSES 8.5/10

Ya lines waste space n shit, ya Konsept's laced wit distaste, I displace n erase your hits,
Your styles basic, ya only spit ill with grammar when lick’n disease infested novelists clits,
WACK NO REAL PUNCH GOD FLOW AND MULTIS HELPED
herb your trash, you write words i laugh, you phat? .not even when writing on obese hips,
fuck your scripts, you hot? you wouldnt even spit fire if i was lighting grease on ya lips,
LOL FIRE SPIT LINES ARE PLAYED BUT GOOD SHIT FUCK THAT I LIKED IT NICE PUNCH
you wanna go toe 2 toe? you betta be pissin cyphillis in butt ta match my sick ass flow,
ya record shows you lack blows,ya most accomplished wins from a chick dat no-showed,
LOL GOOD DISS SICK LINES ARE ALSO PLAYED THOUGH DAMMIT
i must adress your a mess,you honestly give new meaning to the word to meaning-less,
im not sure whats more pathetic.!..,your text of ya crew being led by a fuckin princess,
LMAO GOOD ASS FUCKING PERSONAL HAHA ILL OWNED!!!
ya drops are neglected, you ILL? .......nah ya shits not even close to being infected,
ya got a false sense of being respected, here ill fix ya verse *DELETE*..!!now its perfected,
OK WACK HERE AND ANOTHER SICK LINE OMG NO !!
ILL's GRAMMA punches like TIX, so my hits'll leave him in knots like little kids shoe laces,
get a grip and take ya trip, cause you don't pack a punch like hawaiin drinks in suit cases,
GOOD PUNCH BASIC BUT DOPE
your gay n strictly ass, youra dick dat wack n you aint in the army to be physical attacked,
its obvious your a fag, dats a skill you grasp, but you shoud really try stayin off that crack,
WACK PUNCH AGAIN
its fuckin obvious dude , but i know U don't have a clue, the only kastrophy in U're crew is U,
U're pussy, in a crew full of fems, that explains why you have momma in your name 2,
WACK AS WELL
who you mad at, your jus a army brat that try's ta pass bad spits as effective static,
its tragic, cause you could'nt even drib-ill (dribble) lethal spits if your name was magic,
GOOD ASS ENDER HER NICE WORDPLAY
FLOW WAS OFF IN SOME PLACES HERE VOCAB WAS GOOD NICE MULTIS ALSO PUNCHES LACKED IN CERTAIN PLACES AND THAT MADE YOU LOSE HERE CUZ YOU HAD SOME REALLY PLAYED CONCEPTS WHILE ILL WAS REAL ORIGINAL AND HIT HARDER.7/10
VOTE-ILL GRAMATICS WITH STRONGER PUNCHES THROUGHOUT HIS VERSE AND A BETTER FLOW

I BEST GET HONEST VOTES BACK THIS IS A LONG ASS FUCKING TYPING

Vote Reinstated.. ILL GRAMATICS did not post in crew forum until 10/12 at around 11am.

no doubt... thx for the feed back... i'll hit ya links up w/honest votes when i get a chance..one

let's finish this out y'all.... will return favor of honest votes

mo votes please........................................

can we get some closure to this shyt already? we just want honest votes...explained... so that we can close this out... it's a good battle... so rock the vote!