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Trojan vs untouchablekilla
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10-16Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no d/r Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-13-04 at 07:46 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Trojan has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 07:17 PM.
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untouchablekilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 07:21 PM.
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ya punches are like fans to pac...they always gon miss me...
i use complicity in punches,to lyrically burn this emcee... ya could put macs in ya verse,and it still wouldnt pack heat...* ya could vote for ya self five times,but ya still gon get beat... am treatin ya game like a fat bitch...aint no chance its gettin a look... id have to be high on some chronic shit...for both of them to look good...** am truly tht ill....im lyrically sicker thn somebody wit flu... ya lines played so much like a lil kids brand new PS2...*** untouchable...shit...looks like ma rhymes got ya wrapped... u made a mistake..dont ever come battle me without ya metal packed...**** u aint killin shit bitch...am twistin ya wordz round am bound to merk ya down...leave this fag lookin like a clown... dont fool yaself man..ya stupid..our mindz aint never gon collide... ya still couldnt be up on ma level...even if u took an helicopter ride...***** ya lookin straight at the screen..kid..tht puts ya behind ma bars... locked up..tht makes ya owned..like ferrari owns cars... *mac is a gun...packin heat..carryin a gun **id have to be high for a fat bitch to look good, and id av to be high for his verse to look good ***lil kids play they ps2 for ages,ya cnt get em off it.... shit ya cnt even get me off it...especially when ya jus bought it... ****wrapped..also whens somethins finished(its a wrap)..metal means gun *****hes in midz collide...helicopter takes ya high...and im on a high level... |
untoucabalekilla really a untouchable vet will never answer to threats
used ya verse to whipe my ass, and i still aint fellin ya text trojan you cant topple me, im about to beat ur ass properly The only way you could match my skill is when you literaly copy me my lines shine, rhyme after rhyme to go and blind your eyes hit from the blindside, not like u... hittin on bi blind guys* my style has readers eager to read avoid the drawnout suspense…/ your weak structure promotes little change like a DNA sequence its no lie u've been ripped like people with dead plasma punch's will leave u short on breath like midget's on asma fuck this last line,i dont need it,this is the only useless line i need I just type words like oxygen,so i give ya some time to breathe for the herbs that dont know wut bi means its bisexual which means u like males and females |
aight...nice verse g.........uppin this shit yall.............
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This was feedback posted for Trojan
yo, imma just give you feedback becuz for the simple fact i cant vote on a weak battle... i saw that you were too scared to battle somebody... is it cuz, your shit is weak... and it was a newb... and i heard he was talkin' shit about you, whacha gone do? do sumpin'... if you think you bad, beat a newb...
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hahahahahahha.....wot a dik...yes i turned him dwn....but if i was scared...do u think i would turn him down(A new kid...wit 0-0 recored n 20 posts)....to come an battle a member of midz collide wit a 3-0 record.......uses ur fuckin brain son.....i want repect..u aint gon gettin tht battilin newbs when u bin ere for 5 months........and stop freepostin cos tht wasnt even feedback.....u just proved why i dont battle newbs....lmfao.....idiot...
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lmao weak battle? haha d00d i could rip u with 2 lines stfu herb.... |
thnks g........this other guy whos new wanted too battle just b4 we set this up......and i turned him dwn cos i didnt wanna battle a newb....on my life i cn guarantee tht ur better thn him....so i obviously wasnt scared...i came and battled a member of mindz collide instead.....im a member of clas sic.......hmmmm...oh yer...i must av been scared.......lol.....anyway us guys who arent herbs understand why we dont battle em...and he just proved it......lol
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Voted For: Trojan
was feel'n trojan's drop it was hot good mets, and punches and personals, personals//troj [unches//troj structure..un touchable flow//troj vote//troj Vote disqualified for Cheating. |
^unexplained vote going 2 be removed
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thnks yo......but explain it properly............its gon get removed.........pz
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Voted For: Trojan
ya know at first iwasnt feel'n this to be honest, but as i read on it got better and better haha its like a stripper, hahaha, but yea you took it , but it was fucking close as shit...ok not really.. props to untouchable, u had a tyte drop but it wasnt as hot as this cats.. personals,punches,meta//trojan untouchablekilla u get structure return da favor i'm upp bby 2 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149300 notice how none his shit rhymes... he wrote that in 15 mins my ass haha Vote disqualified for Cheating. |
Louis Vuitton and TURBAN have the same ip lmao n00bs
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This was feedback posted for untouchablekilla
checkin turban and louis's dickriding noobie ass... checkin stats
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Voted For: Trojan
Aight, Aight... I Think Trojan Got This... Some Decent Wordplay n Aight Metas, Neither Really Hit Any Hard Punches, Structure Couldda Been Better Trojan But On The Whole Ya Wordplay n Metas Got My Vote.. Killa, Ya Flow Was Aight... my style has readers eager to read avoid the drawnout suspense…/ your weak structure promotes little change like a DNA sequence ^^^ Hotness Loved That Bar, But Ya Flow Kinda Lacked A ''Killa'' Fnisher, An Ya Opener Is Kinda Played Out, I Seen Too Many People Try n Rhyme With The Word ''Text''...But Still An Aight Drop Tho, Keep Em Comin.. No Hate n Return The Favor P E A C E |
isnt it weird that you voted against me and white_tee in both are battles ur blacklisted herb k thx
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This was feedback posted for untouchablekilla
I can't vote on this, so I'm just seeing who did...
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dick riders thats who
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This was feedback posted for untouchablekilla
checkin polls
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uppin this shit yall.............................................. .....
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uppin
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uppin damnit!
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uppin this yalll.......................................
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omg stop sleeping plz
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This was feedback posted for untouchablekilla
Wow, rapverse has changed since the summer. Anyhow, so you need to watch out for your spelling only because since this is over a computer when we read it it messes up the flow. This line we ill: The only way you could match my skill is when you literaly copy me. Those enterior rhymes gave you a nice edge: will, still, skill..."punch's will leave u short on breath like midget's on asma" very nice!
I liked what I read, I hold you to high standards as a vet. Overall structure was on lock, punches were pretty good. Not too much played verse (although this you could have done without "my lines shine, rhyme after rhyme to go and blind your eyes") 8/10 |
uhh omg uppin
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uppin omg stop sleeping
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Voted For: Trojan
aight i like this verse a lot better, better wordplay and structure.. i liked that you explained some of your punches and personals... you had a lot more metas and personals... no hate tho to killa, you came hard and did your thing to... this was a pretty close battle but i gotta go with trojan on this one and thats just an honest vote... he came harder with punches and personals and thats what wins battles... VOTE -TROJAN |
Voted For: untouchablekilla
dude man untouchablekilla got this one straight up no beefin on trojan's lines but you needed more work on the punches and not even any personals and killa is right you do have a weak structure but it still was a nice battle untouchable got a 8/10 and trojan got a 6.5/10 wasnt too bad i liked it Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
return the favor man uppin^^^^^
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uppin this yall.................
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omfg wtf upping damn it need some votes stop sleeping!!!!
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Voted For: Trojan
trojan got this it was really good, the flow,creativity,and punches,multies and vocab...it was a sick verse and had some really good punchlines that had multies to spice it up even more |
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^will explain more so my vote wont get taken off
flow trojan, i felt it was easier to read and more things matched correctly punches-trojan had more and they hit good i was really feelin the punches personals-none didnt notice any creativity-untouchablekilla i thought had some things that were more unique compared to trojans overall i think trojan got it it was a good battle though peace |
uppin for a friend
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uppin
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uppin this yall....................................
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