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hotshh! vs ~Ku$tUm-Im@ge~
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 09-15-04 at 07:45 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. ~Ku$tUm-Im@ge~ DQ'ed for PMing for votes: Quote:
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~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 08:45 PM.
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yo good luck........................................
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check in!............................................... ........
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hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 05:20 PM.
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aiight lets go.... kustom u good but.........
Me? Damage and Hurt You..Scared..Panicking in Rehearsals.. Leave U 'Stiff For Acting'....Like Maniquins in Commercials!! J Dot* as Denzel Washington....U 'Out Of Time'...... he had to change his name To finally See Dollar Signs!$$$* Like weed I break up this computer and Smoke the Internet... How Ku$tum only got 'hundreds' when he Hold a Cigarette?!!* No 'Spinach' for Dis Chick..Have U Runnin Scrimmage in a Ditch Add a frame to this 'Ku$tum' made 'Im@ge' of A Bitch!! Winning in Style, on da Prowl leave Im@ge Disemboweled.. U couldnt finish a word on Wheel of Fortune wit a 100 Vowels!! *his other name *Ku$tum(dollar sign....$ get it?) *Newport 100's for u non smokers vote fair if he won he won if i did then let the votes say so kustum good shit...at least u battle unlike Empire |
My punches leave hot ''hung-wit-hooks''.... they will have u ''hung-n-shook''......hotshhh! rhymes only have the *bare(bear) neccessities* like songs in ''jungle-books''.............1
This kid couldnt be hard if hot was playin with ''fake-tits''.... ya lines are whack and played just ''face-it''....they remind me of *Samuel Jackson* b/c ya rhymes are ''basic''...2 This is tha ''truth-booth''.... ya rhymes couldnt find bite if u were a''tooth-slueth'' ....hotshhh! couldnt connect a punch if he was playing connect the dots with ''fruit-juice''.........3 His flows a breeze mines a ''wild-storm''....ya ''styles-worn''......more than ya down-loaded tapes of ''child-porn''.................4 Hotshh! strugles with flows whether in low or ''high-currents''....Im like *old spice* im ''high-endurance''.... besides jack off the only thing he can do in 15 minutes or less is ''buy-insurance''..................5 explanations.... bar 5 it took him 2 days to post his verse...... my structure got messed up b/c i cant go advanced |
good verse kust but it took me today to post cuz i had to get u to accept yesterday and u just accepted last night how ima write a verse if i dont know whether u accepting or not. so thats not true but good verse my nigga ill be back on later
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nice drop its just a quik type no hard feeling uppin for votes.........0-0
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yo im not j dot thats not me................................
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damn can i up this shit? yo kust i aint taken it personal... i wrote that on my lunch break today an afta work i went to school to post.. but damn not ONE vote? shit...
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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
Kustom Image gets it, better punchlines, i didn't like your style hotshh! KI's multiples were pretty sick, elavate hotshh Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: hotshh!
Me? Damage and Hurt You..Scared..Panicking in Rehearsals.. Leave U 'Stiff For Acting'....Like Maniquins in Commercials!! ^^^^^^^^^ OK NICE PUNCH AND A OPENER J Dot* as Denzel Washington....U 'Out Of Time'...... he had to change his name To finally See Dollar Signs!$$$* ^^^^^^^^^^ OOOOOOO PERSONAL AND A PUNCH NICE Like weed I break up this computer and Smoke the Internet... How Ku$tum only got 'hundreds' when he Hold a Cigarette?!!* ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DAYUM MAYNE LOL PUNCH No 'Spinach' for Dis Chick..Have U Runnin Scrimmage in a Ditch Add a frame to this 'Ku$tum' made 'Im@ge' of A Bitch!! ^^^^^^^^^ LMAO NICE PUNCH HOMIE Winning in Style, on da Prowl leave Im@ge Disemboweled.. U couldnt finish a word on Wheel of Fortune wit a 100 Vowels!! ^^^^^^^^^OOOOOOOOOO PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND WORDPLAY'Z My punches leave hot ''hung-wit-hooks''.... they will have u ''hung-n-shook''......hotshhh! rhymes only have the *bare(bear) neccessities* like songs in ''jungle-books''.............1 ^^^^^^^^ OK NICE OPENER This kid couldnt be hard if hot was playin with ''fake-tits''.... ya lines are whack and played just ''face-it''....they remind me of *Samuel Jackson* b/c ya rhymes are ''basic''...2 ^^^^^^^^ HOW SAMUEAL IS BASIC? NOT AN GOOD PUNCH THOUGH KINDA AN FILLER This is tha ''truth-booth''.... ya rhymes couldnt find bite if u were a''tooth-slueth'' ....hotshhh! couldnt connect a punch if he was playing connect the dots with ''fruit-juice''.........3 ^^^^^^^^^^^ HA THERE WE GO LOL NICE PUNCH His flows a breeze mines a ''wild-storm''....ya ''styles-worn''......more than ya down-loaded tapes of ''child-porn''.................4 ^^^^^^^^^ LOL NICE PUNCH MAYNE EAGA TO SEE PERSONALS Hotshh! strugles with flows whether in low or ''high-currents''....Im like *old spice* im ''high-endurance''.... besides jack off the only thing he can do in 15 minutes or less is ''buy-insurance''..................5 ^^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL NICE CLOSA I VERY WELL LIKE DIS BATTLE AND DA PUNCHES BUT I THINK HOTSHHHHH GOT DIS BECUZ HE HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES THAT WAT EDGE IT A LIL KUSTUM U HAD GOOD PUNCHES BUT IT WASNT ANY PERSONALS MAYNE YO USE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS WITH DEM 2 COMBINE TOGETHA U CAN REALLY KO YO OPPENENT V-HOT SHHHHHHHHH FOR PERSONALS AND PUNCHES ~PEACE~ |
Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
Kustum Image- ya verse was nice as fuck...lol....but yeah ya verse was nice...yo punches were nice too some them hit hard but then there where some that didnt hit hard that much but were still pretty good...your structure damn i dont like it cuz its kinda hard to read...but still overall ya verse and punches got you my tha win...so you win for better punches and verse... HotShh- ya verse was decent...but yo punches were decent also but some dem just didnt hit that hard...some were funny...but they aint hit hard tho...you had some aight personals but overall i seen ya other battles and you just came weak in dis ...but overall keep elevatein... v/ Kustum Image... |
Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
hotshh!- 1) no, not played but weak as hell....4 2) no...not played but even weaker...3 3)uh uh.....u used only one word for the wordplay. never good....4 4) ehh, its iight could be better worded mos def....5 5) fuckin tight, this is the best....7 -23/50 kustom- 1) could be worded better, kinda simple in this form...5 2) no no no, not good at all....3 3) ehh kinda played but u flipped it decently...6 4)i really liked this one, not played at all...7 5)ehh kinda ok, could be worded better into a 8 or even 9 but....6 -27/50 v//kustom |
3-1 still uppin.............................................
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oh yeah forgot to say..........RTF....links in da sig :thumbup:
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2-1 uppin............................................. ...
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still uppin...............2-1.................................
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Voted For: hotshh!
Yeah... I think Hotshh! took this one... no beef tho Ku$tom this has nothin' to do with you leaving PSA... Me? Damage and Hurt You..Scared..Panicking in Rehearsals.. Leave U 'Stiff For Acting'....Like Maniquins in Commercials!! ~lol... I liked that one... Isn't all that... J Dot* as Denzel Washington....U 'Out Of Time'...... he had to change his name To finally See Dollar Signs!$$$* ~nice personal... That was one of my favorite punches in this battle... good job. Like weed I break up this computer and Smoke the Internet... How Ku$tum only got 'hundreds' when he Hold a Cigarette?!!* eh... It was alright... could've done better No 'Spinach' for Dis Chick..Have U Runnin Scrimmage in a Ditch Add a frame to this 'Ku$tum' made 'Im@ge' of A Bitch!! ~FAve line in this battle... lol... great personal. Winning in Style, on da Prowl leave Im@ge Disemboweled.. U couldnt finish a word on Wheel of Fortune wit a 100 Vowels!! ~Eh... shitty closer... 7/10 My punches leave hot ''hung-wit-hooks''.... they will have u ''hung-n-shook''......hotshhh! rhymes only have the *bare(bear) neccessities* like songs in ''jungle-books''.............1 ~uh... that's not very good... played. This kid couldnt be hard if hot was playin with ''fake-tits''.... ya lines are whack and played just ''face-it''....they remind me of *Samuel Jackson* b/c ya rhymes are ''basic''...2 ~no no no... WACK & the fake-tits & face-it is played... the Samuel Jackson line was gay. This is tha ''truth-booth''.... ya rhymes couldnt find bite if u were a''tooth-slueth'' ....hotshhh! couldnt connect a punch if he was playing connect the dots with ''fruit-juice''.........3 ~That was alright... I like the fruit juice reference... His flows a breeze mines a ''wild-storm''....ya ''styles-worn''......more than ya down-loaded tapes of ''child-porn''.................4 ~HAHAHA... OWNED... great punch... child porn... lol... Hotshh! strugles with flows whether in low or ''high-currents''....Im like *old spice* im ''high-endurance''.... besides jack off the only thing he can do in 15 minutes or less is ''buy-insurance''..................5 ~WAY STREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETCHED.... lol... not even very good 4/10 Punches-HotShh Personals-HotShh Multis-Ku$tom structure-Hotshh Vocab-tie Vote-> Hotshh... great usage of the personals... |
ok baby tight battle upping for votes yo kust we got a hot battle here.
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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
kustom took it he came wit harder punches and metas and multies his wordplay was hott and connected ery time da high endurance was hot good shit hot ya shit was a lil bit nice but ya flow was off and ya came wit da same shit only it didnt hit as hard nice drop but my vote goes to kustom vote= kustom ~peace~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: hotshh!
OK this is how it goesz,, KUSTOM, not bad but them lines were fucking super stretched and ya structure to ya post was all fucked up and made it un enjoyable to read.... SOme desacent punnches that were there just not that strong.... Personal department wasnt that good either,,,,, Hotshhh, butter flow to it, better punches use of vocab and wordplay, Liked how ya played the JDOT shit....... Me? Damage and Hurt You..Scared..Panicking in Rehearsals.. Leave U 'Stiff For Acting'....Like Maniquins in Commercials!! J Dot* as Denzel Washington....U 'Out Of Time'...... he had to change his name To finally See Dollar Signs!$$$ That was fuckin dope Vote Hotshhhh http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136598 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147770 Hit those up with votes or feedback FUCKERS |
Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
aiiiiiight............... kustum got this, more complex verse, with some hard hittin multies n personals.... i got nuthin against hotshh, ya verse was sick too...but J Dot? whats that all about... thats a lie, au kinda cheated to get votes, cause now people think thats ahot ass personal when kustum aint even J Dot.. so in my opinnon u automatically lose the battle for trynna sway votes in your direction.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
4-3 still uppin............................................. .........
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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
kustum - solid drop, nice flow and yeah your structure is weird but understandable, multis are dope and you came with some hard ass punches, nice drop....favourite line was His flows a breeze mines a ''wild-storm''....ya ''styles-worn''......more than ya down-loaded tapes of ''child-porn'' hotshh! - nice drop as well, good flow structure, wordplay and all, but your punches didn't come near as hard as kustums, nice drop by both but kustum takes this one v/kustum |
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