creaTivitie vs Phantom
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-17-04 at 12:36 AM

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creaTivitie has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 12:52 AM.

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 01:08 AM.

when it all plays out, the true Master had got this battle on Lock...
dude writes "creative" punches away from home, to think "outside the box"...
really in the end you battlin me is truly a lost cause...
put ur verse up to a mirror so you can reflect on ya loss...
imma have you singin sad songs, like you the bitch from the color purple...
if you run everything "around" me, why you aint in the winners "circle"?...
if you're smart nigga, realize ur name actually has a "y" at the end...
be smart now, look at how wack your verse is, AND DONT PUSH "SEND"!...
another smart move is to act like you never called out my intelligence...
or it will be a chinese meat shop, when we merk you "delicates"...(deli-cats)

* if anybody says THAT didnt have personals, i will personally son you.....:thumbup:

Phantoms physical matrix doesn’t exist, all that’s left is whack lyrics`
Verbal warfare penetrates ur soul; dis text god jus left u with a holy spirit`
Kid you brought death to your self…I just handed you the knife`
Changed his name, he was big till he found out he was smaller than life `
Damn kid lost your last couple of battles, just went on a loosing rally`
Mr. big C you the reason why kids are embarrassed to represent killa kali`
Kid just like the crew your representing you no longer exist`
Living up to your name, this phantom just got lost in the mist`

fucked this kid up....might as well say you were raped......bitch


Phantoms physical matrix doesn’t exist, all that’s left is whack lyrics`
Verbal warfare penetrates ur soul; dis text god jus left u with a holy spirit`
Kid you brought death to your self…I just handed you the knife`
Changed his name, he was big till he found out he was smaller than life `
Damn kid lost your last couple of battles, just went on a loosing rally`
Mr. big C you the reason why kids are embarrassed to represent killa kali`
Kid just like the crew your representing you no longer exist`
Living up to your name, this phantom just got lost in the mist`

merked this kid...i am your father....you have just been sunned

-_- nah, instead of sayin ive been sunned just let votes do the talkin...and i wont chnge that link cuz that will be fucked up, i m gunna change it after 1 week tho cuz i didnt even realize it still said that...uppin

uppin.......uppin................................. .....

yo man coo battle-- im just uppin this so Creativitie can get this battle closed with a loss or win-- cause i wanna battle the "Creator" LOL next-- and by the way with that kinda of a verse i dont see how you can be so big headed bro-- dont call it hatin either man-- im just being real

Voted For: Phantom

tight battle.

phantom you personals SUCKED by the way, bitch.

creativity came creative had a nice opener with the holy spirit punch. I didn't like the finisher though. I don't think it did you justice. flow was on point. so was wordplay. you got a unique style.

phantom had harder punches than creativitie did. both of yall was consistent and evenly matched but phantom had harder punches. both yall had tight verses though no doubting that. stay up, and VOTE ON MY SHIT!(if you will)

Voted For: creaTivitie

i think creativie took this one, with better wordplay and more creative lines. phantom had some nice shit,but alot of his bars was predictable....elevate....creativie had some nice punches that hit harder, and i liked his links and shit...he had a nice structure to his flow also. phantom, i didnt like the style of yo verse, and you personals werent too great...good battle people

lol......... creativtie? nice bite of my name kid...

Voted For: creaTivitie

creativitie
Phantoms physical matrix doesn’t exist, all that’s left is whack lyrics`
Verbal warfare penetrates ur soul; dis text god jus left u with a holy spirit`
7/10..gud wordplay
Kid you brought death to your self…I just handed you the knife`
Changed his name, he was big till he found out he was smaller than life `
ok..........6/10
Damn kid lost your last couple of battles, just went on a loosing rally`
Mr. big C you the reason why kids are embarrassed to represent killa kali`
.....ok 6/10
Kid just like the crew your representing you no longer exist`
Living up to your name, this phantom just got lost in the mist`
.hmm6/10
phantom
when it all plays out, the true Master had got this battle on Lock...
dude writes "creative" punches away from home, to think "outside the box"...
me like.gud meta......8/10
really in the end you battlin me is truly a lost cause...
put ur verse up to a mirror so you can reflect on ya loss...
gud meta 2nd line.setup killed it,didnt rhyme.5/10
imma have you singin sad songs, like you the bitch from the color purple...
if you run everything "around" me, why you aint in the winners "circle"?...
ok.6/10
if you're smart nigga, realize ur name actually has a "y" at the end...
be smart now, look at how wack your verse is, AND DONT PUSH "SEND"!...
not original.but aiight 6/10
another smart move is to act like you never called out my intelligence...
or it will be a chinese meat shop, when we merk you "delicates"...(deli-cats)
again ok....6/10.kinda weak meta


overall close......vote creativitie,coz he had personals phantom didnt......did u?......
u can son me if u like tho.....

umm...

idk if it's gona let me vote but,phan took this shit man,his punches were decent and,the other dude jus said shit cuz it sounded good,tryna sound intelectual n shit,didd'nt support the relitivity behind half the subjects he dropped man...phans verse structer was nice and flowed well also

fav line..the winners circle one

uppin this for the kids.............................

:( whats happening to the world nowadays?...uppin.

upppin for more votes................................

Voted For: Phantom

Creat...
Phantoms physical matrix doesn’t exist, all that’s left is whack lyrics`
Verbal warfare penetrates ur soul; dis text god jus left u with a holy spirit`
bunch of big words. All out of context.
Kid you brought death to your self…I just handed you the knife`
Changed his name, he was big till he found out he was smaller than life `
personal. but weak an bleek at that.
Damn kid lost your last couple of battles, just went on a loosing rally`
Mr. big C you the reason why kids are embarrassed to represent killa kali`
personal's. again. nuttin good tho.
Kid just like the crew your representing you no longer exist`
Living up to your name, this phantom just got lost in the mist`
good personal 1st line....2nd good metiphore as well. nice closer

Phantom
when it all plays out, the true Master had got this battle on Lock...
dude writes "creative" punches away from home, to think "outside the box"...
Lol at the wordplay. I liked that alot. his home...the box..lmao
really in the end you battlin me is truly a lost cause...
put ur verse up to a mirror so you can reflect on ya loss...
Seen this before. Not bit....jus played as hell
imma have you singin sad songs, like you the bitch from the color purple...
if you run everything "around" me, why you aint in the winners "circle"?...
didn't like the meti4 or wordplay here at all.
if you're smart nigga, realize ur name actually has a "y" at the end...
be smart now, look at how wack your verse is, AND DONT PUSH "SEND"!...
Ok personal 1st line...lil used..the whole send line
another smart move is to act like you never called out my intelligence...
or it will be a chinese meat shop, when we merk you "delicates"...
Not feelin the closer. get it but not to my liking

overall
Well it was OK for both. Neither had much other than one good line. Everything else was pretty Bland.

Ima go wit phantom tho.
His Opener was much better than Creativitie's closer. and those were the 2 best bar's in the battle.

This was feedback posted for Phantom
 

go Phantom...woop woop

uppin for votes......where they at.....................

uppin for votes.....were they at.....c'mon................

This was feedback posted for Phantom
 

when it all plays out, the true Master had got this battle on Lock...
dude writes "creative" punches away from home, to think "outside the box"...


that was fuckin funny...

Voted For: creaTivitie

Phantom...I seen u drop so much harder, this was not up to par..opener was weak,l winner circle line was decent, closer was ok but nothing really hard was posted, your flow was tight an strucutre was tight. you lacked personals an multies, man u gotta take break from battling cuz u are much betta than this.

Creat: your personals hit pretty hard, ya opener was weak but following bar was harsh, good personal...your flow was on point an structure was good, no multies but that personal was hard enuff to take this battle, so u get it by a hair.

Jus my honest opinion, phantom u gotta go back to dropping like I know u can.

Vote: Creativie

uppin.......uppin................................. .....uppin for votes.....

upppin this shit ...so you all can vote.............

upppin for soem motha fuckin voters.....damnn mna..

man i up this battle every daty but still no votes....please vote...

This was feedback posted for Phantom
 

really in the end you battlin me is truly a lost cause...
put ur verse up to a mirror so you can reflect on ya loss...
^nice, phantom.... lol

reppin' the crew nice drop both, up!!!!!!

uppin for votes.................uppin for votes.....................

Voted For: Phantom

ok~
d.j em~ya verse was good,good flow up until you came towards the ending, it kinda fell off(the mr. big c line on didnt flow too well) cus you added too many syllables, but you had good personals and nice structure.........
phantom~your verse was great, you had very creative vocab and punches, they hit hard here,and well written too, your opener was ill,nice personal on the name, ya opening lines set the flow nicely, and ya verse grew stronger towards the end to close this with a dope line(delicates), that was nice wordplay,,
phantom took this with his vocab and creativity,as well as punches........nice job both

uppin for votes....c'mon where they at..........we both just need two more

uppin for votes//..............c'mon where they at.....damn man./......

uppin for votes...........man how is this getting slept on.......

uppin for votes/........man why is this really getting slept on

Voted For: creaTivitie

Phantoms physical matrix doesn’t exist, all that’s left is whack lyrics`
Verbal warfare penetrates ur soul; dis text god jus left u with a holy spirit`
7...gud opener, nice meta but i've seen better from u.
Kid you brought death to your self…I just handed you the knife`
Changed his name, he was big till he found out he was smaller than life `
7...nice line, used the link for proof, gud shit!!
Damn kid lost your last couple of battles, just went on a loosing rally`
Mr. big C you the reason why kids are embarrassed to represent killa kali`
7...funny line, nice personal.
Kid just like the crew your representing you no longer exist`
Living up to your name, this phantom just got lost in the mist`
8...top closer, best personal of ure verse, gud play on his name.

29/40 (72%)


when it all plays out, the true Master had got this battle on Lock...
dude writes "creative" punches away from home, to think "outside the box"...
8...funny fuckin opener, i liked it.
really in the end you battlin me is truly a lost cause...
put ur verse up to a mirror so you can reflect on ya loss...
5...blah! weak man! and the rhymin was fucked up a bit.
imma have you singin sad songs, like you the bitch from the color purple...
if you run everything "around" me, why you aint in the winners "circle"?...
7...nice drop, gud wordplay.
if you're smart nigga, realize ur name actually has a "y" at the end...
be smart now, look at how wack your verse is, AND DONT PUSH "SEND"!...
6...nice line but the mispelt name line on creativitie is played.
another smart move is to act like you never called out my intelligence...
or it will be a chinese meat shop, when we merk you "delicates"...(deli-cats)
7...tight closer, gud wordplay again.

33/50 66%

VOTE: creativitie

Voted For: Phantom

VOte: phantom

Lyrics: tied
Multies: neither really got em going
Wordplay: tied
OPening:phantom
Ending: dj
Personals: phantom
punches: phantom
Structure: dj
Flow: dj
Originality: phantom

Overall: decent battle DJ --6/10
phantom----7.5/10

PeACE. RETURN THA FAVOUR COS I ALWAYS DO

Voted For: creaTivitie

i only give feedback on the better verse....

Phantoms physical matrix doesn’t exist, all that’s left is whack lyrics`
Verbal warfare penetrates ur soul; dis text god jus left u with a holy spirit`
^^^^^^^^^^^7/10 was aight opener
Kid you brought death to your self…I just handed you the knife`
Changed his name, he was big till he found out he was smaller than life `
^^^^^^^^^^^^^8/10 hot..
Damn kid lost your last couple of battles, just went on a loosing rally`
Mr. big C you the reason why kids are embarrassed to represent killa kali`
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^7/10 brought kali in here...any goog personal
Kid just like the crew your representing you no longer exist`
Living up to your name, this phantom just got lost in the mist`
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^8/10 good closer

i just think that em sce's verse was hitting more that phantoms...no hate..
nuff said..