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sHoTTaBoY vs Jay-Z
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-17-04 at 12:32 PM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. |
sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 12:34 PM.
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This DumbFuk Callin Me A Faggot An Callin Me Out Huh?
Thats Funny, Man, Real Funny.. Okay, Okay...Check It... Lemme Proceed To The ''Starter''... (Opener) Lyrically Stomp The Shit Out You In Ya Own ''S.Dot Carters''.. This Dumb Fuck Runnin Round Callin Me A ''FAGGOT''.. ''You Was Funny Til U Was Born'' Like ''Bob Saggot''... This Lyrical Assualt U Cant ''Hack-It'' U Lil' ''Maggot''.. I'ma ''Stick You'' For Ya (Rappers)Money n Be Like ''Fuck You Pay-Me''..! Dick Suckin Lips Is All U Got In Common With ''Jay-Z''.. U ''P.m.s'' So Much Its Hard To Tell Is You's A Nigguh Or A ''Lady''.. |
Jay-Z has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 12:43 PM.
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Wottaboy.. a shottaboy?.. man he knows he's going down...
Ya rhymes make me laugth & are krusty.. like the simpson's clown (illl) It's business. Who is this?.. I'll shoot the mac from distance eaze... U could only "WRAP" better than me if this... was christmas eve.. Call the ambulace.. this bitch dont even stand a chance.. he'll fall & i wont make u drop that verse... cos u havent even dropped ya balls.. & Shottaboy is a FATboy.. it's true bitch .. stop hating... AYO BIG PUN DINT DIE.. fattyboy over here just ATE HIM... |
aight jay, nice finisher, u had some aight rhymes
u still suckin dick, but nice finisher, very humouress, i liked... upppin 4 votes ya'll |
This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
HAHAHAHAHA, bitch ass nigga. Jay-z, you stole a line from MTV battles, bitch.
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LMFAO which line from MTV base you lieing sad fuck..
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he did?
what a fuckin homo, bitin ass faggot.. wat the fuck r you doin here if your just gonna bite fuckin rhymes? |
are you a fucking idiot.. i bit no line's he just cant take losing................
he dint even say what line i bit.. uppping for votes... btw... ya both wack for trying to get me banned with no proof. 1 |
i aint time for you im joining the class sic...
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Gay-z: & Shottaboy is a FATboy.. it's true bitch .. stop hating...
AYO BIG PUN DINT DIE.. fattyboy over here just ATE HIM... Locksmith VS Red Dot: Red Dot is a fatboy, his health is forsaken Big Pun didn't die, this bitch ate him! |
That wasnt bitten .... man anybody could think about BIG PUN LINE..
And i battled some Kid called FattBoy on RD.. thats why the boy thing came on mind.. No evidence.. the lines were COMPLETLY different... Big pun... being dead and him being fat is SOMETHIGN anybody could think off... But you gonna get DQ'd for cheating and readigng my verse before you posted yous.. so it's all good. |
Nevermind but the personal u used was on this battle why did u say that line he just said MTV used it.. anyway its not a BITE.. its SIMILAR 1 liner.. but NOT a bite.. votes... I dont even know who RED DOT is......
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okay, im not trynna get u banned...
if i wanted too, i'd have u dq'ed for biting... matter fact, thats what i'ma do.. so yes, u can be gone to ya little crew u bitin ass faggot |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
Aiight Shottaboy had this one locked. It was a good battle but he won hands down. Best Line - Lemme Proceed To The ''Starter''... (Opener) Lyrically Stomp The Shit Out You In Ya Own ''S.Dot Carters''.. LMAO.....wow. Opener- Shottaboy Punches- Jay-Z (that Pun line was pretty funny.) Multi- Shottaboy Structure-Shottaboy Closer- Shottaboy Final Vote- Shottaboy This battle was aiight, but it wasn't the best thing. Jay-Z, you better elevate alot, if you don't then your just being a disgrace to the name. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
yo u should take this all his punches arte played and his last line is an audio line ive herd it b4 this herb biting again....how old is wrap/rap presents line lmao....jay z im calling u out set it up bitch
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Upppin Ya'll...!!!
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
close close close but short got diss with his evil merkin-ness like he always has had Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Jay-Z
Jay-Z took this, was actually close tho. Shottaboy, you actually came well here, but JAy-Z's verse was better structured and his punches hit harder. My vote, you know Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
nice battle vote 4 shotta bcoz-
better punches better met better mul beter verse all together v/shotta |
phew it came as feedbck i nearly put a vote bcoz i 4got bout crew
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yo jay-z its tru ur a bitch stop hatin....
(no one could of thought of that line) unless it was just taken..... so shut up u got caught bitin again and dont talk shit b/c u think ur good b/c u bite from unknown people that are better than u..... |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
shotta had some betta punches overall,jayz did aight but his punches werent connectin,but did have better structure n flow....punches win battles n shotta jus barely came out on top with punches...shotta if your gonna write bars with 3 lines in them i suggest you try multi's only because it through your flow off way to much but i discounted it cause your punches were a lil better..... oh n shotta when you vote leave links so peeps don't havta look 4 ya battles,n you shouldnt give an overall vote determined on humour,like i said its punches n personals that win battles,not bitter....its aight.... |
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SHUT THE FUCK UP U DICKRIDER YOUR IN HISS CREW VOTING? IMA Have yo ass BANNED
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He Didnt Vote You Fuckin Idiot, He Posted FEEDBACK, Your A Fuckin Spastic....
You Really Have No Reazon To Be On This Site, I Suggest You Fuck The Hell Off...... ITS CALLED FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDBAAAACK F E E D B A C K He Didnt Fuckin Vote, You Fuckin Stupid Bastard Jesus Christ, HOW DUMB ARE YOU Want Me Too Explain One More Time? IT IS CALLED FEEDBACK, NOT A VOTE......FEED.....BACK, Okay? Understand Me You Faggot? Jesus Christ............................... Upppin 4 Votes |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
flow-shottaboy took it the syllabels and lines matched better punches-shottaboy,better punches then jay only one he had was the "wrap better then me...christmas eve" line, the simpsons one i wasnt feelin at all personals-shottaboy, goin against soemone who has his name jay-z should be good for personals and he won this with the s.dot carters,dick suckin lips multies-none,both were lacking this couldnt make a fair decision vocab-shottaboy, even though both didnt have spectacular vocab, shottboy took it he just had better words originality/creativity-jay-z, even though that "fattboy over here just ate him" is really played i still gave it to jay-z, with the christmas eve,simpsons,etc. it was more creative then shottaboys faggot,saggot,maggot lines overall i vote shottaboy he had more and done better elements |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
hmmmm .... punches: tie personals: shotta mettas- shotta multies - not any... or not good enuff to count vocab - none wordplay - jay-z vote shottaboy Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Jay-Z
Opener - Create, Shotta's wasnt a punch Closer - Create, harder than shottas Punches - Creata, Overall hit harder Personals - Neither had good ones Metas - Create, more creative Multies - Create, for actually havin a few Structure - Create, shotta had the mixed up line formating Vocab - Neither were tech at all Wordplay - Create, christmas wrap line is kinda played but still dope to me Flow - Shotta, had better flow than Create Overall you both came out rather weak but Create came to win with some hard, creative punches and neat structuring. Shotta, Elevate structure, punches and use more personals and multies. Props to both, no hate, just an honest vote in my opinion...peace... |
Please drop honest feed/vote on my battle as I have just generously done for the both of you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...506#post1582506
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Voted For: Jay-Z
ROFL creative got this one.......... this one wasnt very good but heres the break down shotta: 5.5/10 creative 6.5/10 shotta u needa elevate cuzz... ur shit is just PLAIN AND SIMPLE.. NO wordplay or anything creative: u needa elevate too.. only reason u won this shit is because u had a good opener and closer.. the rest was just wack Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Jay-Z
ok creative definitely won here. he jus had better punches overall. every line he attacked shottaboy even if it wasnt a hrd hit he still hit him good enough to get my vote. no beef but the only ok punch shottaboy had was the one about jay z and it was still weak. i vote for creative. |
Voted For: Jay-Z
creative definitely has this one won, shottaboy you weak Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Yes shotta is weak |
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