Lyriclesolja vs Street poet
 

Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 05:08 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 04:41 PM.

Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 04:44 PM.

Yo this homies lyrics are corney like a hick,
you digin ya self a big ditch bitch look what you did,
your the only dude on here who get dissed on his sig//

He a free poster wit 49 posts per day,
go to his profile and see its true what i say//

this homies lyrics are like his sig he has no style,
he gonna get ko'd and he cant believe it he's in de nile//

he a pussy and cant realize he gonna get hurt,
he joind on 9/11 now he's just waitin to hit the dirt,
and im gonna do it yall get ready to see a merk.

battle me? bitch u got a SHITTIER RECORD than the PRESEASON OF THE FALCONS//
like "THREESOMES IN POOL", i'ma "CUTTHROATS" cuz nobody is hearin what ya SHOUTIN//
u SPIT SHIT, like a BLONDE DOIN A HANDSTAND ur considered a BRUNETTE WITH BAD BREATH//
this battle is like an ELTON JOHN BEATING, cuz everyone will be here to witness this FAGS DEATH//
this bitch can't DEAL with my rhymes like a HANDLESS MAN PLAYIN CARDS//
u barely EXHALE WIND more like ur SHITTY rhymes are SPRAYIN FARTS//
i'll tear u to pieces and leave u laid apart, like JEALOUS PAINTERS i'll make u HATE MY ART//
shut ur COCKSUCKER cuz FAG UR SILENT, like PUSHUP BRAS, ur rhymes are a FALSE ADVERTISEMENT//
PRONOUNS (pronounce) this kid SAD cuz his WACK VERBS ARE CRYIN, KILL THIS "FUCK" cuz ur "BAD WORDS" ARE DYIN//
when i say bad words i mean u got a SMALLER VOCABULARY than HAND HELD DICTIONARIES//
ur FAKE ur rhymes that are FICTIONARY, like DEAD PROSTITUTES this TRICK IS BURIED//
u winnin this battle?? HA!!!! there's better chances of a BLIND MAN winnin PICTIONARY//

DONE!

you said ten lines man thats 12 you could get DQ'd if i wasnt nice........

So U Going To Strobe~ Yo I'll Create Anotha Battle And Take Out Da Last 2 Lines If U Are Able To Keep Dat Verse

na man its koo im nice...ill let it slide........Peayce

aight danx mayne votes uppin mayne votes

Voted For: Street poet

This one is obvious... Street took it without a doubt.
His metas were sick like always and his structure was better.needs to work on flow, some sentenses were too long.
solja are u new? urs was short and had almost no vocab or metas... you only had 1 personal about his sig.. but thats too basic, everyone does that.

Its all good im elevatin thats all that matters.......Peayce

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Yo Vote Peep'z Damn Come On Vote Lets Get Dis Shit Poppin Votes Uppin

Uppin.....will return honest votes....................

Word homies uppin dis battle mayne uppin

This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja
 

checkin stats cuz of one of street poets bar

Uppin..

Voted For: Street poet

yo this vote goes to poet cuz he had all of everything cept for what he laced on you had rhyme punches and structure but metas were a lil weak
solja- man you had some weak shit...wanst good at all no punches hit....you kept talking bout posts and his sig you gotta hit him where it hurts not miss throw better punches ans work on structure worplay and rhymes was too easy kinda predictable and was off topic a lot you got work on stuff man
no hatin tho man just stating the truth but poet this battle went threw the roof
uppin man return the favor either of you

aight peepz yo uppin for more votes

uppin in dis shit

Voted For: Street poet

now you know me and street are on bad terms but street fucked this fool up with every catogery posible but vocaly and i bet he still would do that if it was an audio battle

Voted For: Lyriclesolja

Man, this one wasnt hard to decided a winner either. Street poet, you went over the 10 line maximum with 12 lines so I would automatically not vote for you...but putting that aside, I will still critique you both and see how you did minus the whole DQ thing...

Opener - Solja, poet's was a very weak punch
Closer - Solja, poet's didnt make any sense
Punches - Solja, for actually throwing punches that were understandable
Personals - Solja, first 5 lines were hard personal hits
Metas - Poet, had more than Solja
Multies - Neither had anything good
Structure - Solja, poets was WACK
Vocab - Poet, Solja's was quite basic
Wordplay - Poet, better wordplay than Solja's

Poet, see, even ho you should be DQ'ed, you still didnt win, That structure was just fucked right up, lines all over the place and caps left and right, clean it up a bit dawg, plus a few of your lines didn't rhyme which also came back to kick you in the ass...Falcons/shoutin, and the last 4-5 lines I couln't even find half of the rhymer words for them...too confusing to read, you gotta elevate boy...

The win here goes to Lyriclesolja without a doubt in my mind...

Please drop an honest vote/feedback on my battle as I have done for the both of you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...249#post1599249
Thanks, peace......

Voted For: Street poet

open street
close street
punches street
enjoy street
the best is street
he gets my vote

his punches hit alot harder like the first line and he took all cata gories

get redy for our battle i think you might win tho

Voted For: Street poet

Punches: sp came harder
personals: none
multis:none
metas: sp

vote: street poet

just was over all better



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