Lost & Found vs Lyriclesolja
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-17-04 at 06:43 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

nah 10 lines is what we're goin.... and 30 minutes is allowed to key ur verse.

go tthat homey ?

check.

Lost & Found has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 06:45 PM.

Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 06:46 PM.

Yeah i got you.......get ready lets do this shit

.....yo.....

the sin of the week, hits make ya head spin at it`s peak
Im`a win my first battle against a fuckin internet geek!
in wit the weak, you aint even bring any honor in name..
& u aint even rappin....u fuckin spittin sonnets of shame
top it wit pain, i'm crushin ya brain, stoppin your thoughts
ur verse wouldnt even hit the ground.............
........................................if u were droppin it off!
talkin ya shit...u dont run wit the pack u walkin wit kids..
fists is hard..........fuckin hit you like a sawed off in the ribs
u drop soft, beat off your lines.......just`a make hard....
and ur lyrics are outta this world.................
............................when u hit the fuckin space bar!!

Yo this cat gonna get KO'd im to cold i make him quiver,
cause the pop of my fingers hittin the keys kills him like John Ritter,
i leave this dog runnin wit his tail between his hind courters,
i invade his shit like the USA crossin his iraqie barely gaurded borders,
crossin mine homie got LOST check it its his name,
AND then he got FOUND after he got dug up for being lame,
after this battle when he tryes to get wit a crew he wont lern,
they wont let him in cause i placed him on injured reserve,
i got my finger on the trigger and im ready to pull,
you cant beat me dog its like 50 spittin at Ja rule.

wow. that was wack.
uppn

what no one votes on this site??

upppn again man ..... damn dont sleep

Yeah we will see bout that..........Uppin...

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Voted For: Lost & Found

Lyrica;eSolja ur verse wasent posted so ima give this to Lost & FOund, u got the punches hitting hard and the structure was alright, decent wordplay

Removed.. wrong verse posted

Yes it is its right below his...damn.....lol

but other people cant see ur verse because u posted that line that said I got you, Im bout to post my verse, or sumthin liek that so his verse only shows and urs doesnt, u shud PM strobe and tell him to fix it and tell him to get rid of my vote cause when ur verse is there for pepole to see it.. ill vote again fairly maybe

Voted For: Lost & Found

um lyricalsolja u need to learn how to read

it says post yo verse in da box

do u have an verse=no

ok lost&found got dis hands down i dont have to explain

Removed.. wrong verse posted

This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja
 

yo, you might wanna tell a mod about this shit....

This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja
 

haha wat an idiot posted here

Uppin..

This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja
 

close battle

punches- solja
personals- neither
multis- lost
multas- solja
word play- solja
flow- lost

Solja good hard punches and good punchlines. kept me chucklin. decent wordplay but no personals.

Lost i liked your verse but your punches werent as hard, so work on that. other than that just keep elevatin.

Solja:
"after this battle when he tryes to get wit a crew he wont lern,
they wont let him in cause i placed him on injured reserve," nice punch.

Lost:
"u drop soft, beat off your lines.......just`a make hard....
and ur lyrics are outta this world.................
............................when u hit the fuckin space bar!!" nice wordplay and punch.

v/solja if i could vote

Voted For: Lost & Found

LF took this battle, it was a close one, but he got it.

Lol, that one made me laugh tho
top it wit pain, i'm crushin ya brain, stoppin your thoughts
ur verse wouldnt even hit the ground.............
........................................if u were droppin it off!
best bar of the battle, and that won it for me.

Solja, you came close but he really took this one

Voted For: Lyriclesolja

vote to lyriclesolja cuase he had better flow, better pnches,better ending. its was tricky shit!

Voted For: Lost & Found

solja not a very hard hittin verse,your personal wasnt very good nameplay,it lacked in creativity by alot,your flow was off on certain points like 4 example the iraqi boarder line...
nothin else stood out,srry did'nt come hard enough in this...
lost n found,nice verse consistent,couple lines were weak but you kept up with punches n i liked your closer,but lay off the gunplay"sawed off in the ribs"??.come up with something better then that but overall you had the better verse n stronger punches....
return the favour....
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Voted For: Lost & Found

LF- okay verse nothing special. The first bar was very funny. structure was kind of fucked with all them dots...but you had a nice flow with it. Lyrical content okay. but you got the format down jus a little with coming up with punches...

Ls- vocab wasnt as good as Lf was and your punches werent that good...nothing stuck. structure was off a little...but okay. flow just wasnt as good as lost and founds. and up your vocab a little. I didnt get that john ritter line. I don't get the punch if it was one....

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

yo this battle was wack...

lost & found : ur verse didnt flow at all...u pieced some line that could flow...and ur structure was slacking too....but i'ld say ya had punches and some decent multiz..no personalds and no wordplay...u were majorly talkin of how u gon to kill him..thats what i saw...gd verse but need a lil more work (structure,flow,wordplay and personals)

solja : ya verse didnt really flow too...ur opner was slacking ...but ur verse had atleast some wordplay..u too didnt have personals...but ur punches hit harder...and just like ur opponent ur verse didnt flow...ya gatta count ur syllabs a lil more...the only thing i liked about ur verse was the closer...that was good...but as for the rest u need to work on it a lil more...

no hate to both tho...


holla at mines (sig belo)...and be honest like i was right hurr!!!...thanx :)

Voted For: Lost & Found

this was clsoe but ima give it to lost and found............here the break down....

opener tie
closer lost
punches lyricle
personals lost
flow lost
vocab lyricle
structure lyricle

vote lost

Voted For: Lost & Found

woah okay
lost an found got this....
but dont use the dots in ya verse, i had to read it twice just to work out the structure, an thats a bad thing..
but yo, ya verse from what i could read had better punches an personals, more complex vocab, an alot more creativity
ya got my vote hands down...
just improve on the structure

an return the fave in sig vs wish

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