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BANG vs Raphael
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding No D/R House Rules Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-16-04 at 12:09 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
BANG has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 12:15 AM.
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Raphael has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 12:16 AM.
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Only person U could 'BANG' would be Ur bro...
And only time you actually didn't 'suck',is when he brought a ho... Only time U 'threw' punches was wit Ur fam,juss 'CUZ' U were 'FISTEN' em... And the only way you could win.....is if U hacked my system!! 'Smack' into Ur jaw...until you drop cold.... Shit,if U claim U 'spit' illness,your right,I'm completly covered in mold!! Aight half ass wack drop.3rd battle I dropped in today.Goodluck. |
I give to fucks about what you say
cus what you say nigga is what you say and what I say -You probably hear everyday nigga- I dont play no games- so dont even think about speakin my name/ talkin bout bang you talkin bout bitches- them gang signs you bangin - nigga keep'm in the pictures/ I told ya I aint playing wit'ya, you wish for win- nigga you probably got a bottle that blue genie be in/ So Raph-I-L pun intended- im wastin time wit ya ass- Damn why I spend it? Bitch nigga |
Uppin for dem bloodclot votes aight
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Voted For: Raphael
stronger punches,humour was koo....structure n flow was aight...some original punches but some played but koo enough for the win...bang your punches lacked n it seemed some had no point at all....try n structure your lines better n work on ya punches so there personal...no hate.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149670 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149668 |
LOL aight whateva muh fucka. This muh fucka gonna try and critiqe my shit when his shit is just horrible.
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uppin 4 votes... fuk i murdered this cat with my lowest level!!
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This was feedback posted for Raphael
weak battle nigga.
punches- raphael personals- neither multis- neither metas- neither word play- raphael flow- raphael Raphael u need help in vocab. the only, the only, the only, repetetiveness. weak punches so really just elevate. Bang u need help wit vocab too nigga. u barely had any punches in there if any, and work on your structure for those people who will count it against u. Raphael: "Only time U 'threw' punches was wit Ur fam,juss 'CUZ' U were 'FISTEN' em... And the only way you could win.....is if U hacked my system!!" decent punch. Bang: I didnt find anythin worth repeatin. v/raphael if i could vote |
uppin...^why didnt U vote?
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up in this shit.
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uppin this shit
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Voted For: BANG
BANG... Ya got this... not the stronget battle ya'll, BANG, improve structure, ya flow was everywhere, but after i read it u had some aight humour n wordplay...u got my vote fa sho.. Raphael, ya opener was a lil weak, never really had personals either, not that bad of a drop tho, the finisher was aight n u used metas pretty decently, no hate just step ya game up playa... return the favor in my sig p e a c e |
uppin for votes...^that was b/s but w/e.uppin
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Uppin for some mo votes aight. Holla at ya boy
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lets get sum votes yo!
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lets get some votes please!...drop a link..i will return the favour!
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uppin for votes!!
we need votes!! |
uppin for votes...leave links and i will return the favours!!!
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uppin for votes!
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uppin for votes!! leave a link I will return the favour!
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Voted For: Raphael
BANG NO PUNCHES FLOW WAS OFF NO GOOD DISSES VOCAB IS OK STRUCTURE IS OK NOT GOOD YOU AINT REALLY GET AT YOUR OPPENANT A 3/10 RAPHAEL OPEER OK FLOW OK PUNCHES NOT THAT GOOD BUT BETTER THEN HIS AS WERE THE DISSES STRUCTURE IS OK HERE BETTER PUNCHES WON YOU THIS A 5/10 RETURN HONEST VOTES BOTH OF YOU |
Voted For: Raphael
Only person U could 'BANG' would be Ur bro... And only time you actually didn't 'suck',is when he brought a ho... Only time U 'threw' punches was wit Ur fam,juss 'CUZ' U were 'FISTEN' em... And the only way you could win.....is if U hacked my system!! ^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE GOOD OPENER,,,,,,,,AIGHT PUNCHES,,,,,,,,,,NICE FLOW THOUGH 'Smack' into Ur jaw...until you drop cold.... Shit,if U claim U 'spit' illness,your right,I'm completly covered in mold!! ^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE MAYNE DA CLOSA WAS GOOD-NICE WORDPLAYS AND PU8NCHES AND GOOD FLOW I give to fucks about what you say cus what you say nigga is what you say and what I say -You probably hear everyday nigga- I dont play no games- so dont even think about speakin my name/ talkin bout bang you talkin bout bitches- them gang signs you bangin - nigga keep'm in the pictures/ I told ya I aint playing wit'ya, you wish for win- nigga ^^^^^^^^^^^^ BANG ELEVATE ON PUNCHES NICE FLOW BUT WORK ON YO PUNCHES MAYNE you probably got a bottle that blue genie be in/ So Raph-I-L pun intended- im wastin time wit ya ass- Damn why I spend it? Bitch nigga ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DA CLOSA WAS GOOD AIGHT OVERALL=RAPHAEL GOT DIS BECUZ OF HARDER PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW (NUTTHIN SPECIAL) BUT KEEP DOING YO THANG BANG-WORK ON YO PUNCHES U HAD "OK" FLOW ON HERE AND "OK" PUNCES BUT ELEVATE AIGHT MAYNE ~PEACE~ |
uppin for votes...emp i coulndt return the fav cause i dont have enough posts...
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Voted For: Raphael
Bang- Hmmm, you rhymed say twice and nigga 3 times..........WHACK! WHACK WHACK WHACK WHACK WHACK! I don't need to say more. No punches no complexity. Raphael- You had some punches, nothing great though. Elevation is key. You win. Drop some honest feed on my battle with x-on. |
uppin for votes...leave a link I will hit the up!
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Voted For: Raphael
bang: boooooooooo! lines were played at all times................. didn't flow smooth and ummmm wasn't even effective.... Raphael: decent verse overall.............. you had played lines but atleast you had some personals... flow was choppy.....and lines a little effective... vote: raphael |
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