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Raphael vs the_crazy_one
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-16-04 at 06:47 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Raphael has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 09:16 PM.
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I'll disconnect Ur neck,wit ma fucking 'crazy' 'punches'...
'Rip' U to 'pieces' and leave U looking like packable lunches... You couldn't 'spot' me....if I had the fucking chicken pox! Shit, you couldn't be 'on top of my game' unless U was humpin my Xbox... I'll b leaving U 'trembling'...and unable to 'ride'... Fuck wit me and I'll put your record...more on the loss side... I might be 0-0,but its better than negative 1... Shit,after U gain this loss and rematch,you wont just get one!(loss)... Aight,understand the shit,and blah blah blah. |
the_crazy_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 09:29 AM.
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being soft affects performance, in and out of battle, dude><
S'why Angela Devi knows she wants it...just not from you>< Cuz ya always come up short, never once stood tall>< Only Raphael I ever heard of, his rhymes didnt hit at all>< Ya freak family's like ya posts, I bet ya never noticed this>< Mom and Dad are the cartoons who produced a fuckin bitch>< He checked in killing characters, like it's just wasting time>< But what'll really kill HIS character, is his shitty fuckin rhyme>< So I hate a bleeding heart, like I hate going to churches>< They think there's good in everyone till I show em Raphael's verses.>< Nah, just playing, I know you's cool, and in the end>< ill beat you just like im beatin M.C DUCK for his win>< |
Voted For: the_crazy_one
flow-the_crazy_one, a lot easier to read, and much more put together not stretching one line and making the other a lot shorter so his flow was better punches-the_crazy_one, had way more punches then raphael, didnt notice any that big in raphaels verse personals-none, both didnt use any personals on each other multies-none, none of them used the correct multies and plugged them in to spice up their lines so nobody gets it vocab-the_crazy_one, better vocab then raphael, raphael seemed like we was just starting, he didnt have much vocab that could have been replaced in some lines, crazyone had better originality/creativity-the_crazy_one, both had somewhat creativity in some lines but crazy one had much more, raphael only 2 or 3 lines filled with something different,crazy one had lot more of creative things in his verse overall i vote the_crazy_one, besides the elements i marked none, he won the rest of them over raphael |
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uppin dis shit...
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Voted For: the_crazy_one
you klled it all with punches creatitive ness and wordplay good job dude Vote/CrazyOne |
Voted For: the_crazy_one
nice battle u 2 but again as i said the crazy 1 wins this 1 better pucnhes n stuff nice verse man ur kindda good the crazy 1 wins this hands down no dout about it v/ the crazy 1 |
Voted For: Raphael
v/Raphael. Crazy_One, your punches weren't that bad, but I don't think they really connected, I also likes Raphaels Xbox joke, so, he gets my vote. |
Yo can u ppl vote on my battles, links in the sig.
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up in four votes
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up in for vote s...
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uppin for votes on this battle and the rest of my battle i got linkz in my siggg
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Voted For: Raphael
AAight this was a weak battle Crazy-Your verse was off key and i wasnt feelin it at all.....bad set up no multies-very little good punches-weak vocab.-just a below average verse......Raphael-the first thing i noticed was you extencive vocab. props on that good punches no metas. but fuck it you merked him with the better verse in my opinion.......Vote Raphael...........return the favor with a non bias vote....me Vs. eveO its on my sig......down there |
uppin for more Votes for me shit headsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Voted For: Raphael
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hmmmmmmm.... anyway . . . this was a farely decent battle ... crazy i wasnt feelin any of your punches ... and it flowed pretty decent. there no need to use the: >< though ... Raph,you had somepretty decent punches and metaphors,so that took this battle ... overall: Raph |
what does hmmmm mean? anyways...uppin
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uppin this for votes
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uppin for votes on this battle and the rest of my battle i got linkz in my sig and feed back on open mics
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uppin for more votes on this shit
so can you please vote |
uppin this battle i need votes people
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uppin for votes...lease dont sleep on this yo!
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Voted For: Raphael
My Opinion Raphael one this in every category. Crazy threw some punches but didnt connect on all of them in my opinion. Good battle though. |
uppin for some more votes...
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uppin this shit niggas
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uppin this shit
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Voted For: Raphael
ok decent battle.. crazy one ya verse sound like a drunk freestyle. that angey devi line didnt hit.only raph i heard of didnt hit at all. too simple no punch cartoon who produced a bitch? more creative then the 1st two but...no..they think theres good in every one til i show them raphael verse. that was the only good one you has.6.5 out of 10 raphael ya opener about packable lunches was kinda weak but decent..that humping my xbox line was funny.... fuc wit me put your rec on the loss side was an ok line no real punch.. and ya closer i liked it was pretty good. 7.0 overall.. raphael takes it cuz he tried harder. good shit http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=151616 drop a honest vote on this |
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