ProVerse vs Malefic
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines minimum AND Maximum
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-18-04 at 07:42 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Malefic has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 07:44 PM.

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 07:28 PM.

You may be 'From', But you flow witta wack state of mind-
Facing me? Only way you get up is if we record an rewind
I had to status decline, jus to endure this "oooo enducer"
Proverse deals wit more cock...than 4 red headed rooster's-
They say you can't judge by a record, But this time its true....
Cus I'll be honest....your worste than that empire dude-
Disconnected....from reality,'verse'can't catch a dial-tone..
Dazed,Confused-n-bruis'd like ur avatar...pickin ur dome!
If you wanted to stand chance..Pro...U shoulda posted first-
Ur better off takin 2,000 RV and puttin shadow-n-mask on ur verse

*'s mean an explination is due


(your punches "draw" no "clarity" flow is up and down like a "bridge"::.
draw=cards--bridge=a card game)

(.::maybe you should erase it all and it will malefix your verse's bases::.
malefic was a haitian man on MASH which was on a base)

(.::all of your punchlines are scrambled and confusing like your sig::. :huh:
his sig is scrambled and confusing-you'll see after the battle :thumbup: )


that's all me

vote on this me or FIC'll return the favor

Voted For: Malefic

very great verse both of you and both had nice drops overall

Proverse: ya lnies were good nice line good drop overall but ya lines were a lil too stretched and out you got the multis thoguh but it really didnt help ya punches were iight it was ok and ya personals were good but you really didnt have to put explaining that much cos it ruined a rappers real skill and shit umm you had ok strucutre thoguh ya lnie flowed well... nice drop

Malefic: ya verse was good nice drop nice verse overall ya had the punches it was really good and some were funny and really original ya had some ok personals but ya structre was good overall and your lines and verse flowed well... both were good

Vote Malefic becuasse he had stronger punches

proverse could have won if he had more stronger punches and if he had less explaining

Voted For: ProVerse

yo pro i think u took it here dawg malefic dont even makes sense yo
give me your opinion on my battle its still open
Nutz_B vs Wish

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god damn it wasn't explained :(

somebody ELSE vote
but thanx anyway

^
Lol That Shudnt Count You Have To Put More Explaining That That
And If You Dont Understand It Then Dont Vote
Read The Rules

^it isn't gonna. ;) Uppin. -1

Voted For: ProVerse

yer unbalivable i jsut couldent see threw thos punches man i guess ima hafe to vote for you man heres what i came out with haha:laugh::
punches: proverse
vocab: Pro
wordplay: for sure Pro
metas: pro
multi's: Pro
stucture: Pro
flow: no need for this in text
openers: Pro
closeners: Pro
vote: ProVerse
return the favour honestly in my battle verse nutz b the links in ma sig thanks peace

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^thanx for voting
uppin for more

i'll return the favor HONESTLY now

Uppin

Voted For: Malefic

ok battle

punches- male
personals- verse
multis- male
metas- verse
word play- verse
flow- male

Male u had more punches and better flow. try more personals.

Verse u had ok word play, and ok personals. Try more punches though. Multis help 2

Male:
"If you wanted to stand chance..Pro...U shoulda posted first-
Ur better off takin 2,000 RV and puttin shadow-n-mask on ur verse" ok closer.

verse:
".::your punches "draw" no "clarity" flow is up and down like a "bridge"::.
.::all of your punchlines are scrambled and confusing like your sig::." ok personal.

v/male

Every line a had a personal fool....Uppin ne ways.....-1

Uppin... Again

Voted For: Malefic

flow-malefic, easier to read everything matched did really good on this

punches/personals-malefic, didnt have to think too much about them they were straight to the point,fast, and they hit so i say he won this aspect

creativity and vocab-proverse, malefic had good vocab but i picked proverse for this cuz it just seemed he had more words that fit in and was better vocab, and creativity i liked malefics but proverse had things original which was good

either way both did really good but in the end i picked malefic mainly because of his flow and punches went over proverse in my opinion
no hate honest votes uppin this...
peace

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This was feedback posted for Malefic
 

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Voted For: ProVerse

vote to proveerse, he had tricky azz punches, awesme, flow, the meanest vocabulary, while malefics had good structure and flow, proverse just had way meaner punches and better intro and ending!

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uppin for vtes

uppin this pease

Voted For: Malefic

malefic..u had harder punches as for me...gd wrodplay and personals..ur verse had a better flow and ur structure was decent..u didnt strech ur lines and that gives u a plus...both had a gd verse but i think malefic gets this for a better verse overall...

hit mines up...

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Voted For: ProVerse

ima give dis to my man proverse his shit was betta his punches were funny n went wit da flow both were good but proverse was a little bit betta

uppin for more votes please

managed to get two votes? UPPIN

Voted For: Malefic

punches-Malefic
stture-Malefic
best verse-Malefic
lyked-Malefic
winner-Malefic
nice battle Malefic win
pz out